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Oh wow!! This is so cute!!! The sleepy little girl adventurer reminds me of my Bronia lol
And the cheerful girl is the sorceress who has almost discovered immortality? That did come as a surprise! I thought the title character would be the one wearing the hood.
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'This library' sounds better since they're talking about a specific thing that's right there. This isn't a general rule, but a trick to help remember is that you'd say 'the thing' if it's not present, and 'this thing' if you can point at it.
'You are' sounds very formal. If you wanted a more friendly and relaxed tone for that bubble, I'd use the contraction 'You're'.
"I would be grateful." is a stronger word choice here.
Again, if you're going for a friendly conversational tone, contracting 'she is' to 'she's' would help.
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Ah, thank you. I will try to remember.
We have already translated this manga to the end, but I think that I will translate my other mangas, and then it will be very useful to me!
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I hope. English is a pretty crazy language to write in, and not all the corrections or improvements a native speaker can make can be quantified, sometimes 'this just sounds better' is really the only answer. Its not a very formal language, a lot of common speech is basically slang, and the language is full of homonyms. Even native speakers often don't realize the 'proper' definition of many of the words they use in daily language, only knowing the colloquial use.
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