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Description
Update: Now with a written ref!+++++
Behold my child! *kicks trashcan over*
He's a bit of an impulsive brat, but he means well.
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NAME: "Ruk" (Heoruk, but he prefers the sound of his nickname.)
SPECIES: Kyzahndi ("K(eye)-zan-dee"). Carnivorous aliens who are in their first stages of moving off their home planet, living out in giant city-ships, and exploring the galaxy. They call their home world "Leyuatha" ("Lay-oo-aw-tha"). The city-ship Ruk belongs to is called "Tal'vunn", and some joke that it's Leyuatha's third moon. You can't actually see it from the planet's surface, but it has been steadily growing and developing over decades, and it's one of the largest ones yet.
PROFESSION: Bounty-hunter
LIKES: Fighting, eating, sleeping, hunting, arguing, challenging himself, stupid pranks, acting in accordance with his conscience...
DISLIKES: Losing, eating, his own stupidity (he can be pretty hard on himself when he screws up), annoying training peers, being/feeling shown up, realizing how cruel he can be (his conscience never fails to point it out)...
PERSONALITY:
+Had a nasty chip on his shoulder when he was younger. Still does, but to a lesser extent. He's not very patient (especially with himself) or wise (in general), but at least he's aware of it, and he's striving to improve.
+Has a fairly deep compassionate streak. This may seem to conflict with that first note, but it's actually a huge part of it. (More on that under the Background section.) Ruk likes making people nervous - he's good at it. But he gets a thrill from the idea of actually being trusted (especially by potential prey) and being worthy of that trust.
+As much as a jerk as he can sometimes be to those he perceives as prey, it's very easy for Ruk to feel protective. He likes being big, scary, and powerful, but he'd rather be a guardian than a bully.
ABILITIES:
+Ruk excels in tracking, fighting, and thinking on his feet. He sucks at doing research about a place ahead of time, though.
+As a Kyzahndi, Ruk typically doesn't chew - opting to swallow his prey whole. His teeth are more for fighting, speaking, and territorial displays.
+Ruk is a decent fighter, dexterous enough to wield a sword/ax/knife in each of his four hands. While his skill is still improving, Ruk's real power in a fight comes from his sheer ferocity.
+Some Kyzahndi cultures have developed potions to counter and stall their acids so they can hold live prey safely in their stomachs for a limited time. They still have to swallow air for their prey to breathe (and the prey will remind them by squirming periodically when the air gets too thin). It's a favored smuggling technique and features in some traditional rituals. Some Kyzahndi even use it for their friends or lovers for fun (if said friends and/or lovers trust them that far). Ruk has heard of a more permanent solution; a questionable procedure that can give his body a separate, adaptable chamber with life-support functions for whoever is inside (including cycling air for prey that need to breathe). He's saving up for it, but in the meantime, he's also trying to learn how to brew that potion, himself.
BACKGROUND:
+Ruk's growth was a bit stunted in his youth. (He's still growing - his kind never really stop, they just slow down. The oldest, most well-fed ones are around 30ft tall, but the bigger they get, the more food they need to maintain so much mass. Starvation will gradually cause them to shrink, but they can always grow again if they get enough food.) From a young age, he was afflicted with a sense of compassion that clashed with his dietary requirements. His folk evolved as strict carnivores with a preference for swallowing prey alive, and Ruk had a strong love/hate relationship with the feeling of living prey squirming (and dying) in his belly. He tried to live off of dried, already-dead meat while keeping his live food as secret pets, devoting a lot of time and effort to helping them relax and trust him. His elders found out, though, and force-fed him those pets, which broke Ruk's heart. He became depressed and angry and took out his rage on his peers in the training pits, gaining a reputation as a savage fighter despite his shorter, thinner stature. Everyone thought he was just bitter about being the smallest in his training group.
+He has had a "secret hide-out" underneath an abandoned stadium-in-progress on Tal'vunn ever since he was young. Funding for finishing the damn thing keeps failing to go through, so it's just kind of there and nobody really pays it any mind unless they're an impulsive, curious brat like him. He doesn't go there much anymore, but it used to be his favorite place to hide, recover after training, make plans, and brood.
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Comments: 31
Paddyssis2706 [2017-08-13 11:22:02 +0000 UTC]
Even though I know I've seen this before I've never noticed the earrings, I think that its a nice touch.
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lyingunderfire [2017-08-09 05:06:14 +0000 UTC]
Ah! Conflicted predators: A soft spot of mine!
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undigniFiend In reply to lyingunderfire [2017-08-09 08:51:05 +0000 UTC]
Aw yeah, that tension between what comes naturally to their body and what comes naturally to their mind makes for some fun drama! I mean really, what's more thrilling than a big badass who craves you in a very dangerous way, but who also likes/respects you enough to hold back (for now...)?
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lyingunderfire In reply to undigniFiend [2017-08-10 02:33:05 +0000 UTC]
[Never mind that other post. He thought he was replying instead of creating a new chain.]
I is stupid!
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NoctoNommer [2017-08-09 00:47:04 +0000 UTC]
Nice to hear from this dork again! I remember some of this information from our RP, but it's nice to see it all organized in one place (which reminds me, I STILL need to make an official bio for Zyn). Looking back on it, he's really a sweet fella once you get to know him...and don't tease him about his height...
I really like the detail about him saving up for that (questionable) digestive modification. It shows just how serious he is about keeping his prey safe. And it kinda reminds me of the "eye-shine" surgery that Riddick got in Pitch Black. XD
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undigniFiend In reply to NoctoNommer [2017-08-09 01:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I love that RP! It really helped develop him a ton!
Duuuude, I'd love to see a bio for Zyn!
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NoctoNommer In reply to undigniFiend [2017-08-09 21:58:30 +0000 UTC]
I really love it too. ^^ And I'll definitely get around to it soon!
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moioflb [2017-08-08 23:01:22 +0000 UTC]
I like this character a lot. Everything about his description makes him even more enjoyable. Those deep loner predator rogues are so attractive! As prey it would be so cool to be played with by that tongue...!
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undigniFiend In reply to moioflb [2017-08-08 23:25:08 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like him!
...And heck yeah, some tongue from a Kyzahndi would be exciting. Especially if they have mouth piercings, so you get hints of cold metal along with hot breath and the occasional graze of fangs along your skin. *ugly laughter*
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moioflb In reply to undigniFiend [2017-08-09 01:45:52 +0000 UTC]
Yeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssyesyesyesyeeeeeeessssssssssssssss
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undigniFiend In reply to cutewerewolfgirl [2017-08-08 21:55:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! (And thanks for suggesting it!)
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cutewerewolfgirl In reply to undigniFiend [2017-08-08 21:57:34 +0000 UTC]
No problem! He seems very interesting in personality and species
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cutewerewolfgirl [2017-08-08 05:16:08 +0000 UTC]
I love this guy's design, his humanoid and alien design blends perfectly well together. Now if only there was a written ref XD I'd like to get to know this character
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undigniFiend In reply to cutewerewolfgirl [2017-08-08 16:43:05 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like him! A written ref sounds like fun - I think I'll do that.
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cutewerewolfgirl In reply to undigniFiend [2017-08-08 19:24:35 +0000 UTC]
That's good, it adds more detail and stuff. Takes me a long time to write a ref for my characters lol
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lyingunderfire [2016-04-20 05:40:21 +0000 UTC]
That smile. I love it!
[You said that in the previous version too.]
I know. I guess I see what others see in my smile with this character.
[What? That it terrifies them?]
Yeah!
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undigniFiend In reply to lyingunderfire [2016-04-20 06:15:20 +0000 UTC]
High-five, my fellow scary-smile enthusiast!
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lyingunderfire In reply to undigniFiend [2016-04-20 12:41:34 +0000 UTC]
Hell yeah!
*Winces and shakes hand in pain*
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NoctoNommer [2016-04-20 02:52:08 +0000 UTC]
Man, it looks even better!
I don't know why, I find his coloration pretty damn eerie. Maybe it's because of his paler skin contrasting with those bright green eyes of his. And that tongue o___o But all of the creepiness really fits for a semi-nocturnal species like him.
I like how you made the distinction between the texture of his skin and that bit of armor on his legs. I was having trouble figuring out what it was when it was just lineart.
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undigniFiend In reply to NoctoNommer [2016-04-20 03:57:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Eerie was what I was going for. *victory dance*
That's an interesting note about the armor. I hadn't realized it was visually confusing as lineart. I actually had all his thigh muscles drawn out at first, and now I kinda wish I hadn't covered them up, but I was thinking 'yeah I need to consider what kind of armor he wears, so let's experiment," and then I promptly gave up on it. XD Ah, well. His armor's going to be in a separate pic, anyway.
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NoctoNommer In reply to undigniFiend [2016-04-20 04:11:38 +0000 UTC]
Ah, okay. It wasn't that confusing, but I think that the coloration really helps distinguish what's his artificial armor and what's his natural, organic armor. In general, color helps make things pop more.
I can't wait to see the next pic
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The-Jasmine-Nation [2016-04-19 23:22:46 +0000 UTC]
I just noticed he has the facial structure of a vampire bat :3
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undigniFiend In reply to The-Jasmine-Nation [2016-04-20 01:33:58 +0000 UTC]
Neat! The nose does kind of remind me of a vampire bat, now that you mention it.
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