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Published: 2004-05-04 20:48:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 256; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 40
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Description He curled into the bus seat
         as if he were a fallen
                              movie star.
[he looked like one.]
I could picture it,
          I could picture it.
Naked, Bathed.

Maybe we are both good people -
       dancing on our feet.

I watched
         more
                  from across the aisle.

We owe eachother nothing
            ( too. )
I do it, just because
I want
             ( to. )

And if you leave me in my lust
     I don't mind
              I don't mind
                       I don't mind
                                 I don't mind.

You will get Hungry someday.

"Eating all of the words that you said."

All I need is a little more foreshadowing in my life.

So I locked myself
       in my crotch
and thought thought thought
and forgot.
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Comments: 31

r3s3nt [2004-06-23 07:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Raunchy.

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TranslucentWings In reply to r3s3nt [2004-06-26 00:45:32 +0000 UTC]

That's what I was going for.

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Misaniovent [2004-06-18 02:21:17 +0000 UTC]

I believe I understand.

This is tasty, either way.

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TranslucentWings In reply to Misaniovent [2004-06-18 12:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you . You probably do understand; I think people over-think it too much.

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Misaniovent In reply to TranslucentWings [2004-06-18 14:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Yup.

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Lecco [2004-05-10 19:50:03 +0000 UTC]

"So I locked myself
       in my crotch
and thought thought thought
and forgot."

For some reason that reminded me of what I have to do when I see a really hot girl doing something sexy and get a hard-on. *laughs really loudly* Just the way it's worded. Hahahaha, that's funny, though! Sexy sexy sexy!

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TranslucentWings In reply to Lecco [2004-05-10 22:07:14 +0000 UTC]

lol ahh lecco you just made me think of your hard on ahhh eww! lol at least your icon is gone thanks for the comment

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Lecco In reply to TranslucentWings [2004-05-11 03:09:19 +0000 UTC]

You know you LOVE thinking of my hard on, admit it, admit it!!! Hehehehe....sowwie....but ya still do!!! *runs away*

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TranslucentWings In reply to Lecco [2004-05-13 21:15:12 +0000 UTC]

*thinks of it again* eh, ain't bad

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SixFeetUnderwater [2004-05-09 12:04:38 +0000 UTC]

I love it.. its so sexy.

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TranslucentWings In reply to SixFeetUnderwater [2004-05-09 12:16:10 +0000 UTC]

OHh thank you

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SixFeetUnderwater In reply to TranslucentWings [2004-05-09 12:42:13 +0000 UTC]

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mournfulcrow [2004-05-07 02:39:28 +0000 UTC]

very sexy carly, me loves this line - "You will get Hungry someday." we all get hungries somedays...ahem, by the way if i translated that completly wrong than wont this be a funny comment to leave.

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TranslucentWings In reply to mournfulcrow [2004-05-09 12:17:12 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah you know what i'm talkin' about. heh heh.

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quintessa27 [2004-05-05 15:05:42 +0000 UTC]

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quintessa27 [2004-05-05 15:05:27 +0000 UTC]

heh heh, great carly, i think i translated it differently than the last few ppl who commented so i'll have to talk to u about it(is this about someon who "resembles a gazelle???"). i likes. it really sounds like a song too--it has a good rhythem.

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TranslucentWings In reply to quintessa27 [2004-05-05 21:28:17 +0000 UTC]

lol YES meg!! I knew that you'd get it~ Ah thank god for you Megyn. Always on the same wavelength

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quintessa27 In reply to TranslucentWings [2004-05-06 15:34:14 +0000 UTC]

i knew it! heh heh, all you other guys are SILLY! lol.

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VoodooChild939 [2004-05-05 03:17:59 +0000 UTC]

damn I love your style!

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TranslucentWings In reply to VoodooChild939 [2004-05-05 21:27:04 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks

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VoodooChild939 In reply to TranslucentWings [2004-05-05 21:39:03 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome

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moldycheesepuff [2004-05-05 03:10:57 +0000 UTC]

yeah same as matt said.... im always here for you carly

always...

as for your poem... AWESOME!! i love it

"All I need is a little more foreshadowing in my life."

DOnt we all? :\

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TranslucentWings In reply to moldycheesepuff [2004-05-05 21:25:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sad or anything~ but it's good to know that you're there for me

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moldycheesepuff In reply to TranslucentWings [2004-05-07 00:32:37 +0000 UTC]

ok, jus keep that in mind

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LovelyJadedLoner [2004-05-05 02:19:02 +0000 UTC]

This is another wonderful piece by you! I love it, but I too don't understand all of it. But nice job!

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TranslucentWings In reply to LovelyJadedLoner [2004-05-05 21:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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LovelyJadedLoner In reply to TranslucentWings [2004-05-07 03:22:51 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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dubbilex [2004-05-04 22:44:21 +0000 UTC]

From where I see this poem right now, I think I can understand exactly what you're saying - and all that I can say is don't worry about it

We can talk about this later, if you wanna. Or maybe that isn't what you need. I guess that decision's yours.

Either way, I'm here.

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Nirvanachick [2004-05-04 21:03:00 +0000 UTC]

i this.
its really good - no i don't understand all of it - but it's still good.

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TranslucentWings In reply to Nirvanachick [2004-05-04 21:51:46 +0000 UTC]

ahh it's all good. Thanks

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TranslucentWings In reply to Nirvanachick [2004-05-04 21:50:15 +0000 UTC]

ahh it's all good. Thanks

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