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If only I hadA dime each time
A fine young man
Wined and dined me
Every time he'd buy
Me rings and strings
Of pearls
If only I had
A dime each time
He'd kiss me and wish me
All the best in the World
Every time he'd:
Confuse me
Seduce me
Love me
Abuse me
If only I had a dimeβ¦
It wouldn't be such
A waste of time
If I only had a dime
Each time
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Comments: 12
FenixEscarlata [2017-01-18 02:28:10 +0000 UTC]
Striking, it flows with a perfectΒ rhythm ^_^
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tinkertype In reply to FenixEscarlata [2017-01-18 06:31:20 +0000 UTC]
It was a ten minute homework assignment, if you'll believe it. XD Back when I still dropped the 's' from my pronouns so people could pretend I was writing poetry about men instead of women. Yeesh! You had to go digging through my archives, huh. XD
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FenixEscarlata In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-18 09:12:52 +0000 UTC]
The better ideas come when we aren't expecting them
Oh, well! I guess that happens haha. I used to wrote about the girl I liked a lot, and I kept it in secret until I told my sister... So I have lots of poems and stories about someone who didn't even suspect of them...
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tinkertype In reply to FenixEscarlata [2017-01-18 18:39:29 +0000 UTC]
I know how that goes.Β Β You should post some of them, if you want. Like you said, it's a way of letting go, right?
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FenixEscarlata In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-18 23:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I could post some of the recent ones ^_^
Thanks you so much for the encouragement
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tinkertype In reply to FenixEscarlata [2017-01-18 23:52:16 +0000 UTC]
My sincerest pleasure, dude, no joke.
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PenlessAuthor [2010-07-09 02:24:10 +0000 UTC]
Well. Guys tend not to: "wine and dine me, kiss me and wish me the best in the world, buy me rings and/or strings or pearls, seduce me, love me, or abuse me".
But if I had a dime for every time they confused me, I would be mighty rich ;D
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tinkertype In reply to PenlessAuthor [2010-07-09 04:34:14 +0000 UTC]
They always confuse me, I'm a lesbian. XDD This was written for class, and I kinda liked it so, voila, DA'ed.
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PenlessAuthor In reply to tinkertype [2010-07-09 17:39:19 +0000 UTC]
I like it C: Just the only thing I can relate to in it would be the confusion xDD
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Omnibard [2006-05-20 20:42:03 +0000 UTC]
Very well done, Spirit. It's always interesting to see things through your poetry. Though, to be honest, if I looked at myself through this piece, I would see a pile of useless. Perspective changes all!
Keep up the excellent work, my sister.
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zootlocker [2006-05-19 05:12:00 +0000 UTC]
Well, its interesting you feel that way...and you have my sympathy.
The work on the other hand is exceptional, keep it up!
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