HOME | DD

Trashspawn45 — Clockwork Banana
Published: 2012-04-15 04:45:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description body div#devskin0 hr { }

Rivet tapped his foot impatiently. The line for the bank was very long and he had been there for longer than his fair share of time. Good thing he was the next person in line. He only looked back at the fat cats that came in walked in the door and held the line behind Rivet. Shame. You'll all have to wait just a tiny bit longer to use the bank. he wore a suit and tie that weren't his. The hair that protruded from his top hat was mussed in an unfamiliar way as to avoid what he was going to do.


"CAN I HELP YOU, YOUNG MAN?!"


He turned around suddenly to the impatient banker. His eyebrow was raised, expecting this child to be running an errand for his parents. He smirked and lowered his top hat, leaning forward on his cane. "Good evening, sir. Sorry I was distracted a bit there."

"Indeed... can I help you?"


"Yes, I've come to make a withdraw."


"Your parents, I assume?"


"Probably."

The banker rubbed his temples. "Young man, I don't have time for your games. If you're not going to present a check, go run along and play hopscotch or whatever you kids do." This struck a bit of a nerve with the clockworker but he kept his cool.


"Ah yes. Here's the check for the NICE, PATIENT banker," he said putting emphasis on the adjectives.


"If you were as quick as you were sarcastic, boy, this line would have been already half way gone by now," The banker scolded. He glanced over the check to see that under the amount section it simply said 'ALL OF IT'. "What kind of foolery is this, child?!" He yelled angrily.


"Foolery?" Rivet repeated aloud. He flipped open his pocket and pulled out a pistol. Not just any pistol, but this one had red hot gears spinning in the barrel. A tube was coming out of the top, filled with large slugs of metal. "Who's fooling?" he asked. Demons around the area were whispering to each other, saying how the gun looked like a ridiculous, childish joke.


"You must be joking. You insult my industry with your toys, boy."

"Are you going to move towards the vault or what?"


The banker scowled at Rivet. "Yes, in fact, I am moving. But I'm moving towards the alarm and you're going to jail!" he walked towards the side of the desk. Rivet whistled loudly, causing Sparx too scrambled down the main entrance door, welding the only entrance or exit to the bank shut.


"Nobody's coming in or out of here. I will shoot this gun if you don't open that vault. I need my funds."


"Funds? WHAT FOR?!"

"You ask way too many questions," Rivet said as he pulled the trigger. A red hot metal slug went zooming through the man's head like a hot knife through butter. People ducked and ran in a panic as the banker fell over... right on the silent alarm. "Shit..." Rivet cussed. He could already hear the police down the street on the way. Luckily, he was little more than prepared. "Sparx! on me," he ordered. The little clockwork cockroach piped up and scurried over, dodging the feet of the fleeing people. Rivet pulled out another device out of his hat. It was shaped like a circle with 3 smaller ones coming off of it, all of which were riddled with gears. The right most circle he stuck in the center of the metal vault doors. the other 2 he stretched out by metal cord on just the opposite pillars. If his calculation was correct, the cords would hold true to their purpose.

"All it requires is a little leverage," he said to himself as he pulled out his key and turned the center gear's keyhole a few notches. Gears whirled as Rivet stepped out of the way. The cords grew taut. There was a groan as the metal door couldn't take much more weight. Sparx clicked into Rivet's ear.

"What do you mean, unlock the door? This way's much more fun." On queue, the glass doors to the bank broke as the police flooded into the building. They leveled their guns at Rivet, not being able to make out his face quite clearly from that hat being over his eyes.


"FREEZE! GET ON THE GROUND!" they yelled.

"Of course," Rivet replied, "But first, this." he pointed to the vault door as it bent from so much crushing pressure of Rivet's device. It suddenly burst off the hinges, flying into the police, crushing a few and demoralizing the rest. His invention worked exactly like a slingshot. Rivet simply waltzed into the Vault, took what he needed, and waltzed out the back simply waving behind him as he said, "It's all good business. Cheers!" The time bombs he'd placed hours earlier ticked their last and the building erupted into flames. Rivet simply smiled at the destruction he caused using only clocks. But he was just getting started. This was only the beginning.



Related content
Comments: 22

Zhon890 [2012-04-19 20:55:08 +0000 UTC]

I quite enjoyed that. And now for some

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

pananabread [2012-04-15 21:48:49 +0000 UTC]

twas entertaining Though, if anyone holds up anything even vaguely resembling a gun in a bank, ERRYONE would drop to the floor just saying hehe

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Trashspawn45 In reply to pananabread [2012-04-15 22:34:20 +0000 UTC]


Bitch plz. these are demons...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pananabread In reply to Trashspawn45 [2012-04-15 22:36:29 +0000 UTC]

still mortal xD and in that case, they'd just kill him

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Trashspawn45 In reply to pananabread [2012-04-15 23:16:55 +0000 UTC]

DOESN'T MATTER THEY'RE DEAD.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Certia [2012-04-15 19:10:57 +0000 UTC]

That was really really good.
Without having even looked at his character page thing, I learned a lot about him just from what he did!

Is he going to be making anymore appearances in upcoming stories?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Trashspawn45 In reply to Certia [2012-04-15 19:40:35 +0000 UTC]

Maybe maybe not.
when i joined mca, iliekpankaeks said that most of the monochromatic demons that go in there are orphans, have some kind of shadow manipulation, Are bi and or gay, and are poor.

rivet grew up in a rich biological family, his skill is clockwork and he's straight but doesn't care about relationships anyway.

HIPSTER!!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

xMitsubachix [2012-04-15 17:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Rivet seems so incredibly ace omg that was really cool.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Trashspawn45 In reply to xMitsubachix [2012-04-15 17:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Zeferak [2012-04-15 15:21:47 +0000 UTC]

i've been gone for quite awhile. I have NO idea what happened when i was gone but your writing has improved tenfold. Your grasp of the english language is above proficiency. bravo.

👍: 0 ⏩: 2

xMitsubachix In reply to Zeferak [2012-04-15 17:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Sorry to butt in randomly, just had to tell you I love your icon Claire omg as;ldfkj;aesfij;

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Zeferak In reply to xMitsubachix [2012-04-15 19:02:41 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks, breh. Its cool to meet another fan of the Rail Tracer.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Certia In reply to Zeferak [2012-04-15 19:10:25 +0000 UTC]

R-R-R-R-RRAIL TRACA?!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Zeferak In reply to Certia [2012-04-15 19:16:11 +0000 UTC]

lol that's the funniest thing i've heard all day.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Trashspawn45 In reply to Zeferak [2012-04-15 15:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Really? Ah. well you missed that I got into that MCA group that Ezmae's in cuz Pankaeks was there. She helped me with proportions in drawing and thus Rivet was born, a monochromatic demon with a knack for clockwork and mischief.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Zeferak In reply to Trashspawn45 [2012-04-15 15:59:52 +0000 UTC]

sweet, bro. he would have been awesome in your tourny.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Trashspawn45 In reply to Zeferak [2012-04-15 16:04:35 +0000 UTC]

He totally would have been!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Zeferak In reply to Trashspawn45 [2012-04-15 16:06:20 +0000 UTC]

give him a little stand-in role or sumthin. c:

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Trashspawn45 In reply to Zeferak [2012-04-15 16:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Possibly. Actually, people in mca were wishing that there was SOMEWAY in which their mc's could FIGHT TO THE DEATH without actually DYING. I wish i could find a place that did that...
XD

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Zeferak In reply to Trashspawn45 [2012-04-15 16:11:33 +0000 UTC]

ha. u should start charging people to be in your tournament. you could make some nice scratch off people. c:

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Trashspawn45 In reply to Zeferak [2012-04-15 16:12:30 +0000 UTC]

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Zeferak In reply to Trashspawn45 [2012-04-15 19:19:12 +0000 UTC]

indubitably

👍: 0 ⏩: 0