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This was a rather strange predicament Altair was in. Why was HE the one being PROTECTED? Why was he the one on the ground, bleeding profusely from his stomach, barely able to move? It all had happened so quickly. All he could think of was the sharp pain that shot up from his stomach to his throat. He remembered running and climbing. He clearly wasn't thinking because he dropped his sword to grab his stomach and stop the bleeding. Bad idea. And how....how did Malik get involved in this? However it happened, he and Altair were now stuck on the roof of an exceptionally tall building. If one were to fall from this height, they'd be finished."Look it, surrender yourself, Assassins! And tell us your next target. Maybe you will be spared or at least granted a quick death. You are completely outnumbered...." One of the several Templars that encircled them mustered out. He snickered manically. "The only defense you have is this one-armed man? Pathetic...."
"My one arm as more then enough skill to kill you all...and I WON'T let you harm him anymore!" Malik shouted back, readying his sword for battle.
Altair began to feel darkness shrouding him....he just wanted to close his eyes and sleep. His head began nodding off. Malik noticed this behavior out of the corner of his eye. No...he couldn't let someone else precious to him die. "Altair! Stay alert!"
Soon, the battle began. Swiftly dodging any enemy attacks, Malik dispatched two of these nuisances. He may have lost an arm, but his determination and skill weren't diminished. A few more good swings and counters and these men would easily be taken care of. That was until one of them had a hold of Altair. Holding him by the throat, and lifting him up. The man reared back his blade, bound set on finishing the injured assassin. Altair tried and tried, but his body was far to weak.
"NOOOO!" Malik screamed. The distraction made him pay the highest price. That one split second changed it all. While Malik ran towards Altair who was dropped back on the ground, a blade was driven through his back, appearing out of his stomach. "Ugnh..." was the only noise that could escape his lips. His attacker pulled out the blade and grabbed him by his shirt, before pushing him off the side of the building.
Time seemed to slow down. No noise escaped Malik's lips. Altair crawled over the edge to see his dearest friend, laying in his own blood. The crimson liquid seemed to form a beautiful swirl like pattern around his body. His face was completely unharmed. His lips...they almost seemed to be curled in a smile, or maybe it was all in Altair's mind. Malik's murderer stepped on Altair's back, caused him to gasp from the pain. Blood still dripped from his wound. The man grounded his foot deeper into his aching back.
"Tell us what we need to know, and we'll make it quick. You'll join your little friend soon enough..." Altair mustered up enough strength to not only push this bastard off of him,but to stumble to his feet.
"You are right, I will join him soon,but I'll never tell you what you desire..." Altair began backing up slowly. "I'll be with you soon, Malik...." He said to himself, before letting his legs slip out from beneath him. The assassin landed next to Malik, almost perfectly facing him. His eyes closed...he was dead. Their blood seemed to mingle together for many moments before citizens gathered around their dead bodies, gasping and crying.
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Comments: 44
fearonpenneth [2012-06-11 06:48:01 +0000 UTC]
I think it was done perfectly for what was going on in the scene. Sad that they died but well written.
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AskShirli [2010-12-14 22:44:55 +0000 UTC]
Damn killer. YOU DAMN KILLER DID YOU HEAR THAT?!?!
Ok, you killed Altair.
But why Malik!?!?!?! I love him!!!
Beautiful and sad story.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to AskShirli [2010-12-14 23:56:57 +0000 UTC]
T-thank you, I think...check out the other version and you might be happier.
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AskShirli In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-12-15 16:02:07 +0000 UTC]
I saw the Yaoi one, but but but.....
I WANT THEM ALIVE!!! T____________T
But you really good on making storys...
Still hate you! xD
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Akatsukicerberus In reply to AskShirli [2011-02-16 18:08:08 +0000 UTC]
=_=''... Don't be so mean, jeesh..
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thinkingorplotting In reply to AskShirli [2010-12-15 20:56:12 +0000 UTC]
WHY THANK YOU.
AND SAD FACE. ;A;
AT LEAST IT WASN'T VERY GORY LIKE MY OTHER STUFF.
ALL OF MY STUFF IS EITHER GORY, DEPRESSING, OR FLUFF. XD
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yaoiftw143 [2010-12-12 02:30:16 +0000 UTC]
they died......waaaaahh.......
this made me cry.......but when Altair said this part;"You are right, I will join him soon,but I'll never tell you what you desire..." Altair began backing up slowly. "I'll be with you soon, Malik...."
this made me blush and squeal.....I U!
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thinkingorplotting In reply to yaoiftw143 [2010-12-13 00:30:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! If you want a somewhat happier ending, you can always check out the yaoi version.
I'm so glad people are still reading and enjoying this! Thank you!
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Miss-Mallow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-24 20:37:22 +0000 UTC]
ur a very good writer though
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Miss-Mallow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-24 20:58:07 +0000 UTC]
not a problem babe
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Miss-Mallow [2010-10-24 20:58:27 +0000 UTC]
<3
I hope you can enjoy some of my other writings.
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Miss-Mallow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-24 21:03:37 +0000 UTC]
oh i will, im about to make a gallery strictly for your works
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Miss-Mallow [2010-10-24 21:04:25 +0000 UTC]
XD
REALLY?
THANK YOU.
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Miss-Mallow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-24 21:05:51 +0000 UTC]
sure sure, u can check it out in a bit kay?
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Miss-Mallow [2010-10-24 21:06:43 +0000 UTC]
Check what out? XD
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Miss-Mallow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-24 21:09:07 +0000 UTC]
idk lmao, im done now
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Miss-Mallow [2010-10-24 21:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Damn, thank you! <3
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Miss-Mallow In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-24 21:11:23 +0000 UTC]
woo! i got another llama badge! thanks ^^
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OKLV [2010-10-06 20:06:46 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWWWWW NOW IM CRYING THEY ARE DEAD D: I HATE YOU... NO... BUT THEY ARE ALIVE!!IN MY MIND !"
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thinkingorplotting In reply to OKLV [2010-10-06 20:10:38 +0000 UTC]
CHECK OUT THE YAOI VERSION!
DON'T HATE ME! ;A;
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Arithusa [2010-10-02 17:45:16 +0000 UTC]
AFDKSAJDBGFERLGJKDFNLIDFNHDFLDB OH MY GOSH YOU KILLED THEM.
Lovely writing, but dead Malik is dead. TAT
Made meh eyes tear up for a second when Altair was looking off of the side of the building at Malik. ;A;
Ffft.. I love Malik to much. Poor Alty, having to watch that.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Arithusa [2010-10-03 04:02:33 +0000 UTC]
DON'T WORRY. I SHALL MAKE A YAOITASITC ONE WITH LESS DEATH. <3
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thinkingorplotting In reply to SlyHaloHound [2010-10-02 07:11:23 +0000 UTC]
I KNOW! I MIGHT DO A MORE NON DYING YAOITASTIC VERSION OF THIS.
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SlyHaloHound In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-03 01:35:00 +0000 UTC]
I CANT WAIT! IN THE MEANTIME I'LL BE DANCING OUTSIDE YOUR RIGHT EAR
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D-g-A [2010-10-01 18:27:22 +0000 UTC]
wow; this is soo beautiful... you made me cry T^T good work!
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the-hybrid92 [2010-10-01 04:43:30 +0000 UTC]
Awwwww D':
So sad, but so beautiful... It made me tear up a bit
Great job
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thinkingorplotting In reply to the-hybrid92 [2010-10-01 11:28:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
You were the only one who commented on it! ;A;
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the-hybrid92 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-04 01:06:40 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome :'3
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thinkingorplotting In reply to the-hybrid92 [2010-10-04 01:08:24 +0000 UTC]
HEY WOULD YOU BE INTERESTED IN THIS:[link]
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the-hybrid92 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-10-06 02:55:20 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... I love Assassin's Creed... I love 9... HELLYES~
That is an epic crossover I say you should do it ^^
I would read it C:
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thinkingorplotting In reply to the-hybrid92 [2010-10-06 04:25:29 +0000 UTC]
OKIES!
I started it,but there are only 2 parts so far: [link]
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