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Published: 2008-08-04 08:39:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 3393; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 16
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Ok I flailed, Its late 8n8but its here now so everybody happy 8D
The top panel looks different from the lineart version because, the truth is I did a practice of this page aeons ago, and the background looked so much better than the one I had now so copied and pasted it >D
Edit: This won't be the final page design, I've been studying anatomy and comic layouts and realised I can make it spiffier and more epic 8D
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I dunno what species he is |D
Becuase the comic takes place way in the future I guess he wouldn't be any breed today cause of evolution and all @.@. When I re-draw this, the species will be a mix between a domestic cat, a jungle cat and a lemur xD
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woww!! I hope when I work on my comic it comes out half as good!
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I'm sure you will pwn me most outrageously u-u
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nnooo...Your comic has me 'oogling. You have serious talent here!
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This is an amazing page. I love the colors, and how well the character fits in with the background. Excellent expressions and panel flow.
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I'm glad the character fits with the bg, I used to have a terrible habit of doing insanely detailed bg's and then messing it up with a really out of place character. I hope I've found a balance eยฌe
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Man, I WISH I could do insanely detailed backgrounds!!
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Holy cowboys your style is amazing. *injests it*
This is the best comic what Iยดve seen so far, no joking. Iยดm so happy I found your gallery
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Best comic you've seen so far! O.O YOUR DEPRIVED!!
I'm just gonna make a list of some of the guys who pwn my comic skills:
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Much thanks though it fills me with happiness that I made someone else happy, and that my style is edible 8u8
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This is excelent! Are you going to put maybe some word bubbles or reactions in there? I think it would make your comic even better! And the third panel, maybe move the pupils down a tad bit so it looks like he's looking down more
Looks wonderful! Looking forward to seeing more^^
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thanks for the tips, sorted out the squifed eyes |D
I'm abit scared of putting sfx and speech bubbles in, I've only planned for speech bubbles when they really need to talk (like no reactions or anything) and theres no sfx in my script. I gues i just don't know where to start
I guess I'll atleast try and add some when the comic gets more lively 8n8
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Aw dont be scared, your comic is off to a wonderful start!
And you're welcome, I'm new at the comic stuff myself, I've spent a while on my first page, and it still is going through revisions
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Wow! Just as had thought, this looks even better colored and shaded!
My favorite panel here is the middle one, where he is looking up. You can get a good feel for the character's face.
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Thank you
I really like the 3rd panel. I didn't think the traced lineart did it justice though, the original sketch looked less flat. But overall I'm pleased with the end result ^^
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You're very welcome!
That's what really matters- if you're satisfied with it at the end, right?
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That's vair vair awesome 8D I'mma stalk j00 now so I can continue reading when you post a new page XD
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thankyou 
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AFRO BUSH
I SWEAR TO YOUR, IT MOVED
LIKE THOSE CRAZY ASS VINES FROM 'THE RUINS'
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Afro bush will eat him alive in the next page, thats why he so suprised -brick'd-
dude, I just youtubed the "the ruins vines" I feel sick now e-e
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AWWWW.
YOU SHOULD'VE GOOGLED IT. You would have felt better. xD
OHMAI
DUN'T DO THAT AFRO BUSH. ILU.
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The backround IS fantastic^+^ The pencilly backround makes it more idk, pleasing to the eye^^thats it. Interesting I'm gonna enjoy this story I know it^^
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I'm glad the linearted background doesn't mess things up to much, (though that bush behind him seems to look akward all the time >>
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Don't get too excited, the stories boring u_u
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AHM EXCITED. >_>
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I'm afraid I won't budge from the opinion that you win at life.
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