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Published: 2009-12-09 01:26:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 24569; Favourites: 195; Downloads: 112
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Foreword: So I took folks advice and I concluded that I was going to upload them a page-at-a-time every day (Hey! You'll have something to read while you wait for "How It Ends" pages!).It was tough doing this in just plain black and white and not adding anything else...it looks empty to me but other folks say it looks fine. Anyway enjoy my small 24-paged comic...Step-Monster!
Artist Commentary: For such a cute story I kinda concocted a depressing situation to open with. An alcoholic mom and a father in jail leaves this girl and her brother in the hands of child services. But don't worry, it gets better. And funnier. Haha I'm terrible.
While working on this entire comic I was listening to The GO! Team's "Get It Together" on loop. Thus I think of it as it's theme.
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Comments: 23
I have this big grin plastered on my face, thanks to this story.
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That makes me glad!
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Interesting intro here. Already setting up their status.
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Minor point: They're is a contraction of "they are", their means "belonging to them".
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Is it wrong to say that you can make a nice ass? Nice comic!
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Nah...I don't think so...and thanks!
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Wow...that never came to mind when I was drawing this.
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ha ha ha ha!! i read two lines and some how came to that conclusion but its nothing like that at all, cant wait for more...i crave it....lol
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This first page is a real attention grabber. Great job. C:
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I'm agreeing with the no tones thing as well, it's kind of alot to take in visually, I think this has a nice balance and is easy on the eyes.
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Cool...I'll defiantly consider this then.
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It looks crisp and nice without the tones. Interested to see how this story evolves.
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Yeah everyone's digging it. I might not use tones in part II of how it ends...we'll see.
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ya know, maybe u should do How It Ends like this; no zip tones.
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I'll consider that. Thanks.
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IS MRS. JAMES A BITCH?
CUZ SHE KINDA SEEMS LIKE ONE THUS FAR. THAT BITCH.
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Fortunately we will never see her. THE BITCH.
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their =/= they're
Good job with the blacks. It doesn't feel empty to me at all.
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Once again my grammer failz me. And thanks...I do love me some spot blacks.
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