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As you feel like letting go,Letting go of everything
You can see the tears falling
Falling on the paper,
Smearing the dreaded words
"It's over..."
Those words you never want to hear,
Breaking the silence that was never there.
And you think that its just so not fair,
So not fair to happen when
You were just so happy.
Now you're broken on the floor.
Staining it with tears of pain.
Stains that can never wash away.
Your throat becomes sore,
And pain comes to your
Heart. Feeling like it is ripped out
It still pumps on.
Still pumps on.
Still pumps on.
There is no remedy,
For those dreaded words you see.
They break hearts. Cure others...
Broken girls...single mothers.
A piece is missing.
An incomplete puzzle.
It leaves you guessing,
Only guessing,
"What did i do to deserve such sorrow?"
You tell your friends,
They say it will be okay by tomorrow.
But you know its not true,
What they say.
Their words cannot make fate delay.
The end is drawing nearer
Second by second,
And your heart beating slower you can hear it.
You can give up and die now
Or you can live and keep getting pained.
If you die, the sky will not cry anything...only rain.
These thoughts the make you cry in vain,
These voices the make you go insane.
They keep crying, moaning, screaming you name,
"Kill yourself and end the pain."
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Comments: 11
Psychadellic [2009-08-08 20:59:00 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you're a great poet. This is very well written!
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tistja In reply to Psychadellic [2009-08-08 22:08:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow I'm surprised somebody actually decided to read my literature!
Thanks so much! (: that makes me really happy.
It was basically just a little impromptu poem that I decided to write.
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Psychadellic In reply to tistja [2009-08-08 23:57:54 +0000 UTC]
Yep. You really have a talent there! You've really gotta keep writing. I really enjoyed reading through all of these.
Fabulous work!
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tistja In reply to Psychadellic [2009-08-09 00:45:24 +0000 UTC]
Thats really nice of you to say. Did you really?
Thanks very much (:
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Psychadellic In reply to tistja [2009-08-09 02:53:31 +0000 UTC]
Yep, I sure did! You really have a gift for writing and photography. Man, I your work! I'm really glad I found your gallery!
And you are so welcome!
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tistja In reply to Psychadellic [2009-08-09 03:41:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you're so cool! And hell no, thats not sarcasm! Haha. I'm really glad you did too! I believe you're the coolest person I know thats on DA..other than the people that I actually know..
I love your as well! And nah, I'm not just saying that to be nice (:
!!
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Psychadellic In reply to tistja [2009-08-09 04:04:05 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thanks so much! And wow, that's so sweet of you to say! You're the coolest person I've met through dA too and I absolutely
your work!
Can you tell I love that giggley smiley? XD
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tistja In reply to Psychadellic [2009-08-09 04:09:26 +0000 UTC]
Haha, Awe (:
And yeah, you make me say awe lol.
You're soo cool! Omg! (: haha.
And yes I can, its a cute emote so its all good (:
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Psychadellic In reply to tistja [2009-08-09 05:10:34 +0000 UTC]
You're full of coolness! That sounded lame but whatev! You get my point, right?
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tistja In reply to Psychadellic [2009-08-09 05:17:04 +0000 UTC]
Yes ma'am I do.
I'm very tired..
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Psychadellic In reply to tistja [2009-08-09 05:21:56 +0000 UTC]
Well, you should get some rest. Big day for you tommorrow!
And I should be going too. I have to get up early tommorrow. Goodnight!
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