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I'm quite sure you've already seen at least a dozen other writers use this picture in their captions... Well, now it's my turn!~ TOTEM
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I would like more of this story. So Chester is the only guy with the power, or does he end up giving some to Devin as they 'get it on'? >.>
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please make the next parts!
The new Amy and Devin have sex. Make a baby and get married 
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Well, we'll see. I'm currently working on a "prequel" story for this one, so let's wait for that first! :'D
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I would do that to one of my exes if I had the chance. Same kind of situation too..
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Chester has a talent many of us would like to possess. As for Amy, she got rather more than she deserved, but serves her right!
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does she disappear?
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well i should use it too^^ if all use it xD anyway great work
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This is a interesting possession story, good job on this one.
It be cool to see a futur story with this idea but instead of one man taking possession of the wife of his friend. Two men decide to take possession of girls who cheated on them and in their new bodies. They decide to enter a relationship with each other to mock the body they possess. But as time goes on, they begin to fall for real in love with each other.
That's just a idea of course, but tell me what do you think about it, I hope you like it either way.
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Havenβt seen your work posted for a while so Iβm glad youβre back. Still looking forward to boyfriends and punishments or. 5
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Boyfriends and Punishments - Episode 5 Β is already out, so I assume that you meant ep. 6. I guarantee you, it's also on its way! I just needΒ to finish the last few lines...
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Yep. Meant 6. My bad
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Pt. 5. Stupid autocorrect.Β
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"Chet?"
"Yeah"
"It's Devin."
"S'up?"
"I was wondering. You said you become people?"
"Yep, in fact I've been thinking of swapping. Chester is a bit too boring."
"Amy cheated on me and I was wondering."
"Oh, cool, I haven't been a woman in fifty years."
"You've been a woman?"
"On yeah, you live few dozen centuries, you get curious. Besides, compared to the dark ages, women have it great these days."
"So you'll do it?"
"I'm bored of Chester. Sure. If you'll have me?"
"What?"
"Well, if I become Amy, I won't be able to do her legal assistant job. She'd have to quit. But since she's getting married, no one would think it weird if she quit. Ya know, to start a family."
"Woah, I wasn't..."
"I know it might be weird at first..."
"No, no, I just wasn't expecting you to want to... with a guy."
"Devin, I already said women have it great these days. What do you think I meant?"
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Wow, this actually sounds like a very plausible backstory to the caption! You've done a brilliant job figuring out an identity for Chester. (To be honest, while writing this story I nearly only concentrated on the personalities of Devin and Amy. :'D)
Would you mind if I actually turned a few of your ideas into an official "prequel" caption for this one? ^^
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Go right ahead. Chester sounds like the most interesting part of the story. I suspect he lives as Amy for a few years and then gets bored of Devin, disappears one night after taking someone else's body. Devin is left wondering why Amy never came home. And has to raise the two kids, 4 and 1, all by himself.
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I love this prequel story to this caption and now I want to see this.Β
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