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w h a t s h a d o w s s a y[1]
Far before I could ever see
you are right, you are won
I would take you to new heights
We should have (By now)
Been so, so much more (been so)
Churning in the deepest of me
[2]
Begging for you to understand (alone)
Didn’t you ever trust that I
Loved you enough to give and sacrifice
The life-like ice won’t last with me
A fantasy that took me (alone)
An illusion for the soul of my existence
[3]
Kept by a vision where two souls unite
Its words tight to the crimson shadows
Dreaming of holding her by breath
Passing over me with such light.
Just not worth the struggle
These tainted scars will never heal
Again for darkness (It’s so hard to pray)
Numb my senses (so far away)
It comes again (and it wants to play)
My life it takes and the shadows say
[4]
She drifted away with the winds of grieve
Sailing a vast new sea
Only when time (runs backwards)
Looks uncertain (The future horizons)
Off into the distant stars I cast
Will I have crossed the line?
[5]
Another opened a door so vast....
Now I turn and you are faded
A shadow in my past
Perhaps we will meet once again
And this time we may last
[6]
The door just closed
Just remember why you said it
And I’ll try and forget how you said it
When the music stops
This is how our story ends
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Comments: 7
PinkSugar [2005-06-28 23:51:13 +0000 UTC]
You have a lot of vocabulary,and it hold something very personal,which by the moment I would have write with my "pissed off hands".You are very soft with words.
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trigger320 In reply to PinkSugar [2005-06-29 08:26:17 +0000 UTC]
I try to leave anger and violence out of my writing as much as I can because it's not necessary. Thanks for the kind words!
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PinkSugar In reply to trigger320 [2005-06-29 20:18:15 +0000 UTC]
I think all emotions are important,especially in writing,because its a form of healing.Let just say I heal a lot ! lol
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trigger320 In reply to PinkSugar [2005-06-29 20:40:22 +0000 UTC]
yeah it's a great form of healing. That's why some of these are SO LONG.
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trigger320 In reply to CollidescopicLife [2005-06-22 18:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you Han.
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