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Umberoff — WRINGLOCKE: Chapter 2

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Published: 2013-10-27 18:26:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 7951; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 32
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so, uh, been a while since last update I guess! part of that had to do with me wanting to catch up a buffer and all... buuut most of it because I really did not want to post this thing. yeah so fun fact: this was the very first part I actually laid out and drew (then worked backwards from there), and it's, uh. it's pretty obvious. I actually have a buffer for these parts, and having just finished part 5 (at the time of this posting) and by now getting a much better idea of what I'm doing, looking at this is absolutely murdering me. lot more awkward paneling and placement than usual, trying my damnedest to learn how the hell to use photoshop's text tool, and pretty evident I'm still getting used to drawing certain characters (leon why does your face keep shifting) and establishing a style. I did go back and fix some of the "worse" stuff and moved around a bunch of terribly placed dialogue boxes (or tried to), at least. man this is just embarrassing stop reading this description and revel in the FRIENDSHIP

EDIT 3/4/15 HELLO EVERYTHING ABOVE IS MOOT. that is because you are now looking at the redrawn version of chapter 2! I am fully aware that it is incredibly easy to hate one's early pages and have the urge to redraw everything, so let me just assure you that this is the ONLY chapter that will be happening in....... as much as I hate looking at all my other early chapters too lmao. just, not as much as this one, since it was the very first on I drew. I'm sure even just going back to fix this one will put some people off but I just. I couldn't handle it I'm sorry.

I didn't want to get too caught up in fixing ~everything~, so I basically only cleaned and changed dialogue stuff, redrew the major characters, and spruced up the colors slightly (look at that minty sky). unfortunately I'm still stuck with stuff like some of the terrible paneling, but oh well!! again, I didn't want to get TOO hung up on fixing things here (besides if I make it look too nice then it just makes all the chapters around it look worse so :V)

if, for whatever strange reason, you just REEEALLLLY want to see the old version, you can find it here and revel in all the incredibly dopey faces as you please.

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Comments: 23

wastelander-nick [2025-03-11 12:53:57 +0000 UTC]

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picachuyou [2019-05-14 19:01:46 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool whoa 

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LionheartedPhoenix [2018-12-16 12:55:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy... Look at that fight over there Leon, it's gonna be so much fun huh ?? He looks like he wants to be anywhere but there!!

Poor boi just tryna get by without getting into fights and shit and SUDDENLY BOOM. HOOTHOOT OUT OF FUCKIN NOWHERE. YOU'RE DOWN FKER.

I love Elle already lbr here. She's so feisty and ready to kick down some shitheads. Also lol. dumb hair guy. Perfect name aaaaand down Leon goes. skjdfksjdf I love how you draw his reactions to shit. HIS EYES WHEN HE GETS PUNCHED WTF lksdffjjksjdfksf

ELLE SWOOPS IN TO SAVE THE DAMN DAY.  She even gives him her last antidote aww, that's super kind. I bet she's just all I can't leave this kid alone he's gonna end up KILLING himself accidentally or some shit like that.

Pfff that's cute, the way he tried to ask her in his team. ALSO I JUST NOTICED HIS BANGS SOMETIMES LOOK LIKE BUSHY EYEBROWS AND I LOVE IT OK.  Also yesss, Elle and Leon are a team!!

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Dingopox [2018-02-01 01:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Elle's a great addition and a brilliant foil to Leon's timid nature. And I love everyone of his expressions in this chapter!

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A-KTheLittleFairy [2017-07-11 18:35:29 +0000 UTC]

I really like your art style!

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Umberoff In reply to A-KTheLittleFairy [2017-07-13 23:02:20 +0000 UTC]

ah, well thank you!! :>

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A-KTheLittleFairy In reply to Umberoff [2017-07-14 07:28:37 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!

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dammyjodger [2016-06-02 08:36:13 +0000 UTC]

Dat minty sky!! <3

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Umberoff In reply to dammyjodger [2016-06-07 22:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Delicious mint flavor to set the mood :0

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applebatz [2015-10-10 03:23:42 +0000 UTC]

I ship them already.

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jadethestone [2014-10-25 00:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Totally thought Elle was a dude.
I'm loving this comic so far. I love the character designs and their interesting personalities.
I'm excited to read more!

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Mountainlord92 In reply to jadethestone [2015-04-29 09:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Well at least I'm not the only one

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jadethestone In reply to Mountainlord92 [2015-04-29 10:31:02 +0000 UTC]

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Umberoff In reply to jadethestone [2014-10-29 05:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha, seems plenty of other people also think she's a dude at first, whoops P:

But anyways, thank you!

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jadethestone In reply to Umberoff [2014-10-29 09:29:45 +0000 UTC]

No, I think it's totally cool. She's got a unique character design, and she's totally badass.
I really like how she's sort of the one running the show right now and not the "starter". It makes for an interesting dynamic.

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Lich090 [2014-09-19 14:49:00 +0000 UTC]

-_- i thought elle was a guy for a little bit there......

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Umberoff In reply to Lich090 [2014-09-19 23:41:01 +0000 UTC]

haha, I actually had a friend think the same thing :Y I think it's because she has some sharp features, so it might be a bit confusing!

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Lich090 In reply to Umberoff [2014-09-20 01:21:43 +0000 UTC]

its more like the face just doesnt seem feminine (mostly the nose) and well... she doesnt really have a chest so... Also just the way she acts makes me think of her as a guy...

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PyroShadow117 [2013-10-27 22:26:11 +0000 UTC]

omg, that was awesome

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Umberoff In reply to PyroShadow117 [2013-10-28 07:39:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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PyroShadow117 In reply to Umberoff [2013-10-28 16:41:00 +0000 UTC]

np

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Velink [2013-10-27 21:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Nice page!!
loving the brawl!
and with no actual pokemon move used, it totally look like regular brawl

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Umberoff In reply to Velink [2013-10-28 07:39:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks! yeah, considering most pokemon moves in the beginning consist of mostly TACKLE and GROWL and all, things'll tend to just be punchy for now, aha

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