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Oh, a new page! Finally!
Redid everything but the background. XD Now I really like the outcome...though...it seems to be a little bit wrong :/
Cyrtas face markings were completely washed off by the shading. XD
Anyway...now what do we learn? Cyrta's a bitch and that dragon is a poor victim...a dangerous firebreathing victim. XD"
And Flavie feels sorry for it...awww... ;_;
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Comments: 13
SweetButtermilk [2010-09-04 19:17:06 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm. Not to be nit-picky or anything, but did you intend for Cyrta's dialogue to be spoken incorrectly? "...more easily to fool." Technically would be "...easier to fool."
^.^
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ThorinFrostclaw In reply to SweetButtermilk [2010-09-05 18:20:15 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, you're not nit-picky, silly! *pokes*
I ALWAYS highly appreciate notes on mistakes! *nods*
Gotta fix it when I find some time... Thank you very much!
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SweetButtermilk In reply to ThorinFrostclaw [2010-09-05 20:18:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh, whew! Lol. I've just learned to be cautious sometimes...I've had people go off on me because I corrected them.
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ThorinFrostclaw In reply to SweetButtermilk [2010-09-06 18:47:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I know this kind of people. D: That's the reason why I am so afraid of giving tips and criticism...I never know how they'll react. D:
Personally I love getting help...of course if everyone would JUST criticize I'd be sad (XD), but overall, help is ALWAYS awesome! *nods*
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meroe1313 [2009-08-10 16:09:53 +0000 UTC]
Boo, boo on Cyrta! And yay for you for nice plot twists.
Keep it coming!
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LLAMAS-EAT-PIE [2009-08-08 07:32:41 +0000 UTC]
Love the story so far
Poor 'little' dangerous fire-breathing victim
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timmytier [2009-08-07 14:05:44 +0000 UTC]
Aber kleiner Drache :<
Fffh, Cyrta ist wirklich ein kleines Biest xD
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ThorinFrostclaw In reply to timmytier [2009-08-18 12:55:48 +0000 UTC]
*nick* D:
Wenn man mal bedenkt dass ich Cyrta mal als netten Character geplant hatte. *lach* Aber jetzt hab' ich einen wahnsinnigen Spaß daran ihren Character immer "schwärzer" werden zu lassen. *gwahaha* XD
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timmytier In reply to ThorinFrostclaw [2009-08-18 15:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Scheint mir ganz so xD Solange du dir irgendwann nicht widersprichst/ihre früheren Aktionen viel zu freundlich für sie werden, ist alles ok c':
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Wolf250 [2009-08-07 12:23:51 +0000 UTC]
Meh, poor dragon, how can he play with it, that's unfair ;__;
Tell me they'll set this dragon free? ^^
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ThorinFrostclaw In reply to Wolf250 [2009-08-18 12:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Yesss...poor little dragon. D:
Maybe yes or maybe no. *shrugs* We'll find out one day, I promise! XD
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