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edalrich [2020-07-22 09:59:34 +0000 UTC]
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AliceTedder [2016-12-24 10:42:21 +0000 UTC]
And yet romantic line is your weak side.
For 2 years Naruto never thought about his feelings for Haruno, the line does not develop. But now Sai clearly showed that Sakura loves Naruto, but Hinata didn't respond, although she should, because you showed us earlier that she hasn't let go of her feelings for him.
The story develops well, but I thought you wanted with your story to correct the mistakes of "the last" and not create new bugs.
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Sinistro23 In reply to AliceTedder [2020-12-07 10:56:44 +0000 UTC]
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TheDarkpokeone [2016-12-22 11:16:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh Sai always makes me laugh and Naruto to me this is the real Naruto and Sakura's face as well.
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Aevrum [2016-12-22 10:34:22 +0000 UTC]
Yay, Sai saves the day ... again!^^
In the top left panel I can imagine Naruto thinking "What...? It makes no sense". Dense as always
I am so agog for the genjutsu scene and Sakura's and Hinata's part, I admit I myself probably could never handle it satisfying, after what happened in the last third chapters of the Manga.
So, for example, Sakura blushing is slightly OOC (but I could easily imagine in another universe Kishi also putting in something like that, after what he had done during the war arc with NaruSaku moments ), but it's easily imaginable that she slowly started to realize after Sasuke's 2 years of abscence without having to worry for him, that there is something "wrong" with her feelings to him and not trying to blind out the parts she didn't want to accept. That part is left to the imagination of us readers I think, but maybe you will try to clear thinks up in the coming chapters.
To alternate the story of The Last, after where chapter 699 left us totally confused, is simply a daunting task, but till now its simply great and I think its hard to make it worse than the original movie
Just my little thoughts, but I think I was as always interpreting too much^^
And your drawing is simply amazing and fitting as always, I wish I could draw like that, but I'm totally untalented and too lazy^^
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phantomchief In reply to Zotdanse [2016-12-22 19:44:07 +0000 UTC]
Let people enjoy what they want to enjoy. I don' think most people ship something, look at fanart, and read fanfiction because they care about canon. People can have differing opinions about how to enjoy something, and they don't need other people telling them HOW something has to be enjoyed. Your ship is canon and you can glad about that. Ours didn't, but we still like the dynamic so we create fan art/fics.
(And you wasting your time posting comments on a doujinshi of a ship you don't even like is even more hilarious. Wouldn't you rather spend your time with canon/fanart/fanfiction of your own ship?)
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KonohasCrimsonFox In reply to phantomchief [2016-12-23 17:44:23 +0000 UTC]
Trolls everywhere. I think it has to do with Boruto manga declining in sales rapidly that they need something to vent their anger on, not to mention that Naruto is dead.
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Aevrum In reply to Zotdanse [2016-12-22 22:36:03 +0000 UTC]
I dont know why Im even responding to that, but anyway I just wanted to clarify things espacially for Tokai.
My English isnt exactly the best and I now think is shouldnt even have posted my comment here in the first place, because I cant really elaborate what I think very well, writing it down in English.
It was foolish to think of my post not being missunderstood.
I just wanted to write a very short text mainly to point out the general difficulties for any artist to change a thing (in this case a finished movie) to an opposite way, without changing too much of its foundation (here its main plot and its general course of action). Because I, as a reader who has watched the movie, can not completely look at this Doujin unbiased, without comparing it to the actual movie, no matter if I want to or not.
I admit that this was probably totally missplaced here as a comment without much constructive input.
I have to admit I like NaruHina, but like NaruSaku much more and I think for myself that instead of the "original" The Last, there could have also been a NaruSaku movie making equally sense.
Im overly happy, how the changes Tokai made to the story till now, are totally in place, atmospheric and storywise.
And I want to quickly explain my Naruto quote, because I think it was maybe misunderstood by you.
I just wanted to write what I thought he was innocently thinking in the panel, it was NOT a thing against the story, how you maybe interpreted it.
Now, that you have the confirmation that I like NaruSaku, go on and bash me, I will not respond again. There are so great Sasuke, SasuSaku and NaruHina fans and I respect your opinion, but seeing someone actually enjoying making fun of other peoples opinion, without constructiveness makes me really sad and feel a little bit of pity. And yes, Ive actually read some other comments of you on other works yesterday, and it makes it even worse, could you please invest your time in other things?
This comment feels like spam to me, but I think I had to try to clarify some things, seeing my comment getting kind of abused.
I want to appologies to the readers and espacially Tokai, I simply messed everything up with my comment, its spreading bad mood everywhere, im really sorry.
I hope this doesnt also lead to misunderstandings, everyone who feels attacked after reading this, please dont, it was never my intention, I just cant articulate myself very well. So before I mess up even more I will rather stop now^^
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AliceTedder In reply to Aevrum [2016-12-24 10:55:38 +0000 UTC]
Don't listen to this freak of nature. He is SSphile because he believes that "Sasuke is the guy who spreading Sakura Uchihas legs." comments.deviantart.com/1/6382…
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KonohasCrimsonFox [2016-12-22 06:13:33 +0000 UTC]
Good work. I can only imagine the backlash Kishi would have gotten if he had illustrated this scene somewhere in the manga. What a waste of opportunity.
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KonohasCrimsonFox In reply to Zotdanse [2016-12-23 17:40:00 +0000 UTC]
You came ala the way here just to say that Who's butt hurt I'm actually happy with the direction he went with. Trash the pairings and story is what I would have done too if the editors never let me had my way. Like who the fuck cares if he made is bucks or not. The majority of his readers outside of japan pirates his stuff anyways.
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KonohasCrimsonFox In reply to Zotdanse [2016-12-23 18:34:17 +0000 UTC]
I don't have time for this shit. no ones whining. I don't care and people don't care. Only pro Enders care. The majority moved on to better thing or become just like me and Tabata-san (mangaka of Black Clover) inherited the torch of Narutoverse in our works.
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