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Published: 2008-03-21 02:12:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 719; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 7
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This was done at age 13, along with everything behind it, unless the description says different.

EDIT;

Gave her kimono a bow in the back, and I shortened the hair. I also did a tidbit of work elsewhere..... Betcha' can't see what two things I worked on! XD

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Remember that hideous picture of 'Aiko and the Moth'? Well, this is my new design for Aiko! As you see, I've gotten better at kimonos~ XD;

I'm actually kind of amazed at how I just whipped this up! Normally pieces like this will take days! One, because I tend to give up and set it aside, and two, because the sketches are so scrappy that I get caught up in it and don't know where to go for the final lineart. But apparently I've improved greatly! *triumph*

Aiko (c) Me
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Comments: 37

Kioko-dono [2008-07-16 04:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Fantasmal. x3

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Kioko-dono [2008-07-16 05:42:56 +0000 UTC]

Fantasmal? XD;

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Kioko-dono In reply to ToxicOxygen [2008-07-16 11:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Yush fantasmal, one of my many words that seem to appear when I am tired and running solely on caffeine. x3

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Rosary0fSighs [2008-03-27 01:21:14 +0000 UTC]

beautiful piece
she has a lovely innocence and expression
relaxing to look at ^^

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Rosary0fSighs [2008-03-27 14:03:36 +0000 UTC]

I love it when somebody actually feels something when they look at my art 8'D *hugs* Thanks!

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teshok [2008-03-23 06:14:10 +0000 UTC]

I love her dress the colours and pattern especialy

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ToxicOxygen In reply to teshok [2008-03-23 22:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Heh, the pattern was a bit difficult to do.... I didn't really know where to go with it, so I just decided to make some flower n' fan brushes and mess around with 'em > u <

Thanks! <3

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Grishend [2008-03-23 04:43:59 +0000 UTC]

That's really nice. I like the colors and shading. Great job with this one!

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Grishend [2008-03-23 05:25:09 +0000 UTC]

I try > u < Thanks~

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TaintedTruffle [2008-03-22 19:08:30 +0000 UTC]

nice, i like the kimono design and ther hair as well as the backgroung so i guess that makes evrything ^^

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Antilamonn [2008-03-21 23:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Pretty neat kimono <33.
And I like her hairstyle!

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Antilamonn [2008-03-22 04:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~ I kept on seeing people with hair like that, so I decided to do that, except make her hair swishy and flowy >:3

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daisies-and-vervain [2008-03-21 19:37:25 +0000 UTC]

No idea what else you fixed, but it looks great!
I really like her expression and her kimono, and man, your coloring is INCREDIBLE.

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ToxicOxygen In reply to daisies-and-vervain [2008-03-22 04:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Well, actually I made the bottom of the kimono a bit less huge, and I shortened one of the petals on her flower clip so that it looked more circular and evenly lengthed

Yay for caps lock~! XD Thanks <3

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digital-Rat [2008-03-21 16:37:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, she's beautiful! Great pose choice, kinda makes Aiko mysterious. And it seems with every picture, you improve your coloring~ Great work!

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ToxicOxygen In reply to digital-Rat [2008-03-21 17:00:18 +0000 UTC]

Well, Aiko is pretty mysterious! Actually, ever since she meets Moth, she starts becoming more and more secretive and her disposition appears almost dark. It really worries her parents XD;

Thanks sooo much for pointing it out! I love it when somebody shows that they see these things I put in a picture! -^ u ^- ~<3

And I also like when people point out progress 8'D

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Aine1991 [2008-03-21 09:51:00 +0000 UTC]

She's so pretty!
I like her. Great job

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tamakari-chan [2008-03-21 03:28:37 +0000 UTC]

pretttttttttttttttty ^ ^
i love her hair and the dress. very japanese

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ToxicOxygen In reply to tamakari-chan [2008-03-21 16:49:01 +0000 UTC]

Remember, it's called a kimono ;D And thanks, I'm glad!

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Shinsei-Tsuki-Kiri [2008-03-21 02:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow!! Great Job!! I love her kimono and the background!! And you've greatly improved!!

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Sonikki-Valentine [2008-03-21 02:16:55 +0000 UTC]

I really like this!! I love the kimono, and how pretty all the colors are together. Very Japanese-y.

May I give a bit of critique? Not much and not meanly of course. (Sorry if it does sound like it's mean. Hit me if it does, or if you didn't want it.. I don't usually like giving it...)

Her eye seems a little bit too close to the edge of her face, maybe pull it back just a little? Or.. it seems a little too wide maybe? I'm not sure which one of those it really is, but I think pulling it back from the edge a little bit would work fine.

(Sorry about that.. Really.. ; *hopes like heck you won't get mad*)

Anyway, I really like this picture. I think it looks great. ^^ I just love the Japanese/Asian stuff.

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Sonikki-Valentine [2008-03-21 02:25:02 +0000 UTC]

Actually, the white of the eye was actually supposed to be where the darkest part of the iris is, but somehow it got messed up and part of the skin turned into the eye XD;

But 'tsokay > v < Now, if you had critisized something about the kimono, I might've gotten upset, just because I'm not that good at them and I'm already actually pretty upset D:

But anyway! Thanks! I hope you like it even more after I edit it a smidgeon ;D

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Sonikki-Valentine In reply to ToxicOxygen [2008-03-21 02:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh. O.o, How the heck'd that happen? O.o,

No, I wouldn't critique on the kimono. I don't know how to do those myself. But I'm sorry for the critique anyway. Didn't mean to upset you...

You're welcome though. This is why I don't like critiquing.. I feel bad... TT.TT

You don't have to edit it, it looks fine, really!

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Sonikki-Valentine [2008-03-21 16:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, no no! YOU didn't upset me!
And I'm going to edit it so that the kimono looks a bit better and the hair is shorter

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Sonikki-Valentine In reply to ToxicOxygen [2008-03-21 19:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh. OH. I'm glad.
Sorry about you and your friend though.

Ooh~! I'd like to see it. ^^

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Sonikki-Valentine [2008-03-21 20:54:55 +0000 UTC]

I already edited it! > Take a look!

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Sonikki-Valentine In reply to ToxicOxygen [2008-03-21 20:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh!! It's even better! I like the shorter hair and the bow on the back of the kimono. Job well done! I like it even more. ^^

I don't think I commented on the shading though. It looks great~! I like it a whole lot. So smooth. I've got to get a tablet... xD

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Sonikki-Valentine [2008-03-21 21:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! But tablets are supposed to cost a lot D:

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Sonikki-Valentine In reply to ToxicOxygen [2008-03-21 21:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Of course~!

Really? Hmm.. I seen a Wacom Bamboo and it was like.. Uhh.. $60.. I'd like to have a little more expensive one, instead of the cheapest one... But.. Hey, I don't know. xD I don't even know if I'd like the tablet..
I'd like to have one of those tablet laptops..
You know, where the screen turns around and flips down flat onto the top of the laptop and you draw on the screen? I want one of those.
But I don't have $3,000 for one.... >.<

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Sonikki-Valentine [2008-03-21 21:23:07 +0000 UTC]

My sister's one cost $2,000 |D;

But that's what I liked best before too, but Wacoms are so much better |3 They're touch sensative! >8D

Sure, it takes a bit of getting used to because you can't see exactly where you're placing the cursor on the screen with the stylus, but I got used to it!

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Sonikki-Valentine In reply to ToxicOxygen [2008-03-21 21:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's what my mom said. She had one a long time ago, but it broke.. >.<
I want a good touch-sensitive one. ^^

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ToxicOxygen In reply to Sonikki-Valentine [2008-03-22 03:56:55 +0000 UTC]

OOPS~ I meant to say 'ressure' sensative! XD; But apparently you already understood what I meant....

Aw, that's gotta suck D;

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Sonikki-Valentine In reply to ToxicOxygen [2008-03-22 04:06:19 +0000 UTC]

I meant to say Pressure sensitive too. I got confused and mixed up. LOL

It does suck. >.<

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SorrowfulDragon [2008-03-21 02:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Very nice...the kimono has a certain flair to it that I like...

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ToxicOxygen In reply to SorrowfulDragon [2008-03-21 02:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Really? Oh thanks! Flare is always good

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animegirl369 [2008-03-21 02:14:30 +0000 UTC]

I like this!
I think her hair would look better if you shortened it to that spot where it curves near her butt.

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ToxicOxygen In reply to animegirl369 [2008-03-21 16:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'll be sure to edit it! >:3

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