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ToBiSeh — .:Run with the Wind:. Wip

Published: 2010-03-03 02:46:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 507; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Maybe a WIP of my Unicorn picture....I don't have the original anymore, I gave it to a girl in my class today. XD

If someone wants me to finish this, maybe I will, but for now I'm not sure....

Yes, I referenced the pose, it's from a book called "How to paint unicorns with Watercolor" I just got the book for the pictures of the unicorns, they are so beautiful!

Picture (c) Me

PLEASE critique this! I can't request critiques anymore since I lost my sub, but I REALLY want some!

Do NOT edit, Reproduce, Recolor, Trace, Claim as your own!
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Comments: 38

Shadow-Cipher [2010-03-07 04:03:30 +0000 UTC]

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Impact


I must say I REALLY like this. For a referenced image its very cute. I definately hope you decide to finish this. I can't say much since its a referenced picture and all. But I'll say what I can think of.

One thing that bothered me is the detail lines on some parts of the leg. Mainly the legs in the foreground. Like, the back leg bothers me because it kind of looks like its in the background too and the unicorn needs leg surgury. And the front leg bothers me because of the one line. The one that goes left to right directly below the snout. It goes a little far in, almost making that part look a bit awkward. Plus, that part of the leg seems randomly fatter out of nowhere.

But, anyways. Its nice. I really like the head and the hair especially. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/>

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ToBiSeh In reply to Shadow-Cipher [2010-03-07 04:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I've noticed the legs are odd. The front's are too skinny, the backs shouldn't be in the picture. XD I'm trying to finish it, but so far I'm too busy.

Thanks for the critique!

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Shadow-Cipher In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-07 05:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Heheh so we notice the same things. No problem amigo.

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ToBiSeh In reply to Shadow-Cipher [2010-03-07 06:32:04 +0000 UTC]

lol

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GentleFighter44 [2010-03-21 16:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Cute! (:

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ToBiSeh In reply to GentleFighter44 [2010-03-22 00:17:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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GentleFighter44 In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-22 15:33:34 +0000 UTC]

No prob. (:

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wolfspiritsd [2010-03-07 09:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Waahhhhh!! That's awesome!! I luv it!!!
Good job!! ^^

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ToBiSeh In reply to wolfspiritsd [2010-03-07 09:46:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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wolfspiritsd In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-09 08:28:43 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!!

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Jieshii-kun [2010-03-07 05:42:08 +0000 UTC]

For some weird reason, it reminds me of The Princess Bride.

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ToBiSeh In reply to Jieshii-kun [2010-03-07 06:13:46 +0000 UTC]

princess bride? what's that?

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Jieshii-kun In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-07 06:23:08 +0000 UTC]

It's a romantic-comedy. A few famous quotes like...

"Inconceivable!"
"You keep using that word. I don't think it means what you think it does."

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ToBiSeh In reply to Jieshii-kun [2010-03-07 06:31:54 +0000 UTC]

oh, i don't watch movies very much, barley Pokemon ones, and when i'm forced -or bribed with $5- to go see sappy movies with my aunt and uncle. XD

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Jieshii-kun In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-07 06:39:51 +0000 UTC]

XD!

It's an old movie that had Andre the Giant (a famous professional wrestler that passed away in 1993) in it. It's really funny from what I remember.

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ToBiSeh In reply to Jieshii-kun [2010-03-07 07:41:32 +0000 UTC]

ahh

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Jakie-the-Hedgecat [2010-03-07 04:18:10 +0000 UTC]

better than what I can do xD Very cool I like it ^^

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ToBiSeh In reply to Jakie-the-Hedgecat [2010-03-07 04:29:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Starfyire101 [2010-03-07 03:10:03 +0000 UTC]

WOW! thatz really good!

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ToBiSeh In reply to Starfyire101 [2010-03-07 03:31:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Starfyire101 In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-07 03:33:35 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome!

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Snowpuddles [2010-03-06 05:19:49 +0000 UTC]

That's really cute! <3

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ToBiSeh In reply to Snowpuddles [2010-03-06 05:25:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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XxStarLight7xX [2010-03-04 01:40:20 +0000 UTC]

this is EPIC

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ToBiSeh In reply to XxStarLight7xX [2010-03-04 04:49:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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XxStarLight7xX In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-04 20:45:00 +0000 UTC]

no prob ^^

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Sir-Genesis [2010-03-03 05:05:42 +0000 UTC]

That is a nice sketch. ^^

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ToBiSeh In reply to Sir-Genesis [2010-03-03 05:17:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Sir-Genesis In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-03 05:28:11 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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warriorcatgirl365 [2010-03-03 03:01:30 +0000 UTC]

wow its so pretty! i love horses and unicorns!

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ToBiSeh In reply to warriorcatgirl365 [2010-03-03 03:09:21 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you

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warriorcatgirl365 In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-03 03:32:19 +0000 UTC]

your welcome! *my critique* you should try to works on its back legs, hey look sort of oddly-shaped, no hard feeings.

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ToBiSeh In reply to warriorcatgirl365 [2010-03-03 05:17:40 +0000 UTC]

will do for next time. XD

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warriorcatgirl365 In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-03 06:22:30 +0000 UTC]

k
cant wait to see it the next time! good luck!

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MidnightHedgena [2010-03-03 02:56:10 +0000 UTC]

O___O Oh mai....You just killed every piece of artwork I've ever drawn....*bows humbly* ._.

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ToBiSeh In reply to MidnightHedgena [2010-03-03 03:10:33 +0000 UTC]

nah, your pictures are cuter. X3

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MidnightHedgena In reply to ToBiSeh [2010-03-03 03:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Pfft, lies. DX

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ToBiSeh In reply to MidnightHedgena [2010-03-03 05:18:05 +0000 UTC]

no lies! XD

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