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Published: 2006-10-30 16:56:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 284; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Close your eyes, take a breath
Wave goodbye and exit left
Say the countdown, 3, 2, 1…
In a heartbeat, life is done
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Comments: 24

ProfessorMoriarty86 [2016-11-24 03:09:37 +0000 UTC]

This is weird but the only way I can describe this sharp and abrupt. Very good. Got me right in the feels.

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tinkertype In reply to ProfessorMoriarty86 [2016-11-24 03:22:18 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS STUFF I WROTE IN HIGH SCHOOL and if you find the yearbook I graduated in, it's actually in the art section. XD Thanks, glad you liked.

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ProfessorMoriarty86 In reply to tinkertype [2016-11-24 05:35:14 +0000 UTC]

I KNEW I'd read it before! I thought it was in a role play we did or something but now I remember!

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tinkertype In reply to ProfessorMoriarty86 [2016-11-30 22:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Whyyy do you remember that. Delete. D: 

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zootlocker [2006-11-01 07:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Thats beautiful, very well done.

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tinkertype In reply to zootlocker [2006-11-02 05:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Zootie. Means a lot coming from you.

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zootlocker In reply to tinkertype [2006-11-02 07:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Is seriously probably the best four line poem I've ever read. And I've read a lot of haiku and limmerics (admittedly 5 lines).

Very well summed with a delicious composition :cute:

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tinkertype In reply to zootlocker [2006-11-02 07:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Great, now I'm blushing and squeeing with that glowing, pleased feeling only a good ego-boost can give you.

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zootlocker In reply to tinkertype [2006-11-02 09:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Ego Boost! Squee!

BetheaSpirit mela amin.

(i find it interesting the elven word for word is beth)

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ShadowSweeper [2006-10-31 07:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, you do have a gift! You've got me jealous because i was too shy to post my own poems and you beat me to it!

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tinkertype In reply to ShadowSweeper [2006-11-02 04:50:51 +0000 UTC]

Use that jealousy!! ^__^ Post yer own work and show me up, man!

And thanks. I prefer to think I get lucky now and than. =3 If I had a gift, I'd've won a nobel prize already. >XD

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ShadowSweeper In reply to tinkertype [2006-11-02 07:13:08 +0000 UTC]

It's unfortunate one doesn't get a nobel prize for literary arts.

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tinkertype In reply to ShadowSweeper [2006-11-02 07:29:13 +0000 UTC]

"The Nobel Prizes are prizes awarded annually to people (and, in the case of the Peace Prize, sometimes to organizations) who have completed outstanding research, invented ground-breaking techniques or equipment, or made an outstanding contribution to society in physics, chemistry, literature, peace, medicine or physiology and economics." - Wikipedia

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ShadowSweeper In reply to tinkertype [2006-11-02 15:45:46 +0000 UTC]

Blah. Fine. We shall have a race then. Who ever gets a nobel prize FOR LITERATURE shall have....stuff afforded from the other person (loser)...(you).

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tinkertype In reply to ShadowSweeper [2006-11-03 18:21:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm gonna love it when the day comes and you're buying me dinner. >XD

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ShadowSweeper In reply to tinkertype [2006-11-04 00:33:12 +0000 UTC]

lmao. I forgot what we were talking about earlier..and that scared me for a second.
Either way, dinner shall be mine!bwaha.

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Omnibard [2006-10-30 22:06:25 +0000 UTC]

... Again, I second Riley. :3 Hehe.

... Exit? o.o Hmm... wonder what kinda world Death is, outsida buildin'o life, what?

<3

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tinkertype In reply to Omnibard [2006-10-31 02:03:33 +0000 UTC]

She's just stealing the words right out of your fingers, isn't she?

The Building of Life only has one door....and it's a revolving door. >XD

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rileymai [2006-10-30 19:06:27 +0000 UTC]

wow.. for how short it is, it's pretty powerful. I read it aloud to my roomate, and she thinks the same as me. You seriously are the WonderWriter, Spirit.

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tinkertype In reply to rileymai [2006-10-31 02:01:57 +0000 UTC]

The length concerned me for a bit, and I tried to add onto it but (let me be corny for a moment) like life, it's short and sweet just the way it is. XD

Aww, man, don't say that~ Thanks, Riley - props to yer roommate, too.

On a sidenote, sometimes I wish I could always write like this - short, sweet, to the point. Don't say in ten words what you can say in two, ya know? =3

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rileymai In reply to tinkertype [2006-10-31 02:10:03 +0000 UTC]

^___^

I'll let her know props are going her way.

yeah, I can't really say I am good at writing poetry.. I've tried, but I'm dissatisfied with myself a lot. And you're right there. ^^

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tinkertype In reply to rileymai [2006-11-02 04:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Aww. I'm seriously not. XD I mean, I write so much more poetry that you'll never see - and I've got /journals/ of old poetry that makes me cringe. I once thought I'd be a poet rather than an author, but then I got a lick of sense and change career paths. ^__^

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rileymai In reply to tinkertype [2006-11-02 17:28:08 +0000 UTC]

lick of sense?.. I just think you don't know how good you are at writing, in every sense, that including poetry. ^^

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tinkertype In reply to rileymai [2006-11-03 18:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Riley, Common Sense literally walked up to me and gave me a good lick on the side of my face - ta da! I could think clearly~ O.o

I know I'm good! I'm not great, but I know I'm good, Riley, sheesh~ XD You get a few A's and 6's from school, a few compliments from strangers on the internet, and one tends to start getting the idea..

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