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The guy with the odd helmet is Captain Ikeaonfav.me/d19nf6e
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Beware, english isn't my native language neither so I may be incorrect with this and I'm sorry for that.
If you find some incorrect sentences or grammar please notify me about that.
Warhammer 40K (c) by Gamesworkshop
Art and Characterdesigne (c) by M. Hoffmann
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Perhaps if you offered some artist comments in your native language as to what you meant to say? It's honestly a lot easier to translate another language into english than it is to understand the mind of a fellow human being.
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Oh wow...so that's what the mighty Moerchen looked like!
This might help me greatly.
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but that look was a long time "before" he meet the Lady by the first time
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Oh really now?
That's a pity. I figured that alone was one of the "reasons."
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which idea you had with his face in your fic?
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More a vivid flashback for the Lady Inquisitor.
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oh... yeah that's pity...
The Lady just know his real face from a little photo or something else from some of the older archives from the Death Spirits chapter
Well, maybe she figures sometimes how it would if he has still his normal face.
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Exactly...that and I was planning to have something like that, the archives or whatever, as part of her motivation to get through the interrogation.
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Well...it took 2 to 3 years but finally I got to see his face
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Or what his face used to look like *cough cough*
*already figured out what happens*
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how it looks?!
I don't know what you people mean with this!
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How it looks, meaning the visual appearance.
For example, if a girl has a cute face,
you say 'She looks cute'
We're simply commenting on finally seeing the chaplain's face getting to see what he 'looks' like.
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Yeah but still, I used to bug Sonja to let me get a sneak peek at him, she was quite adamant X3
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Understandable. I think it would be really interesting if that was actually Morechen's skull now used as his death mask. Perhaps he was gutting a hive tyrant in one on one combat and some of that nasty bio plasma got on his helmet, completely destroying his helmet and melting all organic tissue and organs leaving nothing but his skull and a small fractions of his facial muscles.
That would be sick. ^^
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Blarghity Blargh Blarghen McBlarghenstein...
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Heh. I really like this old movie style and color. I've actually been getting to practice up my photoshop recently and somewhat happy with the progress *new drawings will be posted up soon, 
but I can't quite Seem too get the shading down right...
Any tips you think you can give tyrantwache?
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I got one, tutorials.
Deviantart is FULL of them, just gotta search :3
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I know it was a damnt long time...
To be honest, TOO LONG! Nearly 3 years for just a simple thing... what a shame
Long time I just wanted him as a Marine without a face in the comic. Then later as he gets more popular the problem starts with to find the right face for him.
+ the long downtimes in my creative phases.
But I hope you like his face)
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*nods* but it's okay, it was worth the wait
Oh I love it~
Already got an idea for something ;D
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It's naughty to say the lest
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Yes, it's 70% inked, I just need to fix it up a little and then color
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do you think his face is a bit odd?
if I look at some comments...
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Personally, no.
His scars are very sexy. And I like that bit of a 5'o clock shadow he's got going
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I thought I would put one of the typical gw-standart-sm faces on him with this designe^^
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By contributions... you mean our opinions or ideas? I like it thus far, and I must know if you've managed to create that Space Marine's helmet (not the Chaplain, the other one, I assume he's a rank and file Marine?) on a miniature. I'm a BIG conversion guy, and only for Loyalist Space Marines, so when I see that helmet it... intrigues me.
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no I mean the english grammar fails
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Oh, no problem then. But by the time I see your posts, your other friends have already helped you out. I don't need to repeat what they have already stressed to you, that would be rather annoying, would it not?
I can help in terms of curing writer's block, but I doubt you are having a problem with the storyline, just the english grammar. It's not your fault either, english is the hardest language on the planet, because nobody that speaks english uses proper sentence structure to begin with.
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awesome... but you do need to work on your english abit x3 no offenses of course
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that's why I need some help in the grammar from other people
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overall its not bad... but some of the wording needs work...thats all, lol x3
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Good drawings but your grammer's atrocious.
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I know
so corrections from other people would be nice ^^°
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Ok, the first bubble's off. How about instead, "What carelessness!"? The second one's such a mess you should just scrap it and try again. Like, "Out of nowehere a hive of Tyranids shows up, lays a large quantity of eggs across the surface of this planet and then boom, they're gone again. And the people of the planet really think they drove them off themselves with their own armaments and fire-power." then "Thousands of those nests... We had five months until we could have had them all cleaned up but now... Well all I can say is it's a good thing they weren't GeneStealers, then those people whould've been in deep trouble." last one, "It would've made things much tougher..."
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@ Azriel: I thougth exactly of the same for first panel, but then I get it: This is the way of the character speaks, keep in mind we translate from German and wanted to kept the style of a kind of ritualized speech, TW used in the German original.
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Ooooh... Fair enough. Still, if you're gonna' translate it, do it right. Just sayin'.
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(for this character, look at chapter 1)
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