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If only. If only he was smarter then. Wiser. Why, why did he have to be so stupid? And Malik paid such a high price. Kadar, poor Kadar. He paid the highest price of all: his young life. So many regrets, so many innocent lives.So much pain. So much hurt.He knew that he couldn't do anything. He couldn't give Malik back his arm or revive Kadar,but his heart wrenched every single time he saw that familiar tanned face. He would give anything to right those wrongs,but he knew an opportunity like that would never surface. Even so he hoped. Hoped for a chance to redeem himself.
"How may I help you, Brother Altair?" Malik's calm voice sent shivers down Altair's spine.
"I'm so sorry....." Altair whimpered out. His voice was barely audible to himself, let alone Malik.
"Speak up, I can not understand you." Malik said with a concerned tone.
"Forgive me, for everything. For Kadar, for your arm, for always being how I am...I....forgive me." Altair pulled away, realizing what he just said most likely shocked Malik beyond all sense.
"You...you really mean that, don't you?" Malik looked deep into Altair's eyes.....into his soul. His hand gently reached for Altair's shoulder. The hooded assassin pulled farther back, not wanting to reveal the tears that stained his tan cheeks. "Please, look at me...."
"I am so...so sorry. I know I can never do anything or say anything that will make you forgive me,but I-" Altair inched ever so closer to Malik.
Malik's gentle hand traced Altair's face has another tear rolled down. "I forgive you, for everything, you needn't say anymore." A slight smile overtook his lips.
Altair leaned over gently, embracing this amazing forgiving man. "I will always be there for you, no matter what."
"Thank you......"
Finally, finally. He can express his feelings and correct the mistakes he made. Finally, finally; this assassin's heart is one step closer to peace.
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Comments: 42
ColdWillo [2013-08-11 19:55:07 +0000 UTC]
i love it, wonderfully written with barely a hint of occ
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TeamLeo295 [2013-05-19 13:45:27 +0000 UTC]
This is sweet
This is the only thing of yours I've read and I already think your an amazing writer
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Dark-Assassin-Kat [2013-02-20 04:37:37 +0000 UTC]
Well...now you can't love him, Malik. You can't deny Altaïr. You can't. It's illegal. ;-; It's a law to love him.
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Minana-Alvaraldo [2011-03-23 11:13:03 +0000 UTC]
awww, Even more reason for me to love altair :3
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Minana-Alvaraldo [2011-03-25 01:22:51 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you.
He is a lovable guy, ain't he?
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Minana-Alvaraldo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-25 01:35:41 +0000 UTC]
of course now for altair to forgive me for kidnapping him....
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Minana-Alvaraldo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-25 01:50:51 +0000 UTC]
I think he will forgive me after I play doctor.....[my healing specilties: healing egos] O3O
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Minana-Alvaraldo [2011-03-25 01:52:24 +0000 UTC]
LOL
I'd focus on a little sexual healing.
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Minana-Alvaraldo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-25 01:55:38 +0000 UTC]
What do you think EGO means..... well my definition of ego for men.....
[ I don't knw any mind healing.....]
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Minana-Alvaraldo [2011-03-25 01:57:00 +0000 UTC]
LOLDFDNJBVGFNBVKCL LOL
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Minana-Alvaraldo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-25 01:58:55 +0000 UTC]
i only understood LOL in that post.........
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Minana-Alvaraldo [2011-03-25 02:00:04 +0000 UTC]
That was me laughing out loud and slamming on the keyboard. xD
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Minana-Alvaraldo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-25 02:06:32 +0000 UTC]
oh[looks sad].....[then busts out laughing]LOLLIES!![im making this face!> ]
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Minana-Alvaraldo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-26 03:03:20 +0000 UTC]
lollies, hey we should work together and make a story!
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thinkingorplotting In reply to hockeyalchemist [2011-03-11 06:08:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. <3
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hockeyalchemist In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-11 13:45:17 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome mate ^^
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TechnoShima In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-17 05:31:32 +0000 UTC]
if you make another to follow after this one, I will so totally be stalking you to read it :3
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thinkingorplotting In reply to TechnoShima [2010-10-17 05:35:20 +0000 UTC]
XD
Well, you can ALWAYS stalk me. xD
I just haven't written much this weekend since I'm sick,but I DID make a yaoi version of this.
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TechnoShima In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-17 05:45:08 +0000 UTC]
As soon as Yaoi is mentioned, you have my full and undevided attention :3 ~<3
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thinkingorplotting In reply to TechnoShima [2010-10-17 05:46:20 +0000 UTC]
XD
RIGHT HERE:[link]
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Kumagorochan [2010-10-06 12:14:53 +0000 UTC]
Nawwwwwwwwww... :'D I feel like drawing something for this now.......maybe I will...... later, or tomorrow..... :''''D
Altaïr and Malik =
And THIS ONE WAS FRIKKIN GOOD!! D8 YOU LIED TO ME BEFORE, YOU BASTARD!!!
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kumagorochan [2010-10-06 15:52:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. xDDD
But I still need A LOT of improvement.
<--- Tears of joy. I can't believe someone would actually draw something cause of something I wrote.
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Kumagorochan In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-07 10:29:33 +0000 UTC]
Well....maybe....but I think you're really good already, so I'm sure you'll get truly AWESOME if you get any better!!!
Oh, that icon I hope my fanart won't disappoint! :''D
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Kumagorochan [2010-10-07 11:34:47 +0000 UTC]
Daw, thankies.
I doubt any art of yours could disappoint. xD
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Kumagorochan In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-11 17:17:27 +0000 UTC]
I doubt your doubt, hah! XD *lol* No, but seriously, I will do my best! XDD
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Serveris7 [2010-09-26 01:20:14 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwww that is very cute and cool nice work, I like it a lot!!!!
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Bampire [2010-09-22 04:28:44 +0000 UTC]
I hope that's good. xD
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