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Created in Apophysis; no post work except for title and border.PLEASE FULL VIEW for great detail.
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Enjoy ..... Tom
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Comments: 29
krim [2004-10-08 00:09:31 +0000 UTC]
This piece is excellent - you don't usually see such smooth results in fractal work. However, the typography is really quite bad, the bevel is way too strong. The font is fine, in fact it's probably the best choice and matches really well with the image but yeah, take away the bevel. Perhaps try a medium gray on a new layer with blend mode color/linear burn. Or even if you just use white and give it a translucent appearance...? Anyway, looks great, if it weren't for the text I would buy it as a print.
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TomWilcox In reply to krim [2004-10-08 00:24:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your comments. Actually, when I sell my work it is always matted and I cover the text in every case anyway. I can't see charging 375.00 for a 20x30 piece that looks like a poster.
Tom
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aibrean [2004-06-12 03:55:00 +0000 UTC]
totally love the simplistic look of it..very modern
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TomWilcox In reply to aibrean [2004-06-12 09:17:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot. Yeah, I think it looks pretty contemporary as well. I did a second image that's even better but I lost it I think.
Tom
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CheshireGrinning [2004-05-29 22:38:38 +0000 UTC]
OH WOW! I love this! the precise softness and flow of the color and sharpness of form gives off an impresion of light reflecting off of metal or summit...true a great piece!
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TomWilcox In reply to CheshireGrinning [2004-05-30 01:45:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the great remarks and for the "Atmosphere" Fav!
Tom
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chip7 [2004-05-29 00:30:21 +0000 UTC]
This is excellent!! But i agree with eXthemaX, the text needs work. Needs to be more subtle, smaller and of another font. It doesn't flow with the rest of the image. Try out a smaller border too, see if it works.
Cheers!!
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TomWilcox In reply to chip7 [2004-05-29 00:41:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your comments. I do respect your opinion but need to ultimately need to rely on my years of experience working with type. The wide border was chosen for this piece to draw the viewer in. I chose, however, a subdued greytone for the border line and Copyright. I'm pleased with the overall result. I wanted a hi-tech but sophisticated look overall.
Tom
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chip7 In reply to TomWilcox [2004-05-29 03:27:01 +0000 UTC]
After a good 2nd look, I'll agree that the borders works good, i'm just no fan of thick borders that's all ! But i still say that the text fonts/coloring is too distracting.
The way i see it is that you have a relatively dark image, with a pole of brightness near the center, where you want viewer attention. But then you have another pole of brightness on the text, taking away some attention from the center-peice. A more subtle tone, possibly the same as your copyright notice would fit better IMO.
Make no mistake, i find this render very beautifull, but that text is nagging me!
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chip7 In reply to chip7 [2004-05-29 20:21:36 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry i take no offence in you defending your choice! because it's exactly that: Your choice, your art, your message, your wished effect on the viewer.
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TomWilcox In reply to chip7 [2004-05-29 12:11:08 +0000 UTC]
Please don't misunderstand, I really do appreciate and welcome advice of all kinds and I know that you are sincere in your comments. I think it's always a brave thing to make suggestions on others images. I do it occasionally too, and often it has to do with post work and not the image as you also have done. I sincerely thank you for being brave enough to make a constructive remark.
It is equally difficult to respond in defense of a particular choice. My main point though is that I do want the viewer to be drawn to the text because it is added as a design element, a part of the whole. I start with solid color text and apply a brushed aluminum finish to the text. I wanted to match the silvery haze in the image (the Atmosphere).
It's always a risk to appear to to be rejecting a suggestion from a viewer but, in fact, I do sincerely appreciate your suggestion. Sometimes I wholeheartedly agree and sometimes I stubbernly "hold my ground". And by the way, I have others that have commented on the same point so you're not alone.
Tom
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eXthemaX [2004-05-28 21:49:15 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful render
but I think the text needs some work here
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TomWilcox In reply to koop72 [2004-05-28 23:50:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for your comments on "ATMOSPHERE"!
Tom
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lauratyler [2004-05-28 18:38:23 +0000 UTC]
oOOOo I love the softness of is one. It has a great flow!
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TomWilcox In reply to lauratyler [2004-05-28 23:52:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot Laura. I really appreciate your comments.
Tom
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Aeires [2004-05-28 15:18:47 +0000 UTC]
Nice form and beautiful gradient. They compliment each other well.
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TomWilcox In reply to Aeires [2004-05-28 23:45:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot Jeff. Just got home and was suprised at the response. Need to explore the gallery.
Tom
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TomWilcox In reply to cosmy [2004-05-28 23:43:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot gor the great comments. Thanks too for the Fav.
Tom
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littledeviltoo [2004-05-28 12:58:00 +0000 UTC]
I think this is a very expressive flame.. and all the extra black helps it..
But sorry.. I do not like the bevel in the title... to me it's a bit too harsh...
Something a bit more subtle I think would be nice.. but keep the placement..
I believe that would then acheive what you were after.
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TomWilcox In reply to littledeviltoo [2004-05-29 00:01:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your comments and for the feedback of the font. I really do take seriously all suggestions but in this case I am not convinced. I used a very "hi-tech" font called "Computer" and after living with it for a day I still like the choice. Sorry; but I honestly appreciate the feedback.
Tom
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littledeviltoo In reply to TomWilcox [2004-05-29 09:37:06 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome...
Feedback is always good I believe...
But I also hear you in your feelings and decisions..
The font I love.. the bevel is what I didn't like...
But your art is wonderful... and is your creation... no matter how anyone else feels.. (=
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nickick [2004-05-28 12:50:07 +0000 UTC]
oh spiffy swirls bro, I really like em, but that typo doesn't fit in somehow and I'm not a big fan of bevel either
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TomWilcox In reply to nickick [2004-05-29 00:07:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for your comments and feedback. I still like the font choice however .
Tom
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eeron [2004-05-28 12:14:02 +0000 UTC]
nice job. Loving the detail. The text is a bit too distracting. Perhaps a smaller/softer font would be better?
Nice all the same
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TomWilcox In reply to eeron [2004-05-28 12:23:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot and for taking the time to comment. My concept on this piece was to create an art poster so I wanted the title to be an intrgral graphic element.
Tom
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