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TotallyTranslucent — Prophetic
Published: 2009-02-16 23:01:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Black and white
Lost our sight
Colors gone
No more song
Kisses and hugs
Poodles and pugs
Gone
Lonely, sad
Confused and mad
What happened here?
The flower seared
The kids at play
All burned away
Gone
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Comments: 9

Tanjellokiwi [2009-02-18 21:50:45 +0000 UTC]

omg
ppl in ET thought it was an emo poem
but i rlly like it

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Tanjellokiwi [2009-02-18 23:58:26 +0000 UTC]

whats et?? and thanx. idk sometimes i can be emo. and sometimes im just totally random... w/e i just write whatever.

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Tanjellokiwi In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-02-19 02:01:40 +0000 UTC]

ikr
et=eagle talons
hannah said one of my stories was too violent
but rlly....

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Tanjellokiwi [2009-02-21 19:07:56 +0000 UTC]

ooh violence??? i need to read this story!!!! im still trying to figure how to watch people. so once i do im gonna watch u k? see u whenever...

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Tanjellokiwi In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-02-21 19:45:04 +0000 UTC]

its barely violent i dun c y hannah said it was tho

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Tanjellokiwi [2009-02-21 22:07:35 +0000 UTC]

wait its submitted to da right? if it is im gonna read it. k im gonna try to watch u right now!!

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Tanjellokiwi In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-02-21 22:14:42 +0000 UTC]

meh
i didnt finish it yet....

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TotallyTranslucent In reply to Tanjellokiwi [2009-02-21 22:30:50 +0000 UTC]

ok ya aminas isnt done yet either. she asked me to read it when shes finished. ill read urs too!!!

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Tanjellokiwi In reply to TotallyTranslucent [2009-02-21 22:49:09 +0000 UTC]

okay~

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