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This is my final project for an animation class. This was done in flash and photoshop.
The criteria:
Keep it as close to 15 seconds (title card excluded)
It should work without sound
Yeah that's not a whole lot is it?
Shoot For The Moon is a play on the phrase which means to 'attain great heights'. But in this case, it's taken literally.
Title card, is a parody of the old Dreamworks logo which seems appropriate enough. Now that I think about it, it's probably a bit off for Paul to use an axe as a fishing pole (0.0 It looks dangerous)
So what happens is that Paul noticed something is behind him, and it's the Big Bad Wolf. Apparently the full moon turns him into a fierce beast. Paul however decides to shatter the moon by shattering by hitting it with a rock and drain the wolf of his powers.
The context:
Paul is one of those characters where they remain unscathed when it comes to slapstick. Just like Morticia from Addams Family and Jerry from Tom and Jerry (For the most part). He knows how to turn jokes back at others. The Big Bad Wolf has never been able to lay a finger on him, and so he challenges him. Sadly, he's one of those characters that don't win very often in a slapstick battle, like Tom from Tom and Jerry for the most part.
It wasn't easy to get this done.
Storytelling wise, considering the short time limit, comedy will have the most entertainment factor. You can make someone laugh is a really short time if done right. The 15 sec really puts a limit on your creativity. Well, in some ways it is. You know those commercials on TV? They do wonders with just 30 sec or even 15 secs. It's short but condensed and comprehensible. I guess the time limit forces you to get the essentials first. Longer means more work for me to do anyway. DX Just doing 15 secs is already killing me.
Animation wise, trying to do beautiful Disney-esque animation takes a long time. Every drawing was all made from scratch, frame by frame. First get the movement and timing right, then filling in the details. You'll also have to check for proportions and making sure everything is in the right place. I could be spending at least 4 hours drawing for a 2 second animation. And don't forget about the color, it makes things more tedious than it already is. The background, it's fairly simple. I just create a like 2 backgrounds from scratch and use them to create the rest. Cutting and pasting different parts so it fit my layouts.
Despite the hard work for such a short scene, I can't help but feel satisfied from all the hard work I put in. Hopefully I get better. When I do, I may do animation commissions ( which will NOT be cheap)
Though I think I can improve on it. I may considering doing an extensive revision under the 'director's cut' label, which will included improved pacing and redrawn animation. But for now, this will have to do.
Hope you enjoy it. Take care!
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Comments: 76
Trinityinyang In reply to ??? [2022-04-10 06:56:30 +0000 UTC]
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WolfaSketch In reply to Trinityinyang [2022-04-10 11:08:33 +0000 UTC]
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Trinityinyang In reply to WolfaSketch [2022-04-10 18:03:57 +0000 UTC]
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WolfaSketch In reply to Trinityinyang [2022-04-10 18:22:32 +0000 UTC]
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dinosmak24 [2017-08-22 06:16:46 +0000 UTC]
this looks amazing you should put it on youtube if u haven't already
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Geeligans-i-Land [2014-08-15 08:24:03 +0000 UTC]
Damn good animation, the outlines may seemed rough, but it's still amazing nether the less.
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Dream-Angel-Artista [2014-04-18 03:18:28 +0000 UTC]
)O___________O WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
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OraTheRebelKitsune [2014-02-18 20:50:52 +0000 UTC]
Aesomeness! This looks like the Dreamworks caartoon
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Trinityinyang In reply to atlantart [2014-02-15 18:56:11 +0000 UTC]
The moral is: If things go wrong, just break the moon lol. Cartoon logic.
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teentitansawsome [2013-12-21 18:50:11 +0000 UTC]
i love this. it has a great concept and is animated really well great job
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Trinityinyang In reply to teentitansawsome [2013-12-31 08:06:19 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it, thanks!
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Imtailsthefoxfan [2013-12-21 04:43:17 +0000 UTC]
You're a good animater...I wonder if you're going to make a MLP series...just asking...
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Trinityinyang In reply to Imtailsthefoxfan [2013-12-31 08:06:07 +0000 UTC]
It's possible, if something rekindles me interest in MLP. Which I've grown out of pretty much.
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luckster1234 [2013-12-18 01:14:48 +0000 UTC]
Your right, hard work really does pay off in the end.
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Trinityinyang In reply to luckster1234 [2013-12-20 21:58:51 +0000 UTC]
It does. Makes me want to do better.
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Blackvegetable [2013-12-12 11:46:50 +0000 UTC]
I thought that opening titles was hilariously familiar! And nice animation too!
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Trinityinyang In reply to Blackvegetable [2013-12-20 21:59:27 +0000 UTC]
It makes sense considering the context of Dreamworks. And thanks.
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CyberAngel573 [2013-12-12 05:26:51 +0000 UTC]
This is really funny, but I think it's also the beginning of a beautiful friendship between Paul and the Wolf.
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Trinityinyang In reply to CyberAngel573 [2013-12-20 22:00:07 +0000 UTC]
There's gonna be more adventures of them in the future.
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DigidestinedAzukia [2013-12-12 04:14:35 +0000 UTC]
This is phenomenal and adorable! Great job!
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KristianVasquez [2013-12-12 02:30:02 +0000 UTC]
This is great! I see some ambition that you have put in it.
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Trinityinyang In reply to KristianVasquez [2013-12-20 22:00:38 +0000 UTC]
Let's just say I did what I can to make good use of my time.
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wolfspirit913 [2013-12-11 22:09:40 +0000 UTC]
It shows that you have worked hard on this. Great job ^^ Also, that Big Bad Wolf looks a bit like Balto o3o
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Trinityinyang In reply to wolfspirit913 [2013-12-20 22:01:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I've always liked colors on Balto, it speaks solitude and friendly at the same time.
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RiddleBanshee [2013-12-11 21:50:08 +0000 UTC]
*mouth goes agape in amazement* You are officially even awesomer than you were before!
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SazerLite [2013-12-11 20:37:49 +0000 UTC]
One of the best 15 seconds I ever spent....over and over.
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Trinityinyang In reply to SazerLite [2013-12-20 22:02:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! The loops works since there's quite a bit happening in so little time.
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dark-dragoon-gao [2013-12-11 20:21:01 +0000 UTC]
That was very funny and rather well animated. I'm curious to see how your director's cut will turn out.
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Trinityinyang In reply to dark-dragoon-gao [2013-12-20 22:02:36 +0000 UTC]
I wonder how it'll turn out too.
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