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Description What if I told you
My life is a lie?
What if I said that
I’m going to die?
That behind every smile
I’m ready to cry.
And behind every giggle
Is a forlorn sigh.
The sparkle in my eye
That makes me look like I can fly
Is a lie.
Because I’m going to die
And I’m forbidden to cry.
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Comments: 19

PerpetuallyLuminous [2009-08-30 12:42:58 +0000 UTC]

thats true.... u violate everybody.... xDD
ummmm i lik the rhyme schme, it was unusual, u bettr be in screaming pens this year, first meeting is the 25th (day after lunchnreadbunch) for 2 periods, but im not sure what periods.

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to PerpetuallyLuminous [2009-08-30 18:00:33 +0000 UTC]

uh ya im gonna be in sreaming pens!!!! i just didnt no when the meeting was have they even made any announcement about it?? omg arent u excited about the cast list??? doesnt it go up tomorrow??

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PerpetuallyLuminous In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-08-30 22:14:04 +0000 UTC]

YAH ZOMX.
i get news first xDD
AHHHHH

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Eve-Francesca [2009-08-29 20:34:39 +0000 UTC]

I like the rhyme scheme in this poem. It's also very sad, but in a good way. Great job!

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-08-29 20:43:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks! and hey its been a while! sorrry its been like three months...

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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-08-29 21:24:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Yeah, it has been a while. How've you been? How was your summer?

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-08-29 23:18:32 +0000 UTC]

good i spent a little over two weeeks in greece. first we went to an island and then we spent some time in my dad's village. it was fun...

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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-09-01 01:22:23 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome! You have family in Greece? Lucky girl! I bet it's beautiful up there.

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-09-03 00:03:05 +0000 UTC]

ya it is.....so peaceful u know? o and i read about ur canoeing trip! thats awesome! sounds fun apart from the bodily harm.....

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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-09-03 00:04:10 +0000 UTC]

I bet! Thanks. Yeah, it was fun. I had a great time. But the bodily harm, not so fun. Luckily the sunburn has turned into a tan now and the bruises are fading.

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-09-03 00:09:19 +0000 UTC]

o well thats good at least....a little tan to pay u back for the pain.

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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-09-03 00:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. That's the good part.

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Tanjellokiwi [2009-08-29 20:32:34 +0000 UTC]

YOUR GONNA DIE QAQ
wait thats a good thing.......maybe.......

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Tanjellokiwi [2009-08-29 20:42:43 +0000 UTC]

WHAT?????!!!!! CCCRRRYYYY UUU WANT ME TO DIEEEEEEEE!!!!!

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Tanjellokiwi In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-08-29 20:44:35 +0000 UTC]

NUUUUUUUUUUUUU
QAQ

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Tanjellokiwi [2009-08-29 20:47:41 +0000 UTC]

b-but...y-you said it might be a g-good thing....sniffle.

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Tanjellokiwi In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-08-29 20:52:26 +0000 UTC]

;_; yes but thats only coz you make me feel violated XD

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Tanjellokiwi [2009-08-29 23:17:43 +0000 UTC]

hee. yes well thats because i violate people.

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Tanjellokiwi In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-08-30 14:33:50 +0000 UTC]

ik......

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