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Description My secret santa for of her character Melo. Lights are my favorite holiday decoration, so I decided to experiment with colors and glow a little ... I really like how it came out~ Feel free to critique it though. The pose was referenced from the amazing .

Hope you like it, ~melodisnocturneIX and Merry Christmas!!

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Comments: 36

Lucain24 [2012-01-07 05:31:48 +0000 UTC]

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Now I've taken the liberty of looking through your gallery first before I did this critique. I wanted to see your style before I started saying something I didn't know. First off she's beautiful with the lights reflecting off of her muzzle. Though her eyes are a little off balance, and the lights themselves look as fake as my crush's smile. (I hate when she does that >_<) The textures are new to me when it comes to critiquing you, because you style is cartoony. Her lips are kinda strange, next time I would put some teeth to make it more realistic I guess. I'm not used to doing a cartoon critique. (-_-e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/> Bear with me... the eyes are also a good feature in this work as well, how the fake lights show within the pupils is something to admire. I WILL get used to critiquing cartoon style! (God I hope so!) Visit my profile for more reviews! ^__^

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Lucain24 In reply to Lucain24 [2012-01-07 06:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome, I had a tough time with it, but I came through and you smile I bet. (I made someone laugh without seeing them, ain't that somethin?) Yeah and the lights would look weird realistic huh? Thanks for for reading!

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TsukiTsu In reply to Lucain24 [2012-01-07 05:50:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm always excited to get critiques from someone random, so thank you very much! And to critique a style that you're not as used to ... impressive. :3 I can see just about everything you mentioned (I have a problem with offsetting eyes too much, need to work on that), and I couldn't help but giggle at your 'crush's smile' analogy (although if I made the lights super realistic, it might look weird being with a cartoonish animal ). But yes, thank you again for the critique! It was quite helpful~

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Unknowncreation [2012-03-25 04:22:08 +0000 UTC]

wOW! i LOVE THE REFLECTION IN THE EYES

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TsukiTsu In reply to Unknowncreation [2012-03-25 08:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thanks, Gabriel!

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Unknowncreation In reply to TsukiTsu [2012-03-25 18:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Welcs

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tuliptail101 [2012-01-21 02:32:29 +0000 UTC]

OMG!! SO COOL!

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TsukiTsu In reply to tuliptail101 [2012-01-21 02:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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tuliptail101 In reply to TsukiTsu [2012-01-21 04:04:08 +0000 UTC]

np

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Blacktiger5 [2012-01-09 15:25:40 +0000 UTC]

Beautifull pic! ^^

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TsukiTsu In reply to Blacktiger5 [2012-01-09 16:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks!

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Blacktiger5 In reply to TsukiTsu [2012-01-10 11:54:43 +0000 UTC]

Np, you're welcome. ^^

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MelNocturne [2011-12-29 00:45:52 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing(Cute too, but i say that to almost everything you post)!!!
I love t way you di the lights!! All glowy and whatnot. ink the lightin was perfect~
You just continue to impress me.
The eye are so realistic too~ Thank you oh so very much!!!
...Darn. I didn't get you other drawing up before Christmas... Dx I'll post it soon!! I promise!

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TsukiTsu In reply to MelNocturne [2012-01-06 23:26:57 +0000 UTC]

Hooray!! Thank you! Haha, maybe I should break out of cute, but it's just too much fun! XD I'm so glad you like it and think the glow works well (I'm a sucker for glowy things, so this was too much fun of an idea to pass up~). Oh, it's alright! I loved the initial one, and I can't wait for the second one whenever you are able to finish it, but no rush! I still have Christmas gifts to finish. Hope your holidays were lovely!

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MelNocturne In reply to TsukiTsu [2012-01-07 17:16:49 +0000 UTC]

(Just noticing all the typos...Sorry. xP Maybe I shouldn't use my phone to answer such long a reply.)
I like your cute style though. x3 If you break out of it, be sure to use it every now and then! 8D
Okay~ I'm done with it. I just need to set up my printer to this computer. And it's really not wanting to read the disk right. xP
So....I'm gonna mess with it some more. Hope you like it though~~
Thanks~ They were...alright. What about your holidays? Were they pleasant?

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TsukiTsu In reply to MelNocturne [2012-01-07 17:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Haha, no worries! ^^

Oooo, YAY! Sure thing, mess with it all you want, I will love it no matter what! Aww, your holidays weren't so great? Mine were nice, although it really didn't feel like Christmas to me at all ... I feel like the older I get, the less holidays seem like holidays. It's kind of sad ... but I guess I'll have to work harder to make myself festive!

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MelNocturne In reply to TsukiTsu [2012-01-07 17:35:07 +0000 UTC]

Okay~

Okay~ 8D
Yeah,not really. Traveling during the holidays is just STRESSFUL. It didn't feel like Christmas at all... New years was fun though. x3
AH. well I hope during the next holiday season, your holidays are more fun and festive. x3

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Soulful-Purple-Wolf [2011-12-27 14:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Awww Tsuki, this is so beautiful!! I love the lighting and the gentle shadows on the fur

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TsukiTsu In reply to Soulful-Purple-Wolf [2012-01-06 18:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you so much, Soul!

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Soulful-Purple-Wolf In reply to TsukiTsu [2012-01-06 18:19:01 +0000 UTC]

^__^ You're very welcome Tsuki!

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justabatmangleek [2011-12-25 06:59:35 +0000 UTC]

................wow! i mean this is just....wow. Great job Tsuki, I love the expression...the face that we all had when we saw our first Christmas lights

Brilliant!

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TsukiTsu In reply to justabatmangleek [2012-01-06 18:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Late reply is late. ^^() But thank you Patrick! Heh, my face was probably a little more humorous ... I used to squint really hard at Christmas lights to make them into little fireworks!

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Arisnova [2011-12-25 01:11:07 +0000 UTC]

DEM REFLECTIONS
So jealous of your light skills it's ridiculous

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TsukiTsu In reply to Arisnova [2011-12-25 21:49:05 +0000 UTC]

YAY. I will get even better and then draw your picture WHEN YOU SEND ME A PICTURE OF YOU and I will do light things to it. >:3

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Arisnova In reply to TsukiTsu [2011-12-26 01:57:08 +0000 UTC]

except mehhh although got camera so yay.

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TsukiTsu In reply to Arisnova [2011-12-26 18:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Oooo, you got a camera!! More pictures of your FAEC!!

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Arisnova In reply to TsukiTsu [2011-12-26 20:42:17 +0000 UTC]

;;

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Mijicat [2011-12-24 05:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow Tsuki!!! I love it!!! It makes me think of the wonder of Christmas that we seem to lose at least for a while in our lives until its shown to us again. Mostly by our younger family members. ^_^

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TsukiTsu In reply to Mijicat [2012-01-06 23:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that's precisely what I was going for! I find Christmas lights to be magical ... hence why they stay strung in my room all year round~ Thank you so much! Miss you~

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Mijicat In reply to TsukiTsu [2012-01-07 23:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Michael and I still have our lights up on our christmas tree. Colored ones.I wish I could keep them up all year but he doesn't have enough room lol. ^_^ I miss ya too.We need to hang out again.

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LadyFoxling [2011-12-24 05:01:20 +0000 UTC]

The play of color and light in this is amazing! Awesome job!

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TsukiTsu In reply to LadyFoxling [2011-12-24 05:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! Glowy things are so much fun ... makes me want to get so much better with them~ ^o^

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LadyFoxling In reply to TsukiTsu [2011-12-25 15:39:36 +0000 UTC]

I need to learn how to make things more glowy xD I think I'm getting better though!

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KnightOwI [2011-12-24 03:55:29 +0000 UTC]

This is so adorable~! I love how you've done the lighting on it's face and in it's eyes.
*Horrible mini "critique"

Merry Christmas~!

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TsukiTsu In reply to KnightOwI [2011-12-24 04:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! -thatwastotallynothorrible- XD

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KnightOwI In reply to TsukiTsu [2011-12-24 06:26:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~

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