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Published: 2009-03-02 22:18:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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So you get on the bike,No big deal, right?
You pedal and steer,
Don’t feel any fear.
But just by bad luck
Your wheel hits a rock
And you fly through the air.
Life starts out easy.
All pampering, pleasing.
But things can change fast,
Your good luck won’t last.
You’ll hit some rocks, sure,
But there’s always a cure:
People who care.
So when you’re riding a bike,
Or going for a hike,
Or making a friend,
Or breaking the trend,
You might get hurt, but let yourself go.
You can keep going as long as you know
You’ve got handle bars there.
Comments: 23
Eve-Francesca [2009-03-04 05:40:05 +0000 UTC]
I love this! Such a sweet poem about friendship and always getting back on the horse... Or the bike in this case.
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-03-08 22:39:27 +0000 UTC]
lol thanx. a lot of these poems are written at like 12 at night so its good to know they arent horrible...
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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-08 23:31:14 +0000 UTC]
I do a lot of my writing late at night. That is, when I have school off.
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-03-08 23:39:36 +0000 UTC]
ya i do it late at night cuz its the only time i really have. and it helps me get to sleep...idk im wierd.
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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-08 23:52:35 +0000 UTC]
I tend to start writing in the afternoon and I continue 'till I'm finished with a story, which tends to be late.
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-03-09 00:04:20 +0000 UTC]
lol ya my mom comes and yells at me to turn off the light all the time. it happens so often that all she has to do is open the door and glare at me and i know to turn it off.
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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-09 00:14:39 +0000 UTC]
Lol! My mom has to tell me to go to bed and get off the dang computer.
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-04-01 01:47:46 +0000 UTC]
ya me too the sad thing is im not being social and talking to people or youtubing or going on da.....no im doing fucking hw!!!!! all the time!!!!! and if u think im lying cuz hannah gets the same work as me and has a lot more other stuff and still gets it done then i have an excuse....IM NOT FREAKING PERECT LIKE HANNAH!!!!! god im sssoooo jealous of that girl!!! so freaking awesome! and she knows it too! tell her all the time....i dont know how she does it! *breathes heavily* im ok. im ok. sigh. im supposed to be doing hw right now actually and its the middle of break. poo.
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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-04-01 03:25:53 +0000 UTC]
Awww. That totally sucks, hun. -hugs- Good luck with all of the work, and let me know if you need any help. I know what it feels like to be jealous of a best friend. I was jealous of one of my best friends in middle school for the same reason as you.
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-04-03 01:42:42 +0000 UTC]
lol ya no she knows im jealous and its not like im mean to her or petty about it. i make it very plain who im jealous of and why. and that girl has some self esteem problems and DEFINITELY some self image problems cuz she doesnt think shes smart talented or beautiful and shes all three!!! but i got her back....i tell her how it is every day!!!
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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-04-03 16:58:57 +0000 UTC]
It's good that you're not mean to her. That'd suck. And it'd be the wrong thing to do. Awww. Being a teenager is hard. =/ It really is. The self image is stuff is such a challenge to go through. Keep praising her and telling her how wonderful she is! It might not necessarily help - all of the self image stuff is mental. It's all what you tell yourself in your head, so compliments often don't do much if someone feels that bad about themselves - but at least it's a sweet thing to do.
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-04-07 02:56:32 +0000 UTC]
lol shes not like a self hater (which is good cuz i would smack her!) but ya she just doesnt get it. anyway do u have any mean haters on ur back??
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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-04-07 04:52:45 +0000 UTC]
No, I don't. Thank goodness. I try not to talk to people who seem suspicious. Suspicious meaning your stereotypical shallow teenage girl that talks shit about everyone. There's a few girls like that at my small school, and I just keep my distance from them.
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-04-08 02:19:56 +0000 UTC]
thats probably smart. heh heh well the thing is i do kinda talk shit about people....but only people who really deserve it...u know? like im not just mean to anyone. but theres these really bitchy and slutty girl who are always walking up to us and doing random creepy crap so ya.....we dont say very nice things about them......hannah will tell u.....shes better with the words
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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-04-08 03:37:57 +0000 UTC]
Well those girls do deserve it. Girls like that are just stupid. I try not to talk shit about people, but I'm not perfect, so there's plenty of times when I fail at it.
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-04-13 01:56:35 +0000 UTC]
lol ya sometimes people make it way too easy.
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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-04-13 03:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, they do. =/
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to xoedward16 [2009-03-03 23:27:33 +0000 UTC]
yay thanx!!! i submitted it to eagle talons and someone told me it was accepted i think but i have no idea.
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PerpetuallyLuminous [2009-03-02 23:13:30 +0000 UTC]
who's yo handelbar?
(that ssounds weird.)
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to PerpetuallyLuminous [2009-03-03 23:26:44 +0000 UTC]
lol ya it does. idk u and amina probly...
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TotallyTranslucent In reply to PerpetuallyLuminous [2009-03-04 03:07:25 +0000 UTC]
<3 *blows kisses and hugs*
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