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Tiny-Doodles — MLP .:. Saturn WILL BE REDONE

Published: 2014-08-11 14:16:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 379; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 2
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Description This is Saturn's design in a series I'm going to be doing about all the planets, I hope you'll stick around to see all the end results
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Do with my drawing whatever you want to do with it except claim it as your own of course!
I'd gladly listen to any criticism you have
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Comments: 9

Liagon [2014-08-18 10:21:48 +0000 UTC]

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This is another good pony piece. Its simply stunning.

Clearly a lot of effort has been put into this one. I adore the textures on the tail and background. I love the concentration expression on the face as it suggests that he is summoning her magic. I love the rings too.

On a constructive note the feathers on the wings are perhaps too sharp. I would suggest curving the edges and perhaps giving them more texture.

But other than that I do no know if there is anything else that I can say.. Great piece though nice work done keep it up

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dATrade In reply to Liagon [2014-08-18 13:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Hi,  This critique has been submitted through dATrade and is currently pending approval by the artist. If you feel that the critique is unfair or to your dissatisfaction, please read through the Critique Guidelines and send us a note within 48 hours to receive a refund of your points.

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Liagon In reply to dATrade [2014-08-18 13:17:56 +0000 UTC]

this has been marked fair

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Oljum [2014-08-18 09:23:29 +0000 UTC]

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Definitly you tryed hard to bring majesty look for character. What shows at first the arrangation of pony's body.
I like the effect use to colored her hairs, as well of their wavy shape. The bransoletes looks natural and shining. The mimicry and luminoscity light around horn bring the look of magical user who is going to make a spell.
The galactic look on background also fullfill effect of supernatural and majestic.
But I think the shadows are a little too soft airbrush for such scene in cosmos and makes pony looks less 3D than rest of picture. Especially around wings and bottom legs.

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dATrade In reply to Oljum [2014-08-18 09:26:03 +0000 UTC]

Hi,  This critique has been submitted through dATrade and is currently pending approval by the artist. If you feel that the critique is unfair or to your dissatisfaction, please read through the Critique Guidelines and send us a note within 48 hours to receive a refund of your points.

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yuukipink [2014-08-16 16:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is a very good idea. I love planets. 

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Tiny-Doodles In reply to yuukipink [2014-08-16 17:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I recently found out about things like Quasars too, gonna do something with them, just not sure what yet! xD and all of the current Planet Serie Ponies will be updated

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Rustyscreech [2014-08-14 10:59:46 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful!!!

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Tiny-Doodles In reply to Rustyscreech [2014-08-14 11:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!   

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