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Published: 2017-04-28 17:25:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 182506; Favourites: 741; Downloads: 661
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According to this poll that I had on deviantART, you want to see more costume gun captions. Well, here you go!
I'll be away from posting for a couple of days but I will read your comments and respond to them once I come back.
~ TOTEM
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Comments: 31
arianagrande560 [2020-11-03 05:09:54 +0000 UTC]
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Terraac [2018-01-27 21:40:25 +0000 UTC]
"rucksack"? wait... there is no translation for this word too?
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totemscaptions In reply to Terraac [2018-01-29 12:26:20 +0000 UTC]
A "backpack" would mean the same. Both "backpack" and "rucksack" are proper English words, however, the latter is a loanword from German. Since I'm not a native English speaker (I'm not German either), this just happened to be the word that first came into my mind... ^^
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Ericamelted [2017-06-30 09:54:08 +0000 UTC]
when she deflate.. does she.... disappear forever?
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totemscaptions In reply to Ericamelted [2017-07-10 11:38:50 +0000 UTC]
Unfortunately, yes. What Collin did was absolutely cruel: He killed a human person. If you ask me, the torment he himself had experienced wouldn't still justify such a horrible act.
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Ericamelted In reply to totemscaptions [2017-07-10 13:06:34 +0000 UTC]
this is dark.... and kinda sexy.... what... what does she feels as she... fade? pleasure?
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totemscaptions In reply to Ericamelted [2017-07-11 10:34:17 +0000 UTC]
Emptiness, I guess... All her thoughts, feelings and sensations slowly fading away, disappearing. Everything slowing down, like falling asleep but stronger. And suddenly, she just stops existing.
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Ericamelted In reply to totemscaptions [2017-07-12 08:05:39 +0000 UTC]
this... this is dark but... but kinda exciting...
whaw were her last thoughts then?
do you have more storyes like that? i mean: that brings the victims to the end of their existences?
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totemscaptions In reply to rzdziarek [2017-05-10 13:26:46 +0000 UTC]
Yes, it most definitely is.
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totemscaptions In reply to NikkiLFalcon [2017-05-02 16:00:27 +0000 UTC]
Glad to hear you like it!
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metrix32 [2017-04-29 14:42:51 +0000 UTC]
love these devious costume gun stories keep them coming!!
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sanzcarmen [2017-04-29 14:35:09 +0000 UTC]
Revenge is always a good reason to make captions. I like the battered character to be triumphant at the end of the caption. The shooting of an innocent girl seems to me secondary, the important thing is the satisfaction of doing justice by any method.
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arianagrande560 In reply to sanzcarmen [2021-05-02 01:03:47 +0000 UTC]
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totemscaptions In reply to FearsomeTrain16 [2017-05-02 16:01:01 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure there will be more once I just find time for them!
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amandahawkins71 In reply to RedHunterX [2017-04-28 22:49:25 +0000 UTC]
It's interesting, and well written... but let's not lose sight of the fact that poor little Ron just murdered an innocent girl. When you look at the big picture, that's kind of hard to ignore.
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RedHunterX In reply to amandahawkins71 [2017-04-29 09:45:49 +0000 UTC]
Eh, I understand what you are saying. And if it was real, yeah, I would be scared too. But since it's fiction and this is a pretty short story (so there is no idea how the bully sister was or how Ron life would be now), I don't mind it. (Plus, a toy gun who can transform peoples into skinsuit? I think we can wait 2075 before it happen. )
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amandahawkins71 In reply to RedHunterX [2017-04-30 08:59:46 +0000 UTC]
Fair enough. Peace.
(2075? That sounds pretty techno-optimistic...)
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awakener17 In reply to amandahawkins71 [2017-04-29 02:03:39 +0000 UTC]
It's not murder, it's being made inanimate and her life is still being lived, even if it's not her living ut
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amandahawkins71 In reply to awakener17 [2017-04-29 09:38:13 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, I gots to disagree. Her mind is gone with the wind, and that's what really matters (ask anybody). Just because no one else knows (other than the bully) doesn't mean it ain't murder. It just means he totally got away with it. And just because he totally got away with it don't make it right.
Yeah, I know, it's just a story, so no big deal. But if this technology ever hits the shelves, expect lawsuits galore.
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Pinkslime In reply to amandahawkins71 [2017-09-05 21:31:57 +0000 UTC]
If this follows rules of the original costume gun than she will sloly wake up over the nest 1/2 a year and her mind will permanently merge with Ron's
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MCKirby99 In reply to amandahawkins71 [2017-06-05 02:13:21 +0000 UTC]
I don't mind that. As long as I become my dream girl, I don't care if I get sued for "murder".
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arianagrande560 In reply to MCKirby99 [2021-05-02 01:04:42 +0000 UTC]
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