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ToadLink — Mischievous Varmits part IV
Published: 2011-11-07 15:58:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 478; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 12
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I own nothing but the writing.The rest of MV by
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
The image I referenced in the passage is: [link] And made by
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Why thank you. But remember, this is your story, I'm just finishing it.
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Now, I'm fell some writers block starting to settle in, because right now I making RS 14 and I'm saying AJ and Reese have the night of Big Mav and Fluttershy's date to themselves, but I don't know what to make them do.
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Talk, really talk, also this is the Omniscient POV you could go over to what Twilight's thought sort of begin to build up to when they're going to tell Reese
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Well talking is the generic thing to do, but I guess that's the only way. And I was planning for Twilight to tell Reese what happened after AJ and Reese start going out for a little bit. But I can Twi starting having thoughts about it now.
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Yeah that would work, aside from generic talking maybe get into some of the process of what the Apple family does with the apples. Like the homemade apple sauce or Apple Juice. (Which you can do at the same time, you steam the apples to get all the juice out of them and then you take the Apple slices 'n' stuff and crush them to make the sauce. I MISS HOME!!!!!!!)
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Yeah, or get into some stories between AJ and Reese. Like maybe make references to the show or reference your newer stories.(I can understand that you miss home, you stayed there for a majority of your life. While my family traveled a lot when I was young....hope I stay here in Amer. for the rest of my life)
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Yeah, not sure about referencing my newer stories I kind of think of this as to parallel universes. I lived in Woods Cross for ALL of my life when I wasn't vacationing. The story swapping isn't bad but I'm just thinking of setting up a reason you need to have your reader trust you as a story teller
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I see, and I understand. I was also thinking about making up what the Apple Family does during the winter, since the trees won't be growing fruit and all.
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Also, did post a new part to your dare? I just finished reading chapter 4 of "Sabotage Valkyrie".
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Great I'll check it out now.
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