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Published: 2011-08-28 17:07:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 5450; Favourites: 177; Downloads: 62
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Description Count Blitzkrieg was once a scientist trying to find a way to solve the energy crisis. knowing how all livings things gives off a certain amount of energy, he conducted experiments to see if he can harness this energy.

He created a machine which he call Mjolnir can produces more than 50% more energy than it gain. he use it on himself and manage to power a small room. basically he found a way to turn people in to living batteries.the machine would be place on people so that that operate small machinery and housing

Mjolnir could also be placed on other machines as well, hoping to integrate them with solar panels, wind and water turbines so that they can create more than enough energy for the entire planet.

even though the experiment seemed to be a success there seems to to be some strange side effects. one being that if a person wear the machine for too long they becomes pale and in some case "try to suck the energy out of machines and even other people". another is that thunder clouds would appear where ever the Mjolnir was being used.

though unable to figure out why some people are becoming "energy vampires" he did figure out that he may have accidentally created a type of weather machine.

undercover agents learned of this and reported back to the leaders. he received threats that if he didnt hand over Mjolnir that they would take it by force. he refuse saying that the machine was for the benefit of the planet not a weapon of war.

one night while working on Mjolnir thieves broken in to his lab tiring to steal his blueprint, he confronted the thieve forgetting to take off Mjolnir. in the struggle he was stabbed in the eye. he fell to the ground where the thieve beat him. during this they damaged Mjolnir, it completely drain them of all of their life energy.

laying on the ground holding on to life he pleaded for help. Pride came to him, telling him that he joined him that he would create a better world. He agreed and he and Mjolnir became one. become a vampire the feed off energy of living thing and creating massive storm "to wash away the filth of the world."


fuck thats a long as bio
been working on this guys for a longs ass time
he is the general of the shocking troopers and Pride's second in command
well hope you guys like
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Comments: 21

queenElsafan2015 [2015-09-29 05:11:09 +0000 UTC]

 This dude reminds me of the kantus monk from gears of war 2&3

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UndeadKitty13 In reply to queenElsafan2015 [2015-09-29 12:10:04 +0000 UTC]

totally does

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queenElsafan2015 In reply to UndeadKitty13 [2015-09-29 18:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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sin-and-love [2014-11-07 06:17:20 +0000 UTC]

1) A machine able to put out more energy than it takes in would violate the second law of thermodynamics.

2)Shouldn't Pride's second in command be one of the other sins?

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UndeadKitty13 In reply to sin-and-love [2014-11-08 19:04:59 +0000 UTC]

1) I know, its based off of a conspiracy that I heard of. I don't remember what it was called but I remembered it was referenced in one of  Disney's Recess  episode where Gretchen made the machine for a science project and a two agents come in take the machine and erase the formula that was on the black board.

Also love how this got to you and not the whole machine creating storms, turning people into living batteries and later into energy vampire. (I do the same shit when I'm watching sci-fi movies )

2) Pride doesn't think to highly of the other sins (mainly because they don't kiss his ass), he would rather employ a human to be his second in command then any of the sins

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sin-and-love In reply to UndeadKitty13 [2014-11-08 21:24:58 +0000 UTC]

1) wild guess, that conspiracy had to do with Nazis and\or aliens.

2)That makes a bit of sense, but the situation still kind of makes the other sins seem out of place. It makes unclear their exact relationship to pride. Almost like they're not supposed to be there. In fact, now that I think about it, you could just drop off the six sins entirely and just rename pride "the Antichrist" and have the plot work just fine.

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bitsincorporated [2014-04-21 02:37:43 +0000 UTC]

pride's army really reminds me the nazis

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UndeadKitty13 In reply to bitsincorporated [2014-04-23 03:26:43 +0000 UTC]

they are kinda based off of them

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bitsincorporated In reply to UndeadKitty13 [2014-04-23 14:02:54 +0000 UTC]

make sense for me

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AesirMaster [2013-06-02 16:28:15 +0000 UTC]

really digging the cape-like trench coat. nice job on the coloring and shading

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Just4Fun02 [2012-12-03 01:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is amazing, all the details put into the clothing/robotics and anatomy/position are incredible. Dun want to cross this guy! Kudos sir!

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girlgunner [2012-09-20 00:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Lightening war, nice.

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girlgunner [2012-06-03 03:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeek! He's terrifiying!

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MephilesTheDark1 [2011-10-01 07:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Out of all your works, this one is my favourite

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Tiranos [2011-09-10 21:22:10 +0000 UTC]

This is very cool , "energy vampires" , NICE !!!!!

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yeomaria [2011-08-28 23:41:33 +0000 UTC]

It really sees that it took your time to develop this fella
This story seems interesting, and the design, beside the shower of purple, is coolio, like they way how the tubes are connected from the head to the arms

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HellviewResident [2011-08-28 23:17:46 +0000 UTC]

OoO wow dude this is fucking awesome!

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MephilesTheDark1 [2011-08-28 19:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Astonishing work! The design is perfect

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Lycodrake [2011-08-28 17:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Woah, serious Wall of Text there, but a great description.

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UndeadKitty13 In reply to Lycodrake [2011-08-28 17:25:10 +0000 UTC]

i guess i got carried away with his bio

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Lycodrake In reply to UndeadKitty13 [2011-08-28 17:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, good characters have lengthy backgrounds, so it's to be expected.

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