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Published: 2012-07-27 17:09:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 493; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 5
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Description we are where:

            slick-nostriled lovers with green-glass hands – how you
used to haunt those
windowpanes, down by the
seaside, then waves going

crash, crash, crash

(they would go)
                             but we
                             will settle
                             eventually

and for now, your hands
                                        ; my thighs,
                              comet-tinged and solstice-twisted –


this is how we dance, here where
in this motley room
with no ceiling and no stars, eyes
parched

earth-like, we
revolve

and revolve
and revolve
[e_volve]


and driftwood, i whispered
once; we are just waste

            what that ocean left behind
            in its grandiosely surging wake

because it didn't want us

anymore
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Comments: 15

cality [2012-08-03 14:08:50 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. Good luck for the contest!

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towards-eternity In reply to cality [2012-08-03 14:29:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks a million!

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cality In reply to towards-eternity [2012-08-04 16:19:01 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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DamagedHomewrecker [2012-07-28 03:33:49 +0000 UTC]

i really like the imagery sooo much

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towards-eternity In reply to DamagedHomewrecker [2012-07-28 09:36:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks love!! <3

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tonepainter [2012-07-28 02:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done!

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towards-eternity In reply to tonepainter [2012-07-28 09:36:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! [=

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Lakkus [2012-07-28 01:08:13 +0000 UTC]

This broke my heart in the most amazing way possible Wonderful as always

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towards-eternity In reply to Lakkus [2012-07-28 09:36:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks a million

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Pencil-Wolf [2012-07-27 19:57:07 +0000 UTC]

I hope you win the contest!
As usual, a beautiful piece of poetry.

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towards-eternity In reply to Pencil-Wolf [2012-07-28 09:36:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!! <33

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Pencil-Wolf In reply to towards-eternity [2012-07-28 17:21:59 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome! ^^

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LionesseRampant [2012-07-27 18:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Nice I like the format

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towards-eternity In reply to LionesseRampant [2012-07-27 19:23:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks (:

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LionesseRampant In reply to towards-eternity [2012-07-27 21:20:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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