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Published: 2013-07-25 01:25:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 3104; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 0
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Somehow managed to finish this while battling what I believe to be bronchitis, WHOOOO.Observe new-type Suko! This is how she would've looked if I was better at handling more complex design bits back then, especially the hair. She also gets horns similar to Royce's trueform, because that makes a LOT more sense, hrrrfff.
I also toned down the naive bits of her personality a bit. She's still considerably nicer/more concerned than Ame of course, but now she avoids being princess milquetoast.
I'm sure veterans to the story can see where this is going~
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Thanks! Trying my best to make Suko more active in the interim she's around in the beginning c:
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You could have the book thrown at you!
I know I already posted, and that was bad. But I had to post it.
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Suko used Book Missile!
- Ame took 666 Damage!
- Ame has been Educated!
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Educated...begrudgingly!
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Backgrounds are really upgraded this time.
Not only are they more colourful, in the first chapters you wouldn't even know where all of this is happening, it looked like a void, with a few plants and sometimes a table. And Suko not only looks better, but now has a personality, the first chapter's Suko was as interesting as a brick.
Anyway nice going.
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Yessss, the improvement is pretty significant, definitely not regretting the do-over. Thank you!
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"What's the worst that could happen?" How 'bout Suko throwin' the book at ya?
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Ah~ Suko looks so much better in this rendition. Seriously love the sort of muted pink you used for her hair. Especially with the beautiful curls/waves you managed to do. The blue eyes and purple dress are lovely. Very nice work with the redesign.
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Yaryar, FAR less generic. Thank you so much for your input <3
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Certainly more than a step above the rest
You see those legs and you'd have thought she was blessed
I see her walking and talking and I see her every day
You just hate to see her go; But you love to see her walk away
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Dang does Suko look different.Β Honestly though I really like the more muted palette used on her.Β Another big thing that I love what your doing with these pages compared to the original is you make your characters stick out from the dark background MUCH more effectively. Bravo to you on that~
...Is Ame tied up?Β That's...a LOT different from before.
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Yaryar, definitely not taking any shortcuts! This is seeing print so I better like it.
YEEEEEEEEP. Ame's been a troublemaker ahead of time~
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Happy to hear it! It needed to be done aaaa ;;
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... I now have diabetes. Β New!Suko is so damn adorable. Β ; u;
In all seriousness, I like the new look and the change in personality. Β Definitely props to less of "Daddy's little princess" and "assertive, more mature (mentally) little sister". Β Especially seeing how she has ZERO qualms in literally applying the phrase "throw the book at them". Β c:
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Huhuuu, glad y'like it!
Yeah, she's definitely more naive than Ame by a long shot still, but Ame is also a good foil for her optimism haaaa!
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I get the "shoulder angel" vibe from this new Suko-- she really just wants to watch out for Ame and makes sure she doesn't go way over her head. Β The Jimminy Cricket to Ame's Pinocchio, if you will.
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A bit, at least to the point where she's more useful!
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All manner of comments on how much of a good change this is must be put aside for the TRUE nature of my commenting!
Brace yourself:
Lovely Long Legs
Thank you.
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Ame's dodging skills need work -w-
And really liking Suko's look nwn
And stop feeling ill all the time D:
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Haaaw, but she can't dodge right now! ;;
I just got off a med I had been on for a year+, so my hormones might be very confused erkkk
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Too lazy to dodge? -w-
Booo confused hormones :c
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I just now noticed: the Luka is strong with Suko. X3
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I would gag Ame, but that would take away from the comady
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And earn her patented wrath
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Now that I think on it, I say gag her and read the whole history to her. She seems to deem it torture, it would be perfect punishment.
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Holy wow, Suko went from cute babe to super babe. I...really like this redesign. Yup. βͺ~(>w0)b
I can't wait to see all the other differences in the comic. I definitely love the suit upgrades so far. They look really nice.
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Yar, Suko just seemed way too generic t'me, she was one of my bigger regrets! ;;
Thank you~! I'll do my best to keep it up to par~
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Could be worse. She could have thrown the bible at her.
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Ame would've gone up in flames!
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since demons reproduce differently than humans, I wonder who Suko's mother (or father) was. It can't be Lilium.
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You know I've been very confused regarding your series lately is it on hiatus while you reproduce the older pages with your newfound power skills?Β
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A redo methinks, a LOT is changing!
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