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Published: 2011-10-25 08:20:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 6165; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 77
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They called this filly Shreeks,-------------
ugh... am I that lazy to color and draw background?
this is an adopted pony from the Mighty Molestia
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So.. what do we got here..?
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25 years old, Female...Her name is unknown, no identity known......death by stabbed to the throat.
Any clues, Twilight?Β
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Well, how did you know she's 25?
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From the dead body, I think...
I am just aΒ Coroner.
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Well then, run up digital imaging and match the fingerprint, facial recognition or anything to identify her..
Or just leave it to the authorities.
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Madam, We have a problem....The fingers are all burned up.
and all her belongings are gone.
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Only the fingers? Then clean up her face and run up facial recognition..!
If the face is burnt too, take the skull to the lab and reconstruct the face..! Don't waste time..!
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Got who she is.
You won't believe it....
Her name is.......*lightning sound*
Celestia.
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Ah I see, any family or relations?
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*Checks the PDA*
We found out that she has a Young Sister, named Luna
Fath and Mother's name and whereabouts are unknown.
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See? Now you're able to identify her.. What would you do without me..?
Now go find the younger sister and ask her to come here..
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I am going to give her phone number to you, I am not a detective, Madam, You are...
I am just aΒ Coroner.
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Okay then.. give me the phone number..
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*gives you Luna's Phone number and drives the Coroner Vehicle back to theΒ Central Morgue*
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*calls this person named Luna, arranges a meeting with her, then be away..*
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*calls you from the Central Morgue* DetectiveΒ Twilite, I think you might want to come around to the Morgue, There is something you might want to know about...
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Understood.. I'll be there as soon as I finish with Luna..
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*Sits near the body, looking at the dead body's left arm*
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*finishes dealing with Luna, then gets in the car and heads to the Morgue..
on the way there, a truck hits her..*
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(I am too lazy to finish this, so here's BIG O's intro:Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=s7_Od9β¦ )
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It's already finished: Twilite is dead
Unless there's a sequel to it, but not likely
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LA Noire.
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Eeyes!
Thank you!
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Thank you for your appreciation, Your Highness,
Noo! You can't! We had a deal!
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Does the evil Pinkie live in your universe?
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Well... Evil Pinkie is still tamed,
it's Pinkamena.
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why, thanks, Je, you have my gratitude,
but I'm sorry if it looks like Sweetie Belle's paintings, maybe I was just too lazy
"Hey!"
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It looks good, I am looking forward to future parts to Shreeks story.
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haha, thanks again then! I'll try not to disappoint you,
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I'm sure you will do a great job. ^^
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Your artwork is great and you have the perfect set up for telling Shreeks story.
By the way, near the end of my recently posted story if you haven't read it yet is Whips story (How my OC meets her and how she was brought to Molestia).
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oh yeah I did read it, but well...
I just can't imagine what happened there
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It was mostly something I threw together. It wasn't my best work, I just wanted to characterize my OC a bit and expand on Whips 'favorite escape attempt'. I may get around to expanding it to an actual story rather than just hitting on event after event.
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haha, well then it is my turn to say:
"I am looking forward to future parts to your story. And I'm sure you will do a great job!"
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Thanks ^^. Reason why I rushed it was to get my ideas out. If I took the time to write the full story I wouldn't be even a quarter of the way through, then I would forget the path I wanted it to take. I swear that if I tried I could probably write a 100K word story with the 1st section. Then maybe a 5K to 10K story on Whips alone. I actually spent a while playing with the idea of having Whips dad be Blueblood and have her just hate the way he acts, but I wanted her to have parents that payed attention to her enough to try to 'fix her problem'. I will probably expand on Whips story first.
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well, maybe you could spill all your ideas in a note files, so you wouldn't forget,
and you can always add or edit the story later,
about Whips, well... if she really is a masochist, I don't think she'll try to escape the good feeling she receive from Molestia
but yah, maybe somepony will try to fix her psychological problem,
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The thing with Whips is, she likes to misbehave and get in trouble because she gets punished. I wouldn't consider it a psychological problem, just that she discovered that she was a masochist very early in her life so she can't quite balance her enjoyment of pain and an everyday life to well.
I am going to start up on an expanded Whips story later today, but it probably won't be up for a day or two, keep an eye out for it.
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Wow, talk about the royal pain. Well, good luck creating her story and such.
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Thanks
and yes, she could be considered a royal pain, but she is sweet.
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haha, of course she is ssweet, and she received the "pain" from Royal,
since Molestia is the Princess and you are the royal Guard,
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lol, puntastic
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I still am looking forward to hear why Shreeks is named the way she is >>
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oh yeah, that would be another story,
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