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Published: 2009-02-16 22:55:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description FOREVER
By Karena Bakas

Forever
is a timeless word.
It means to never cease.

Forever
is to take your time
and slowly find release.

Forever
is to always have faith,
unquestionable belief.

Forever
is to hurt and cry
but eventually find relief.

Forever
can be any place and
anything you want to do.

Forever
is the only word that says
how long I will love you.
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Comments: 11

Fuzzle-wit [2009-02-19 04:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Ooh! I really like the rhythm and rhyme scheme of this poem! And the message is beautiful. Great job!

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Fuzzle-wit [2009-02-21 18:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!! Its one of my first I've submitted! I'm glad someone likes it...

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Fuzzle-wit In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-02-22 04:52:27 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! You did a really good job on it!

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Fuzzle-wit [2009-02-22 19:53:53 +0000 UTC]

thanx. i havent submitted--or written--in a long time. what do u think i should write about next??

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Fuzzle-wit In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-02 00:38:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
I know how you feel; I haven't written in such a long time, and I get so annoyed when I don't get the chance to write. It's irritating.

Hrm.... well, what inspires you? When I'm in the mood to write something, I look for something that catches my interest. Or I simply write what's on my mind. If you're pressed for ideas, I'd be happy to give some suggestions, too.

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Fuzzle-wit [2009-03-02 03:03:25 +0000 UTC]

o i know i hate when i dont write cuz i feel so....not artistic. im so wierd. and ya gimme suggestions!

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Fuzzle-wit In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-04-12 01:17:41 +0000 UTC]

I know! I hate feeling not artistic! It's SO annoying!
Hrm..... as for a suggestion I could give you... what if you wrote something about seasons? I've been in a very spring-ish mood, and maybe looking at the weather or the scenery would inspire you?

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Fuzzle-wit [2009-04-13 02:05:07 +0000 UTC]

lol ya. thats a good idea. hmmm...but how to make it wierd like me??? oh i know ill make it like super sarcastic. it snowed here like two days ago so my spring mood hasnt permanently kicked in yet......but my sarcastic mood never goes away!!!!

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Fuzzle-wit In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-04-13 03:06:56 +0000 UTC]

That sounds like a good idea to me! I'd say run with it!

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Fuzzle-wit [2009-04-20 02:10:56 +0000 UTC]

o i completely forgot to write it. but i did write a new poem! check it out!

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Fuzzle-wit In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-04-20 21:28:51 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, you did? How awesome! I'll check it out right now!

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