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Published: 2009-03-04 03:30:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description       .Soft.           .Hard.
    .Blissful.         .Painful.
.Funny..Cute.   .Sarcastic..Ugly
  .Sweet..Whole~Bitter..Shattered.
      .Warm..Comfort~Cold..Fear.
          .Seductive~Repulsive.
                .Fresh~Cliché.
                   .Worth It.
                       .Yes.
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Comments: 10

Fuzzle-wit [2009-04-20 21:51:02 +0000 UTC]

That's so cool! I love the shape of the poem and I think my favorite lines are the last two: .Worth it. Yes. Brilliant!

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Fuzzle-wit [2009-04-27 03:16:19 +0000 UTC]

thanx! lol i was too lazy to put a lot of effort into it so i just wrote something random. but hey, i tried something new...thats always good right?

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Fuzzle-wit In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-05-02 15:14:19 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! Trying something new is always good!

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Eve-Francesca [2009-03-04 05:42:02 +0000 UTC]

I love how you made this a heart. It's a fabulous poem too! How'd you do that with the text?

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Eve-Francesca [2009-03-08 22:41:34 +0000 UTC]

well i did it on microsoft word with tabs and stuff. it took a while. but ugh it still didnt turn out right on da. but its ok people got the idea.

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Eve-Francesca In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-08 23:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. They did.

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PerpetuallyLuminous [2009-03-04 03:37:17 +0000 UTC]

OMG its soooo cute i loooove it

gosh ur so creative, i have all the same boring styles

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to PerpetuallyLuminous [2009-03-08 22:33:01 +0000 UTC]

lol thanx ya i try to do random different stuff. but wait thats not tru!!! u do the sonnets!!!

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PerpetuallyLuminous In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-09 01:38:44 +0000 UTC]

... so?

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TotallyTranslucent [2009-03-04 03:31:42 +0000 UTC]

o dang it!!! it didnt end up quite right but whatever good enough. thats 7!!!! ......out of 100. sigh.

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