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Published: 2010-10-06 19:05:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 3705; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 9
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Description        Malik paced back and forth anxiously. He was waiting, yearning to see HIM. His heart was racing uncontrollably. A shadow jumped down into the next room from the ceiling. Then, Malik's breathing stopped when he heard the familiar footsteps creaking into his bureau.

     "Malik..." He spoke softly. Altair moved closer to Malik. "I'm sorry I have not been to visit you in so long...it has been...three weeks....far to long to be apart..." He reached over the counter and caressed Malik's cheek. Malik kissed his hand gently.

     "I love you so much...."


      "And I love you...." Altair climbed over the counter and embraced the one armed man tightly.

      
      "But Maria..."

      "FORGET HER! She is NOTHING but the mother of my children! She is NOT my true love..." Altair said sternly as he let go of the other man. It made Malik jump. He backed away slowly. "I'm sorry....I..."

      "If only I were a woman..." Malik looked away, ashamed. He had been the one to approach Altair of these feelings...these romantic feelings they had tried to hold back. That was, until Malik couldn't stand it anymore and kissed him. They had never gotten farther then kissing. "Then we could be together..."

      "No! Malik, I love you....it would not matter if you were a man or woman...." Altair approached him and pressed his forehead against Malik's. He could feel the warmth of the other man's flushed face through his hood. Malik cupped his hand around Altair's chin and rubbed his thumb against the non scarred side of Altair's lips. Altair began to remove the clothing from Malik slowly, revealing the nape of his neck and shoulders.

       "Altair...." He was completely red now.

       "I'll prove to you....I love you...I'll make you mine....tonight...and every night I see you...you'll be mine..." He kissed his neck gently and then moved up to his lips. They exchanged hot and erotic waves of pleasure as their tongues clashed back and forth, causing moans and groans of pleasure to escape both men.

       "Alt..." Malik moaned.

       "Say you'll be mine...."

       "I'll be yours...."

        "Always?"

        "Always...."

       Altair picked the quivering man's body up and carried him in his arms, leading him to were he would experience the most amazing night of his life.
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13OukaMocha13 [2012-06-09 20:53:33 +0000 UTC]

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Des-and-Lucy-Forever [2011-03-07 16:38:21 +0000 UTC]

this is the only face that I thought would be good to describe this!

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Des-and-Lucy-Forever [2011-03-07 16:35:31 +0000 UTC]

hehehehehe.... Do you like for people to post favorite comments? 'Cause I have one

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Des-and-Lucy-Forever In reply to Des-and-Lucy-Forever [2011-03-07 16:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Favorite LINES* sorry 'Bout that

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OKLV [2011-01-02 22:18:09 +0000 UTC]

this is so wonderful!
the most beautiful altmal written

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thinkingorplotting In reply to OKLV [2011-01-02 22:24:26 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I'd say that....;A; but thank you, you are far to generous. To be honest I think my writing is poop.

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OKLV In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-02 22:25:55 +0000 UTC]

nu dont say that D:½

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thinkingorplotting In reply to OKLV [2011-01-02 22:33:53 +0000 UTC]

But it does. ;A;

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TrafalgarLawMadness [2010-12-30 04:50:22 +0000 UTC]

I love Altair x Malik, mfff

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thinkingorplotting In reply to TrafalgarLawMadness [2010-12-30 04:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Was this good, then? D:

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ScreamOfTheWorld [2010-10-07 16:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww...
" "Say you'll be mine...."

"I'll be yours...."

"Always?"

"Always...." "
I fell in love with these words.
So beautiful

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thinkingorplotting In reply to ScreamOfTheWorld [2010-10-08 00:05:38 +0000 UTC]

YAY!
I'm SO glad.

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XxMidniteRosexX [2010-10-07 02:02:48 +0000 UTC]

GOD FOKING DOMMIT. I LOVE THIS. ♥

YOU MUST CONTINUE! ;n;

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thinkingorplotting In reply to XxMidniteRosexX [2010-10-07 02:14:24 +0000 UTC]

xD Sorry, I only do lemon over note and upon request. xD

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XxMidniteRosexX In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-07 02:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. I see, I see. :U

Well that's not really safe for me... D: My dad's a computer wiz and he might find it! ;n;

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thinkingorplotting In reply to XxMidniteRosexX [2010-10-07 02:55:58 +0000 UTC]

Daw, I'm sorry. >': My parents are pretty loose with me, cause they know I wouldn't give out a lot of info.

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XxMidniteRosexX In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-07 03:36:09 +0000 UTC]

Lucky Ducky. ;m;

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thinkingorplotting In reply to XxMidniteRosexX [2010-10-07 03:36:45 +0000 UTC]

xD
Hrm, well I'm sure your dad trusts you, he is just worried for your safety.

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XxMidniteRosexX In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-07 19:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Huh....?

OH. NO, NO, NO. I MEANT THE LEMON. LOL. xD

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thinkingorplotting In reply to XxMidniteRosexX [2010-10-08 00:10:07 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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oONeko-ChanOo [2010-10-07 00:03:28 +0000 UTC]

I think my heart stopped beating, but in a good way xD, I squealed very fangirl like when I read this!

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thinkingorplotting In reply to oONeko-ChanOo [2010-10-07 00:05:14 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!!!!!!!!! <3

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oONeko-ChanOo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-07 00:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Yuss, and be aware for the next couple of days, for I will hunt down all your writings, and comment! Beware the commenting... it will flood your inbox xD... tru fax lol

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thinkingorplotting In reply to oONeko-ChanOo [2010-10-07 00:16:32 +0000 UTC]

YUSH!
I LOVE COMMENTS! <3

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oONeko-ChanOo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-07 00:49:45 +0000 UTC]

good, expect many lol <-- plan laugh... it'll crop up every now and then xD

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thinkingorplotting In reply to oONeko-ChanOo [2010-10-07 00:50:35 +0000 UTC]

XD

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oONeko-ChanOo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-07 00:54:14 +0000 UTC]

well, not just yet, but tomorrow, expect many comments! yuss :333 lulz

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thinkingorplotting In reply to oONeko-ChanOo [2010-10-07 00:54:51 +0000 UTC]

YAYZ.

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oONeko-ChanOo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-07 21:16:16 +0000 UTC]

It is yesterdays tommorrow today... you'll get comments xD

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PikoLove [2010-10-06 22:51:17 +0000 UTC]

Screw Maria. She's nothing but a baby oven o_o

Just kidding, I'm also just a baby oven but Alty/Mal forever XD

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thinkingorplotting In reply to PikoLove [2010-10-06 22:53:47 +0000 UTC]

xDDDD
Did you like it?
YUSH! MARIA IS A BABY OVEN.
But you are cool baby oven for shipping this pairing. xD
I have a few more Alt/Mal stories if you wanna check them out. :3
Feedback from people who read my stuff is more important to me the favorites.

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PikoLove In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 22:59:51 +0000 UTC]

XD I loved it! Anything Alty/Mal is hot o_o
I will check out your other works!
<3

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thinkingorplotting In reply to PikoLove [2010-10-06 23:03:06 +0000 UTC]

xDDDD Indeed, Alt/Mal IS amazing. Thank you SO much! I hope you can enjoy my current works and future works.
And thank you for the watch! <3
I LOVE Alt/Mal, but my favorite is Shaun and Desmond.

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PikoLove In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 23:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! Their bickering always gets to me XD

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Deathgirl456 [2010-10-06 21:07:35 +0000 UTC]

bow chika wa wa! made me VERY happy

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thinkingorplotting In reply to Deathgirl456 [2010-10-06 21:13:36 +0000 UTC]

xD
I'm glad.

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TheAlchemicNinja [2010-10-06 20:58:50 +0000 UTC]

YESSSSSSSSS.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to TheAlchemicNinja [2010-10-06 20:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Is that good? xD

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TheAlchemicNinja In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 21:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Um. DUH.
Delicious AltMal fanfics provide the fastest route to my extremely geeky heart. And you did such a great job writing the backstory of that picture.

I HAVE TO SAY I'M COMPLETELY INFATUATED BY YOUR STORIES NOW.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to TheAlchemicNinja [2010-10-06 21:14:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, although I don't know if the deserve such praise.They really aren't that good.

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TheAlchemicNinja In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 22:47:34 +0000 UTC]

Don't say that! > 3<
You write wonderfully. Sure, you could improve a few things, but I really like your style either way. The short chapters you write make it easier for me to read and understand your stories.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to TheAlchemicNinja [2010-10-06 22:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. <--- Tears of joy.
I just...I don't know. I lack confidence.

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TheAlchemicNinja In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 23:16:17 +0000 UTC]

It's 'kay. I lack confidence with my arts. Everyone I know irl is like OMG YOU'RE SO GOOD BE A COMIC ARTISTTTTTT and I'm like NUUUUUUUUU I DON'T HAS SKILLS.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to TheAlchemicNinja [2010-10-06 23:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Aw, I think you have skills!
Hrm, everyone is their own critique.

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TheAlchemicNinja In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 23:22:57 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, thanks~
Very true.

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thinkingorplotting In reply to TheAlchemicNinja [2010-10-06 23:23:39 +0000 UTC]

<3

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TheAlchemicNinja In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 23:27:29 +0000 UTC]

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thinkingorplotting In reply to TheAlchemicNinja [2010-10-06 23:29:26 +0000 UTC]

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TheAlchemicNinja In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 23:33:50 +0000 UTC]

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