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Yeah so me and were spitting random story ideas at each other over the break in a collective note brainstorm, and one of the actually decent ideas that came into my head was a story I've titled "Spectrum". Here's a brief rundown because the story itself is nothing but a skeleton right now:Government experiments and makes 6 people with the powers based on the properties of the full light spectrum: Mr. Red (Infrared), Mrs. Orange (Microwaves), Mr. Yellow (Visible Light), Mr. Green (X-ray), Mrs. Blue (Ultraviolet Light), and Mrs. Violet (Gamma Rays). Government loans them out to other countries and very wealthy people as a private army or task force for hefty price and also reserves them for their own military needs.
Unfortunately two failures of the experiments earlier on: Mr. White (What happened when they tried to put all the power into one dude, with white being all colors) and Mrs. Black (What happened when they exposed some chick to like Anti-energy color...stuff...lol, black being the absence of color) want to absorb and erase the 6 respectively.
Conflicts and plot twists ensue.
Opnions: Great Idea? Depends on how I execute it? Okay? What on earth was I thinking? Kill myself?
Gimme Feedback or any suggestions or directions I could take story.
Flat colors again because I am LAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZZY.
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Comments: 33
dajaybird [2011-01-09 07:18:24 +0000 UTC]
dude you gotta go forth! i love this idea so far and miss black is bitch'n awesome! if you dont i will steal this idea. pfft.. yeah right! but please do it ! -gives sad puppy eyes-
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ToxicToothpick In reply to dajaybird [2011-01-09 20:19:48 +0000 UTC]
I will when I have the time too! D: In the mean time I might do a few pictures for it or something.
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dajaybird In reply to ToxicToothpick [2011-01-09 21:35:33 +0000 UTC]
yay!i iz excited! you are amazing at drawing!
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Hell-is-a-56 [2011-01-05 06:09:13 +0000 UTC]
Favoriting this until I get the sleep I need to go favorite all of them. I love this idea with all the fiery burning passion of Don Juan trapped in a barbeque pit.
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ToxicToothpick In reply to Hell-is-a-56 [2011-01-05 17:22:15 +0000 UTC]
Dat's a lotta fire, lol.
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leedom111 [2010-05-06 10:01:04 +0000 UTC]
Nice...
Anything with rainbows is a winner in my book
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the-Mad-Hatress In reply to ToxicToothpick [2010-03-30 00:24:36 +0000 UTC]
I've gone through and looked at all the characters... seriously cool stuff.
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ToxicToothpick In reply to the-Mad-Hatress [2010-03-30 00:53:26 +0000 UTC]
I really appreciate it!
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afrobot [2009-09-18 14:12:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. this project sounds rad! Dude this is hella creative and I wish I had come up with it.. Hope to see some more of it.
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afrobot In reply to ToxicToothpick [2009-09-22 16:19:45 +0000 UTC]
No prob. I'm most definitely looking forward to seeing more of this.
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ItemsGuy [2009-08-30 05:47:12 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I'm digging the concept, but as I'm sure you know, it could use some fleshing out. It all really depends on what directions you go with it.
From what I've seen of the characters you've done so far, it's got some definite potential.
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ToxicToothpick In reply to ItemsGuy [2009-08-30 06:00:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm always open to suggestions but yeah, right now its only a skeleton. I just felt like doing more art for it is all. I still need to flesh things out on it.
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DragonMasterSaaji [2009-08-29 23:01:07 +0000 UTC]
Spiffy story concept it seems quite interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it.
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TheCH [2009-08-28 22:15:58 +0000 UTC]
ThatΒ΄s a GRETA FUCKING IDEA, i wanna see the results.
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sketchmasterskillz [2009-03-10 20:27:25 +0000 UTC]
Yo, this is one of the sickest original stories i've ever heard. Do it before somebody else does cuz then u'll be like damnit they stole my idea.
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Serphaet [2009-01-19 00:42:23 +0000 UTC]
THis is a really great idea, actually, I really like it. I think it could make an interesting story. I think more character info would help but STIIIIILL this is pretty great already.
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Zansake [2009-01-18 08:18:26 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. Does the story hop between the characters? or will it stay with one color? I would understand why Mr. White would want to absorb others' power. But why would Mrs. Black want to erase them? Also, sounds like Mrs. Black is like a black hole gal, .....OH WAIT! White reflects all colors whereas Black actually absorbs them....soo...Mr. White should be invulnerable...I'm getting carried away.
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PrincessHannah [2009-01-18 02:57:41 +0000 UTC]
My friend ~XxJakOxX is kinda doing this already, both in novel form and live-action roleplay form , but it's about gangs in a cyberpunk city with the power of color. It's called Colorshock and my other friend ~GheoFabulousDuk played a character named Spectrum (a Blue. I was a Green ).
Wow. This post turned into a total plug-fest. I still like your idea, though!
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captainashletART [2009-01-18 02:11:40 +0000 UTC]
GAH SOUNDS AMAZING!
I can't wait to hear about more from it. <3
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narutofanx100 [2009-01-17 21:37:31 +0000 UTC]
I like Mr. Green. He's got that, "Fuck you, I'm awesome" sort of look.
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zoromask [2009-01-17 21:05:55 +0000 UTC]
I think the idea is very unique. I love the looks of all the character's but Mr Yellow, who is giving me an odd Lupin III the sort of look, looks the best to me! So in closing Do it i wanna see more from this lot. Thumbs up
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ConcentrationMoon [2009-01-17 21:04:35 +0000 UTC]
Mister Green, in the Billiard Room, with a lead pipe.
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MyNameIsMad [2009-01-17 20:55:41 +0000 UTC]
Mr White is BITCHIN. You can tell he's evil because he has a goatee and a ponytail. oho
Also Red is bitchin WAIT ALL OF THEM ARE BITCHIN YOU SHOULD DO THIS.
ps I'm coming over to your room like right now because i'm bored. Maybe we can go jorb hunting~
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