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Published: 2005-06-18 23:27:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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If life were forever,

       Our Moon wouldn’t drown us under the tide.
       Our Sun wouldn’t overcome the Earth, ablaze.
       ...Countless billions wouldn’t wage war.


If our sun burned forever,

       Our oceans would fall to sand.
       Our trees would burn like matches.
       ...The air, forever stale.


If love were forever,

       I would wake up beside Her every morning.
       My hand on Her cheek as I stare deep inside Her eyes
       I would listen to Her beautiful thoughts – that voice.

...Forever.


If only love
                   were forever,
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Comments: 7

PinkSugar [2005-06-29 00:07:52 +0000 UTC]

Nicely written.

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trigger320 In reply to PinkSugar [2005-06-29 08:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Someone actually commented on this one! LOL. Thanks! It was totally un-planned and just ...written. I was surprised.

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PinkSugar In reply to trigger320 [2005-06-29 20:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Writting is often unpredictable.I don't plan it when I write.It come easy as the leaf falling from the tree : )

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trigger320 In reply to PinkSugar [2005-06-29 20:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, most music and lyrics come written that way. A few things I've written I've worked a lot on to get the rhyme and rhythm perfect but otherwise it's all random

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PinkSugar In reply to trigger320 [2005-06-29 20:44:07 +0000 UTC]

I don't write something that come with rythm..I just don't know why lol

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trigger320 In reply to PinkSugar [2005-06-29 20:46:47 +0000 UTC]

It's hard! i usually have to structure an acoustic guitar line around it FIRST and then I can actually form lyrics around it.

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PinkSugar In reply to trigger320 [2005-06-29 20:54:44 +0000 UTC]

I form my lyrics with silence lol or with anything that give me inspiration lol

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