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Umbrascythe — Learn To Live 1
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Published: 2017-03-21 00:16:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 16744; Favourites: 103; Downloads: 26
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The first part of a comic serie, featuring Mori'rai and him trying to survive in the village, its supposed to be not long after he chosed to settle "was kicked off" down and is trying two get along in the small village whos income is partly from fishing.Mori'rai checks out some of the fishers and their catch and makes himself enemy with at least one of dem. GJ
Out of shape in making comics, and as always, drawing humans, but its good to work with it again!
"part 2 umbrascythe.deviantart.com/art… "
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When I first saw this, I thought that Mori'rai's hair was actually the pelt of some animal. It does show how scruffy his life was.
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It´s never easy being a small scavenger in a small village : (
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or bring a nice group. Good luck stopping a bunch of Scavs
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They manage this lonely one easily enough.
There arent a lot of yinglets that far north " hes pretty much the only one"
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btw Congrats on the comic, like i personally think its agony to draw one cuz i aint that good at it yet xzx but its really amazing! Plus you make your own charm into it , this is what i love to see for an artist, passion and effort, Not dumb badly drawn fetish art for quick easy views
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Thanks a lot! I´m also very proud of what I have made so far and enjoy working with the race.
Drawing a comic can be an pain to make at times, But the way I see it, if the story is interesting and easy to catch on to,
then it doesn´t need to look like a professional comic.
Besides " all artists says this" you get better as you keep creating material and practice!
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well yeah, im amazed at you being able to draw a whole city, I stuggle to make even a good building, like a decent building takes forever, thats why i just shove them in a forest, its easier for me. Well i wanted to jump on the Yinglet wagon, maybe draw more of Val species as well , i hope he see's my message though, If Neeva prooves to be too much then it would ruin all my idea for her story and progression
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I started out with having fun making the city.
Then I HATED it. So many small annoying details to take into account.
The art contributing community is a nice and tight pack. They have a group on FA and a telegram group as
well if you are intrested in diving deeper into yinglet territory.
Maybe get more people to take a look on your ideas!
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well i have a telegram but i am really shy. Like extremly nervous person, Im just afraid that Neeva will be a laughing stock, i wanted to have someone who could be maybe... fresh? Someone so small and from a not so bright species, become a real threat? Theres a lot of work to be done and believe me!! Neeva had a looooot of redesign and lore change.
Exemple, her first lore she had 2 claw gauntlet and was burning human alive for fun..... yeeeeah i know the edge is strong. But with that idea i tried to make it more believable. plus i didnt want to make her a joker type of character who wants to see the world burn and such.
She wants to create respect for her kin, but she is doing it in a really dangerous manner, and whoever educated her must have know what he was doing, Even neeva feels like she is nothing but the creation of a sick fuck who wanted to create Yinglet soldiers or something
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Indeed, he even wanted to take only the smallest fish, what more do they want?
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It's because of the mentality. It took the fishermen time and effort to catch these fish. That food is for their families, that's why they can not share. In addition to these Yingles, they see them as if they were rats. So there are many factors.
Until recently I discovered this breed and I am truly fascinated. I love rodents, but these look so .... so .... needy. They want to try to live with humans, but they do not know how and besides live miserably.
I am intrigued by these creatures, as well as their development.
I hope you succeed in your friend comic. And enjoy doing much, as I read it.
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Im glad that you like this little comic ^^
And about the mindset of Mori´rai, As a Yinglet, he dosnt really understand that they fish for their families and income.
I find it rather difficult from time to time to come up with Yinglet sillyness and stupidity. Like,
how do you create something thats a fine line between believable stupid and pathetic adorable at the same time.
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First of all, excuse the delay. Lately I've been pretty busy hehe.
All the premises and ideologies that the Yinglets have, in this case Mori'rai, is due to their lack of knowledge. And I did not want to say the word, but they are stupid. But stupidly adorable, that's why they fascinate me.
Keep putting yourself in your shoes and think like him, sure you will have more ideas that you want to develop.
Me: Hey Mori'rai!
Mori'rai: ¿Ha?
Me: Be lovely !!
Mori'rai: ... ¿What is that? O How is it eaten?
AWWW
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Its no problem.
Yea, its fun to try and create someone who wants to prevail, but is having the odds against him, and not being the smartest creature dose not help.
"You got the will, but lack the wits"
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The best stories are those that suffer a lot to reach a goal. In this case Mori'rai, not only wants to live with humans, but wants to learn to live for himself in his society. It is what makes the Yinglets fantastic ^^
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Ey, very nice! You definitely got the yinglet mindset/speech down, as well as the standard method of dealing with them.
(With rocks)
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Thanks! Im happy that you think I got the yinglet psyche right, and yea, at least this fisher really hates yinglets, and to him, stones and clubs are very acceptable ways to deal with them.
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I´m glad you like it, working on the next one.
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