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Published: 2017-06-23 05:15:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1797; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 2
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Hm... I guess introducing my Kichona here in this very comic is to abuse her (so far). I'm such a good mother. XD This is the end of Part 1 already. Expect expect Part 2 coming in a few months... [Edit: OR FREAKI' TWO YEARS. I'M SORRY. ;U;]Anyway yeah, thank you all for reading! It's a pleasure having all of you here. ^_^
Cover Page & Part #1: www.deviantart.com/trying-to-d…
Part #2: www.deviantart.com/trying-to-d…
Previous Part (#3): www.deviantart.com/trying-to-d…
SHATTERED PART TWO: [Coming soon.]
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*hops into kichona's arms and scares everyone else off with a truck* they won't hurt chu no more c:
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*hugs her tentas* they sawft <3 c:
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Kichona: "Soft? That's the first I hear someone compliment my tentacles like t-that. But I'm glad you like them."
(also thanks so much for a Watch! 
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(np:3) ye, and they also swingy c: *plays with them gently and watches them swing, also not to mention also nuzzling them at times* <3
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Kichona: ^///^
*embraces you with her tentacles*
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c: they warm and sawft
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Kichona: "T...thank you James..."
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James:"No problem Kich." *wraps arm around her* 😁
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Kichona completely forgot about the tower because she focused too much on getting the splat. And because of that her team lost.
Awesome buddy! I enjoyed it! 😆
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Indeed, that the major fault that Kichona committed. Plus, her teammates didn't do it too well either. XD
Thanks for your support! Part 2 will definitely be up in few, or several months. ^^
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Yeah,that match was horrible. XD
Anytime Tran!! Good luck! 👍
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Can't wait to see the rest keep it up!
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That was another mistake on Kichona's part, focusing too much of her attention on a single Inkling rather than the tower itself. The main goal/objective of the mode should be a player's top priority. Sure, splatting your foes can give you an edge, but that wouldn't matter one bit if somehow your enemies sneak their way to victory. She was so hell-bent on wanting to splat Garnet that she completely forgot about the tower. In a sense, she forgot about the fact that her teammates needed her to try and get to and on the tower. Though then again, I didn't see her teammates try to get on the tower either, so...it's also their fault that they lost. Don't blame it on one single teammate, guys. You are also at fault here. X'D
Hello, Squid Sisters! Fancy seeing you here as a cameo appearance! X3
Dah! Sorry for my Splatoon competiveness talk. I'll gladly give Kichona some pointers. XD
End of Part 1 already? Aw, man. But it was getting real good! Xd Hah, I'll just have to wait for Part 2. I'll also gladly help you in that one! I love Part 1 and I really wish for you to only improve and improve! ^^ Keep at it, friend! I'll give you advice on how to advance a story after the first "chapter," or any advice you need, really! X3
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Indeed! ^^ Forgetting the objective of the game is their greatest downfall. I remember I casually bring the Rainmaker to the other side because they were too busy splatting each other. XD
Yeah, her teammates doesn't do a very good job either so they suck. XD But they're putting all the blame on Kichona so she's going to receive more than a loss. I also wanted to reflect to our real-life problem in Rank Battles. People often complain they kept losing because their team suck, disconnections, etc. and they often find themselves in a losing streak. They often forget to have fun in splat battles (and perhaps they are the one that suck the entire time and blame others as scapegoat XD). Thank goodness we don't have voice chat, we wouldn't want to hear salty words from them. Or wait, we hear their salty opinions in Kichona's situation. XD
They probably wouldn't win anyway unfortunately since it's Agent 1 and Agent 2 there, and Garnet isn't really an A- player...oh boy. :>
Don't worry, I love hearing your perspective how to turn the game around into a successful win. ^^ I originally have Kichona to be an S or S+ player, but there's no character development in that if she's too good.
GET CLIFFHANGER YO! XD Thank you so much for the support as always. Thank you so much for looking deep into the comic, and give pointers what Kichona could have done here and there.
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That's a prime example as to why the objective should always be on your mind. Every mode has an objective.
Turf Wars: Cover as much of the map as possible with your ink color.
Splat Zones: Secure the zone(s) for the longest period of time.
Tower Control: Ride the tower to the opposite side of the map.
Rainmaker: Carry the Rainmaker to the opposite side of the map.
If you and your team aren't doing these objectives, well, be expecting a loss on your part, because that's honestly what you deserve. X3
I'm not keen on always blaming your teammates for your losing streaks. If you are on a losing streak, at all, then clearly you are doing something wrong, not your teammates. You don't always get the same people on your team anyways! Sure, blame it on a disconnect. Sure, blame it on the lag. Sure, even blame it on Nintendo. But if you are caught never blaming it on yourself, then I have one term to describe you: poor sport. Clearly, Kichona's teammates are prime examples of poor sports. That makes me feel sorry for Kichona even more. Hey guys, at least she TRIED! That is better than nothing! At least she didn't rage quick (or rage at all) the moment you started yelling in her face! Xd
I bet Garnet is either a S-rank player or a S+-rank player. X3 I haven't seen Callie or Marie on the battlefield much so I wouldn't know how good they really are. I mean, they had Agent 3, a literal noob off the street when she/he started out, go out and fight the Octarian Army while they merely supervised from afar. XD
I only made one of my characters S+, but that's mainly because he's a rich Inkling with plenty of resources and connections. Also, he keeps his cool, always. He knows what he's doing. X3 Sapphire is either A- or A+. Her rank escapes me at the moment. ^^' Also, I do love talking about the competitive side of Splatoon, as well as the fandom side of it. XD
As always, no problem at all! I love analyzing stories of any kind, especially when I know it's a help to you! I'll continue to give you all the advice I am able to give, and all of my support. ^^ I'll be looking forward to helping you with Part 2, and the character descriptions! You are welcome, my friend! X3
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Poor Kichona! She really got some unpleasant teammates! Not to mention the unfair matchup. A bunch of A's and A-'s against Agents 1 and 2! Like that's a fair fight!
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Heh, I doubt Kichona even have a chance to win. Plus my other OC Garnet is not really an A- player. Agents are tough too. XD
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Loca: *hits the squid boy with Tempey* DON'T TOUCH THE CHILD! >:^0
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PROTECT THE POOR CHILD.
Kichona: Thank you...
lol ^_^
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Awww poor Kichona 
Awesome comic so far, though! I can't wait to read the next part!
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Yeah, she tried at least. Plus her teammates didn't do so well. XD
Thank you so much! I'll definitely work on Part 2.
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Yeah. Her teammates placed all their frustrations on her.
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Some "teammates"...
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Yup, good eye Tyler!
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Thanks! Never mess with the Agents.
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A few months? What a tease! XD can't wait to read more!
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lol GET CLIFFHANGED SON! XD
Thank you~! It'll be a while because one of my friend say that she'll help me in writing Part 2 to see if there's anything to change or what to improve on. It'll also help keep my ideas organize. She's an expert in writing.
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Damn, I got cliffhanged. XD
You're welcome~! I totally understand. I'm liking it so far! ^u^
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