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Published: 2018-07-23 21:30:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 5451; Favourites: 60; Downloads: 28
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sorry. still back. was distracted trying to make MUSIC. I have very little to show for it besides a dozen half-finished scraps of songs, but it was a lot of fun anyway. If you still think you can trust me to update semi-regularly (after this delay, hopefully it'll be faster again), I invite you to charitably consider a dime or two in the patreon account here:
www.patreon.com/FriendshipUpdaβ¦
i cannot offer you much besides my promise to attempt to continue working, for now--although if you have any ideas for patron rewards I would consider them.
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Your art is incredibly beautiful, I love that scenery.
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She can't be scared right now; she's busy. Who would look after all the critters if Fluttershy were busy being scared?
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Very interesting I will keep an eye out for more.
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All right! Let's keep going. Hope you doing good.
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Hell Yeah, New page. The art is top notch as usual, though I have to point out that Rdβs hair color changes pattern in each panel. In the 3rd and 6th panel, the red stripe is on her right, while in the others, it appears to be on her left. And her wing looks a bit weird in the third?
anywho, itβs awesome to hear from you again. I absolutely adore your art
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sorry, that was a little flat of me--i hope it didn't seem like a rebuttal!
i really appreciate that you made these comments. I'm going to pay more attention to how i frame things (like wings) in the future, and also now that the idea's had time to sit, i'm almost definitely going to try and 3d-i-fy her hair.
thank you again for your criticism. (i mean it)
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Oh, no, not at all, I'm really glad you appreciate these comments, because I'm always nervous about writing them
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thank you!
regarding your commentary, the wings are flapping into a fold--it made more visual sense before i put her mane over it.
as for the mane itself, i was going from official art where the red is always "at the bottom," but you're right, it can look a little odd when you start turning her back and forth. now that you've mentioned it, i may start keeping track of the individual parts of her hair.
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