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Published: 2010-10-08 03:12:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 2816; Favourites: 103; Downloads: 25
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Working on female proportions again. <3 Thought this one was cute.Related content
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if only i could attain skill this good one day its excellent
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I actually see a difference compared to more recent drawings.
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renny critic time
i hope you don't mind
i overall reeeeeeeeally like this picture
but
you really need to work on how you draw boobs. even large breasts don't stick out like that unless they're like water balloons or something.
titties are hard to draw though...so i'm not gonna harp on you about it...
also her thighs kinda long. it makes it a little awkward.
but i really do like the pic. i think your coloring is SWEET and very clean and i dig those eyes.
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very good and very cute X3 though in a situation like this ya just want to give her a hug. -3-
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Very extremely good. I need to draw in more simple designs like this when I'm not making my manga pages. This would make an extremely good anime when it comes out by what I can tell. I can assume your characters such as this one are going towards the creation of the next masterpiece manga.
If so, just like Son's manga, when it comes out, I'll buy a copy.
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Thanks for your support. <3
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Flower Petal. It's part of her head.
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oh ok, now it makes sense.
thank you.
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You seem to have the proportions down. tho the shoulders look a bit broad from this angle... >.> hope that helps
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Aww...poor girl. All lost and lonely. Come with me love, I'll help you find the light again.
Role-playing aside, you have come a long way in drawing the female anatomy. Well done.
Only thing I see wrong is her hands. it looks like you cut a corner with them by making all her knuckles follow the same curve, smoothing to perfectly fit that curve. then there is the hand behind. without the shading, it would subsequently merge with hand/arm above it.
Though again, you shaded her very well, you even ruffled her shirt to show that she is tightly clutching.
On a guy note, her figure is very lovely. Supple beasts, small frame, cute eyes. She's practically a work of art.
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Very good, i think a little less on the hips but i like it loads anyway XD Your getting really good!
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Sweet. Unlike me, u can draw a female chest very well. :3
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hah i cant do that either. i found it much easier to make the chest smaller. i cant do male eyes very well. the chest is the only problem with drawing girls. also mouths in general. i despise them.
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Huh. I just cant draw good knockers, like i said.
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you did a great job on the legs, which is something I have lots of trouble with. Your shading is awesome as always
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Dude, your practice has made it more perfect. this is great!
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Good, I like how the legs and breasts are proportionate with how she's posed. I also like how you got away without having to do a lot of detail in the hand (That's always my flaw, I hate drawing hands) It seems her (if your back was towards her) Left arm is a smidge bigger but that could just be me. Also, her torso seems to curve up funny, try drawing the shoulders and then the breasts and go down from the ribs to the curve of her waist line. It looks great though, I see a lot of improvement :3
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It's teh law that is not in mah butt! X3
But show me the law that says I have to XD
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Oh nuuu shes alone XD Who will save her. Very nice Scoot ^^ Well done.
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