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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto.
Naruto The Last (c) Masashi Kishimoto. Studio Pierrot.
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sakuracoco-7 [2023-02-08 11:45:44 +0000 UTC]

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samuraipanda85 [2017-03-02 02:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Did this really happen in the movie? They based what's his face controlling the moon on a hunch?
And why isn't Naruto and Sasuke banding together to leave Hanabi to her own devices while they charge up some kind of Super Tailed Beast Bomb with some Amataratsu flames sprinkled on to destroy the moon? Thus pre-emptively saving the world.

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tokai2000 In reply to samuraipanda85 [2017-03-05 10:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Yes, in the movie the scene with kakashi is basically the same.

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samuraipanda85 In reply to tokai2000 [2017-03-05 19:52:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow...really? They couldn't even have the bad guy shout out that the moon would strike the planet in a few days time? Just gonna assume that because Kakashi has been around the block enough that he knows that they are in a movie. He's like TFS Piccolo pointing out the three flavors of henchmen.

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AliceTedder [2016-10-08 08:28:22 +0000 UTC]

I haven't been doing big reviews long time, but I will try.
I must say that I sincerely hate "thelast" and the ending of manga as a whole. I don't hate naruhina and sasusaku, but I think that NH are very manipulative and SS were completely illogical in end. So I am glad to have your story.

Positive aspects^^: 

  • Good draw.
  • Not stupid dialogues. 
  • Excellent design of characters  (I especially want to mention great hair of Naru ♥ and sexy skirt of Saku ❤). 
  • And well as a complete lack of idiotic theme of scarves!
  • Uchiha's complete absence in the present. I hate this asshole. He have done terrible things to Sakura and Naruto. I always wanted to Sakura or Karin gave him a great punch. I hope that somewhere Karin is doing it.

    • Negative aspects =_=: 
  • Hinata was never my favorite character,and I'd prefer she died instead of Neji.͡ ͡๏̯͡๏ So to see her here is torture for me.
     
  • Toneri is a worthless villain. He only has a beautiful appearance and nothing more. He may be not suck only if you try to make him more scary or more charismatic villain.
     
  • The biggest problem is little attention is paid to narusaku. I understand that story is a slow process, but if NS is base here, is a central theme, then they should be more hints in the beginning. While we saw Sakura's melancholy to Sasuke from her side, and anything for Naruto's side. No hints. 
     
  • Due to the fact that there is no hints of narusaku, but certainly we know that in the end they will be together, follows a different problem. I am afraid that in this situation in the course of your story they will fall to the same as NH in ''thelast''. That is, love was not, and then all of a sudden appeared like a fairy tale.Nonsense.    I hope that in future you pay more attention to them and flashbacks in which they came in contact after Uchiha leaves them. More interaction is just fine.

    • Continue to improve and hope that my words have not offended you. ツ

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    Zotdanse In reply to AliceTedder [2016-10-10 12:48:34 +0000 UTC]

    Flagged as Spam

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    AliceTedder In reply to Zotdanse [2016-10-11 12:33:15 +0000 UTC]

    Hahaha, silly bot  
    NaruSaku is the best couple in this manga. And I'm not going to argue about it with you, horny Sasukephile.  

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    tokai2000 In reply to AliceTedder [2016-10-09 21:30:25 +0000 UTC]

    Thanks for your comment.

    I agree with you at some points:

    Toneri is truly a mediocre villain. At first I wanted to make an original story but I couldn't think anything good, so I took "The Last" as a base because basically what I wanted was to put the main couple into a tight situation so they could develop their relationship. Toneri is only the excuse to force this kind of situation.

    I also agree that there are little to no hints of narusaku and maybe these flashbacks were not the best choice.

    I think that Naruto and Sakura have spent a lot of time toghether during the main story and they only need a little push to conclude their story.
    From my point of view, Naruto loves Sakura ( obviously ignoring the ending and the bullshit they tell in "The Last" that he loves Sakura because his rivalry with Sasuke ) and Sakura needs to clear up her feelings and decide who is the one she truly loves.

    I cannot agree about Hinata XD. Poor thing, I dont think she deserves to die. Only stay as a secondary character.

    Thanks again for your comment, I will bear in mind and try to improve

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    StratasOmega In reply to tokai2000 [2016-10-11 19:18:08 +0000 UTC]

    I agree with you completely. Kishimoto really Digimon Adventure 02'd us this time.

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    Sinistro23 In reply to StratasOmega [2020-12-05 20:16:30 +0000 UTC]

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    Amonasiel In reply to Sinistro23 [2024-07-12 22:46:22 +0000 UTC]

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    WolfConnor In reply to AliceTedder [2016-10-08 10:15:53 +0000 UTC]

    Great comment  

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    AliceTedder In reply to WolfConnor [2016-10-08 10:44:12 +0000 UTC]

     

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    Katy-Dono [2016-10-06 18:27:39 +0000 UTC]

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    WolfConnor [2016-10-06 12:12:26 +0000 UTC]

    Sakura's in a skirt? Or it is shorts?

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    tokai2000 In reply to WolfConnor [2016-10-08 06:43:50 +0000 UTC]

    It's a skirt.

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    WolfConnor In reply to tokai2000 [2016-10-08 10:10:52 +0000 UTC]

    Too short skirt for a... mission?  

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    tokai2000 In reply to WolfConnor [2016-10-09 21:34:52 +0000 UTC]

    She wears shorts under the skirt. She will be okay

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    HJSDGCE [2016-10-05 02:08:40 +0000 UTC]

    Really loving how Kakashi's hunches are always spot on.

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    Trevyler In reply to HJSDGCE [2017-04-27 05:43:38 +0000 UTC]

    He's Kakashi. He's always right! He's my second favorite Hokage!

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    tokai2000 In reply to HJSDGCE [2016-10-06 02:26:09 +0000 UTC]

    True  

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