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TotallyTranslucent ā€” Beat
Published: 2009-03-02 22:21:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Starts soft
tap tap tap
Louder and Louder
until it Booms in your chest
and your body has to move
it has to shake
and sway
leap spin turn
Electric charge
zap
iā€™m gone
lost in the music
in the pounding of the blood in my ears
deafening
it drowns out all else
i let go and
surrender to the Beat
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Comments: 7

Eve-Francesca [2009-03-04 05:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Great job! I love the description!

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-03-08 22:40:34 +0000 UTC]

eeehhh thanx but this one was kinda lame. but hey i got 5 ec points in language arts for getting it published in the schools literary magazine so hey im good!!!

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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-08 23:30:54 +0000 UTC]

I like it. And you got points for it so that's a bonus.

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-03-08 23:38:43 +0000 UTC]

thanx. ya and i really need all the extra credit i can get. what with late work and crappy work and oter stuff...im just glad our new trimester just started here and all our grades are cleared so we can start new.

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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-08 23:55:59 +0000 UTC]

That's always a good feeling. We're starting a new trimeseter tomorrow. So back to school I go.

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-03-09 00:07:59 +0000 UTC]

lol good luck!!!!

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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-09 00:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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