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An early birthday present for KingAsylus91 who gave me the idea for chapter 11 and also requested a poster. Happy birth day mate, hope you enjoy it.
Chapter 11 is a standalone story that comes after the last episode of the Tower storyline and should only be 1 episode long.
Plot
With Mario, Peach and Toadsworth still on a much needed vacation Toadsworth asks Princess Daisy if she could check up on the state of affairs in the Mushroom Kingdom. Daisy has another motive for visiting the Mushroom Kingdom however, she wants to see Luigi.
During a walk out Daisy and Luigi find an unusual flower with a P on it with an attractive smell. After one sniff of this flower however Daisy starts to inflate like a balloon and take off into the air. The Toads try their best to keep Daisy on the ground while Luigi plans to don the Mask and use its powers to fix this mess. But unfortunately Yoshi has stumbled across the cursed artefact first.
It’s up to Luigi and Toadrick to retrieve the Mask from a destructive and very hungry Yoshi, figure out what this mysterious P Flower is and fix Daisy before she either floats out into space or pops like a balloon.
The idea of the P flower was created by KingAsylus91 and was designed by TimeLordParadox
The title is reference to the movie UP!
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Comments: 44
thebrokeartist [2014-12-26 01:30:52 +0000 UTC]
Okay I can already tell I'm gonna get some weird laughs from this one. Either hysterical or the type where I understand the humor but just won't much laugh at it. Plus knowing that Daisy will get to use the mask again in another episode will just make my day. Hopefully she'll be a bit more crazy next time cause the last Daisy/mask appearance was just.... A bit of a downer... In my opinion she only became more honest and that's it. Sure she did some things that were the powers of the mask but.... Lets just say that compared to Bride of Pretorius episode she just didn't live up to the masks true potential. But I can't wait for this episode!! Knowing Yoshi is a dinosaur with an appetite he'll propably go and try to eat bowser for soup or something. Hmmmm dragon turtle soup.... Sounds delicious. Wonder how Mario would act if Peach somehow got the mask...... Okay now I'm just rambling here. Keep this up, this is propably one of the few good parodies that I really like. Hopefully the end ain't coming too soon.
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SomthingStupid69 In reply to thebrokeartist [2017-06-06 01:56:47 +0000 UTC]
I wish daisy got fat in a game
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benfark [2014-09-21 19:07:30 +0000 UTC]
I cant wait that thing
Its awasome but I wanna see Mario vs Green Thunder. Just that idea in my head XD I cant stop thinking Mario vs Green Thunder.
Maybe Mario injuried by Green thunder and Luigi feel bad about it.
Also I hope Luigi not lose his soul by Loki's mask but I know he will
And Green Thunder is best. And Mario will kill Luigi. (just idea Just A İdea OMG I cant stop that thinking that idea too)
Another one is Luigi is so tired from using mask a lot of and sleep for a few days. İn that time Mario founds mask and put on his face and Luigi and Toadrick must deal Red Flame (Marios mask version)
But great series keep it up.
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TimeLordParadox In reply to benfark [2014-11-25 15:12:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoy it (Sorry for the long wait on the reply.)
Mario vs Green Thunder will happen in the shows future but not for a while yet.
I'm not too keen on giving Mario the Mask as Mario is already the main star of most Nintendo games, this is Luigi's journey of self discovery after all. Plus going by his personality (As pointed out on the youtube show 'Game Theory') I think Mario would turn out to be one of the most monsterous Mask we've seen so far. Mario serves the story very well as a plumber without a voice. He's always worked well as a character IMO because you can kind of project yourself onto the hero, little is actually known about him from the games stand point which makes the character easy to project onto. He may look like an Itallian plumber but he could think exactly like you (apart from the obsession with pasta but we can gloss over that ), you can even see him as the hero of good moral standing, or as Game Theory suggested an unpleasent, manipulative, selfish man out for his own ends who is only painted as the hero when he is an anti-hero.
Which is something I feel would be lost by giving him the Mask because it then kind of anchors him to a personality and would just spoil the character. IMO
But I'm not totally closing the door on a Mario/Mask combo as I can see its potential to further develop the story, but it might just need the right time and situation to make it the most effective. Plus the episode would have to bring something to the table in terms of character development. and also this would kind of reveal the Mask to Mario which is something I'm holding off on for now.
In short, I just don't want to make a Mario/Mask just for the sake of making a Mario/Mask, there has to be a reason for him to exist.
But thanks for the praise and the input, and I hope you continue to enjoy the series as it progresses.
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benfark In reply to TimeLordParadox [2014-11-26 11:03:18 +0000 UTC]
yeah good luck in mario and luigi the mask I cant wait it XD
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gamerjohn022691 [2014-09-03 19:02:19 +0000 UTC]
Supposed that she DOES pop, because remember when I shared an idea for Chapter 12 and the possible series finale? Well, the way she pops is actually "clean bursting", like with cartoon characters (only with the shreds of her body not coming back together, and her physical body which is presumed dead as evidenced by shreds of her skin, not falling from the sky), only the way she's revived, like I mentioned in the idea for the ending of Chapter 11, is a reference to Pokémon The First Movie: Mewtwo Strikes Back.
BTW: Where did you get the inflated Princess Daisy sprite for this poster?
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TimeLordParadox In reply to gamerjohn022691 [2014-09-04 18:04:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your input but I already have an end to the series in mind anyway, thanks all the same though.
As for the sprite I made it myself, it was just a quick lash together for the poster. I'll probably construct a better sprite for the episode.
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gamerjohn022691 In reply to TimeLordParadox [2014-09-06 02:04:33 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but I was just reminding you about Princess Daisy's fate in the Chapter. Also, during the possible Part 2, there needs to be a scene where Daisy still has P-Flower pollen inside her nostrils, causing her to continuously inflate until she reaches planet-size. As she approaches the sun, Luigi and Yoshi's fight over the mask introduces us to Bowser's Masked form; the Koopa Reaper. His appearance is a cross between Dry Bowser and the Grim Reaper, hence the name, with the only difference being a green skull with fire for pupils. Eventually, Luigi takes the mask back, and becomes the Green Thunder before he realizes that he's too late to save Daisy. Meanwhile, Princess Daisy floats past the Comet Observatory (with Rosalina looking at her with a horrified expression) before reaching maximum size. Once she approaches the sun, the bottom of her dress is lit on fire, and an Angry Sun with a disembodied hand and fireproof blindfold pulls out a sewing needle (which is a reference to a certain web series and its email segments), leading to the mentioned "clean bursting" scene, but with a fiery explosion that doesn't affect the shreds of what was once her. Oh, and BTW: the scene where Princess Daisy is revived (in which her headstone flashes without anybody noticing) also should feature a 1-Up Mushroom SFX from the original Super Mario Bros. before fading to the Mario Bros. House later that night.
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TimeLordParadox In reply to gamerjohn022691 [2014-09-08 00:47:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh...kay...
Well....
You have imagination mate, I'll give you that. O.o
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gamerjohn022691 In reply to TimeLordParadox [2014-09-08 01:14:50 +0000 UTC]
Speaking of imagination: here's an idea for a future Doctor Wii episode: After battling the Shroobs, their princess sends the doctor and his friends to a faraway planet, which is completely barren. There, the doctor meets the planet's resident goddess (who looks like a color-swap of Rosalina) who says that the standard female frame is the result of a curse brought upon the planet by a Magikoopa in black with long white facial hair. The doctor and his cohorts hunt down the Magikoopa, who reveals that he's not the one who cursed the planet and its goddess. Instead, an evil being (who happens to be a color-swap of Nightmare from Kirby: Nightmare in Dream Land) caused the goddess to deflate because of the curse, which explains why the planet is bone-dry. The doctor then decides to fight the evil being, and eventually defeat said being. The result lifts the curse, causes the once-barren planet to be restored to its garden-like beauty, changes the Magikoopa into a Toad Elder, and causes the goddess to re-inflate back to her original gigantic and bloated size. Soon, she thanks the doctor, and sends him back to his homeworld, police box and all. (P.S.: In subsequent episodes after this one, the balloon-like goddess and the Toad Elder will make recurring appearances) The epilogue shows Princess Shroob pondering on what she should do next, but it seems her mothership has run out of fuel, and one of her troops claims that the nearest rest stop is 14 light-years away.
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DrakeTheYoshi [2014-07-15 04:41:54 +0000 UTC]
So wait, if Yoshi tries eating the Mask, that means the Mask will get close to his face... meaning... Yoshi Thunder?!
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TimeLordParadox In reply to DrakeTheYoshi [2014-07-16 07:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Yep, and Yoshi + the power of the Mask = one great big eating machine
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DaniOskar [2014-05-15 19:31:19 +0000 UTC]
(impressed laugh) Very good one. What do you think, when it's going to be released in Youtube? Somewhere during Autumn? And besides, if you are still working on the Story, you could add a clueless Toad, which thinks, that the inflated Daisy is a second Moon/Sun (depending on the Time).
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PrincessPuccadomiNyo [2014-05-08 03:58:38 +0000 UTC]
Thoes Episodes Are To Short To Work.
I Preter 25 Episodes A Lot.
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TimeLordParadox In reply to PrincessPuccadomiNyo [2014-05-10 09:06:09 +0000 UTC]
I might have to make it 2 episodes long, what I've written seems far too long
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TimeLordParadox In reply to JuaniPMO [2014-03-14 10:20:56 +0000 UTC]
After I finish episode 10
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JuaniPMO In reply to TimeLordParadox [2014-03-14 11:37:52 +0000 UTC]
Cool
But what really surprised me was the fact that this episode was requested D:
A long time, when I didn't had ideas, I ask for people to give me ideas
Nobody gave me one
Maybe, In a near future, I could request you an episode (like those Jimmy Neutron/Fairy Odd Parents crossovers, but with real jokes ), maybe the next season or the last one, Idk
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TimeLordParadox In reply to JuaniPMO [2014-03-21 15:22:54 +0000 UTC]
Well I had a gap between story lines where I wanted a pretty much stand alone story focusing around Luigi and Daisy a little. KingAsylus91 was kind enough to send me some ideas he had my way and I forged the story out of some of them.
I had put out the message that I'll accept story requests when I first started the project but nothing came of it at first. Just keep animating and making episodes and putting the message out, eventually you'll have a large enough fan base that some might have story ideas for you.
Sure, go ahead. It might be a while until I make it, mind. I've still got at least 4-5 episodes currently in the making for season 2
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JuaniPMO In reply to TimeLordParadox [2014-03-21 18:22:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's very encouraging
Well, I guess it will be people who ask episodes (or one shots) as soon pass the first season and the first film
Ok, let's see how we could do that
Although I like this idea come for the final season
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TimeLordParadox In reply to JuaniPMO [2014-03-22 12:58:28 +0000 UTC]
I've pretty much figured out what I'm going to do for the final season, but send it to me through PM and I'll take a look at it.
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rockinmidnight18 [2014-02-21 22:26:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh boy, i cant see this turning out to be a good thing XD
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matrix125 [2014-02-01 19:55:46 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to see Yoshi in a mask. I know its early, but Happy birthday!
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matrix125 In reply to TimeLordParadox [2014-02-03 00:43:24 +0000 UTC]
No problem, man. Hope you have a good one
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DevyHero [2014-01-31 00:10:33 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHAHAAHHAHAHA!!!
(Don't like thearm and mask that Yoshi grab... too marked!)
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funnytime77 [2014-01-30 20:14:12 +0000 UTC]
yay! is this where daisy gets inflated? I wanna watch that video and see the story.
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FiretheFlame [2014-01-30 18:46:55 +0000 UTC]
You know, It's gonna be kinda hard to figure out if Yoshi has the Mask on or not, since Yoshi himself is green
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TimeLordParadox In reply to FiretheFlame [2014-01-30 19:45:02 +0000 UTC]
I have some ideas to make Yoshi/Mask stand out a little
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TimeLordParadox In reply to PFT-Production [2014-01-30 19:44:42 +0000 UTC]
Daisy has sniffed a cursed flower that's causing her to inflate like that. It'll all be explained in the episode.
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PFT-Production In reply to TimeLordParadox [2014-01-30 19:45:38 +0000 UTC]
All right! I can't wait to see that!
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Nonononomo In reply to PFT-Production [2014-01-30 18:35:59 +0000 UTC]
she has eat a P and now ,she are like balloon tif (a form of tiff)
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KratosGoji91 [2014-01-30 18:19:58 +0000 UTC]
Nice!
Would you added as scene about Daisy inflated like a balloon in progress? Like this? www.youtube.com/watch?v=zvFhlM…
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TimeLordParadox In reply to KratosGoji91 [2014-01-30 19:46:51 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I'll have a scene like that in the story.
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TimeLordParadox In reply to Nonononomo [2014-01-30 19:43:40 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I was hoping it would get a reaction like that.
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Nonononomo In reply to TimeLordParadox [2014-01-30 19:47:36 +0000 UTC]
everybody thinks this -_- yoshi with a mask and balloon daisy?! that are WTF
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