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They threw me down roughly on my knees, my energy drained and my body aching from the electricity that had coursed through my body not too long ago. The rain came thundering down on me, soaking me wet until my hair stuck to my face. I felt so defeated, so weak, so pathetic...My pride was crushed by being defeated and forced to kneel before this monster. And yet, I found the strength to look up at my enemy through the pouring rain."Tell me where the Avatar is and I'll let you keep your bending."
I glared at him, not daring to look away in fear for that wasn't the way I was raised. I wasn't raised to cower against fear or by those who have a greater power than me. I was raised to be a Beifong.
"I won't tell you anything, you monster!"
"Very well."
He walked around behind me and I closed my eyes slowly, relishing for what may be my last moments as a bender. And with the last few moments I had, everything fell silent to my ears as he placed his hands on me and my eyes shot wide open when my stomach lurched like I was falling a thousand feet into a bottomless pit. I could feel it leaving me. My earth bending, my metal bending...everything...
And like that, my world went dark.
"Lin..."
Where am I?
"Lin..."
Am I...dead?
"Damn it Lin, wake up!"
I snapped my eyes open and at first my sight was blurry but came into focus. A gasp had escaped my lips when I found myself lying on the ground with a woman towering over me.
"Mother?"
She grinned and offered her hand to me which I took, still in shock. How can this be? My mother was dead. How can she be here with me now? Did that mean that I was dead too? Before I could even utter a question, she pulled on my arm and hugged me like she used too when I was just a child. She felt solid, like a real human being. Nothing like a ghost or something transparent.
"I'm so proud of you..." she whispered.
If i was dead, I thought as I hugged her back, then I would be fine with that if this was what heaven was. I rested my forehead on her shoulder, gritting my teeth as tears threatened to fall. I would not cry. Not even in front of my mother.
"But I failed...he took away my bending."
"You did it for the Avatar," she said, breaking our hug and resting her hands on my shoulders with a smile. "You saved Tenzin and his family and protected the Avatar! So what if he took away your bending? You're still going to kick his ass! Don't tell me you're giving up!"
"Of course not!" I answered, surprised that she would even think that I would surrender.
"That's my girl!" she cheered, patting me hard on the shoulder. "Never give up Lin, keep fighting until the very end. That's what I did and along the way I achieved many things, and you can too. Bending or not, you're still my daughter who can kick ass like her mother!"
For what seemed like it had been a long time, I smiled. I smiled like never before ever since my mother died and felt warmth rush through me and happiness brighten my dark thoughts of doubt and failures. I was with my mother, and nothing else could make me happier. But then my heart sank and shock came back to me when I saw her fading away.
"Why are you fading?!" I asked, grasping her shoulders as if it would help to make her stay.
"Well, I can't stay here forever Lin. I'm dead, remember? This is the longest time I could hold my presence just to be here with you and now my time is up."
I knew that it would be childish and selfish to beg her to stay no matter how much I missed her. So I accepted the fact that it was time for her to go even though it was hard for me to do so.
"I love you," I whispered as she hugged me one last time.
I could feel her smile even though I couldn't see it. Her hand stroking my hair gently as I shut my eyes while the rest of her finally faded along with her last fleeting words that echo until they grew faint.
"I love you too, Lin."
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Comments: 38
unknownvizard In reply to Psyro1601 [2012-06-19 22:07:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh geez, don't get me started too! DX
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Yrosasion [2012-06-19 06:36:09 +0000 UTC]
i'm crying like a four year old child without candy... ):
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TheatreFox [2012-06-19 04:51:13 +0000 UTC]
Awesome piece! Good job! so sad for Lin Maybe Toph is secretly alive and thatd brighten all of the fandoms day
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unknownvizard In reply to TheatreFox [2012-06-19 16:08:09 +0000 UTC]
Omg that would be so epic if she was secretly alive! That would mean toph would beat the crap outta Amon in revenge for her daughter! Amon vs toph, totally epic fight right there!
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TheatreFox In reply to unknownvizard [2012-06-19 18:13:38 +0000 UTC]
FOR REAL. though they'd prob have Toph die instead of losing her bending... plus she'd be super old. sigh. If only she is alive would that be awesomeeee
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unknownvizard In reply to TheatreFox [2012-06-19 19:03:48 +0000 UTC]
Toph would be badass no matter what age! I doubt she's alive though, cuz remember what katara said? All her friends have passed (or something close to that) SO FREAKING SAD!!!! IM TEARBENDING AGAIN!
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TheatreFox In reply to unknownvizard [2012-06-19 19:34:22 +0000 UTC]
Toph was younger than katara though. le sigh.
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Clare94 [2012-06-18 07:30:48 +0000 UTC]
This just is not fair. How could they do this. WHYYYYYYY
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tenneyshoes [2012-06-17 18:45:25 +0000 UTC]
This is great! If there is one good thing that came from that episode it is all the amazing Toph Lin moments people are putting out!
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unknownvizard In reply to tenneyshoes [2012-06-17 23:55:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah they really need to show some mommy toph and lil Lin flashbacks in the show!
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GustyValley [2012-06-17 16:35:26 +0000 UTC]
I had a mini omigod attack when I saw this story. I'm still waiting for flashbacks of Lin and Toph in the show!~ X,3
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unknownvizard In reply to GustyValley [2012-06-17 23:53:10 +0000 UTC]
I hope that mini heart attack didn't damage you too much! Omg I really hope that they will show some flashbacks or I'll go on a rampage!
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GustyValley In reply to unknownvizard [2012-06-18 00:05:26 +0000 UTC]
Right? To be completely honest, Lin's like, half the reason why I watch the show!~ XD
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Thirrinaki [2012-06-17 10:56:58 +0000 UTC]
Can I join the tearbending group? This episode made (and still makes me) die inside and cry. Linnnnn!!!!!
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unknownvizard In reply to Thirrinaki [2012-06-17 23:54:37 +0000 UTC]
Yes you can, I'm still tear bending and I've created an ocean with my fellow tear benders! DXXX the scene where Lin just falls motionless to the ground keeps replaying in tpmy mind and tearing at my heart! But she will always be badass and a BAMF like her mom! I hope she gets her bending back somehow!
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Thirrinaki In reply to unknownvizard [2012-06-18 08:25:39 +0000 UTC]
I also hope she gets her bending back. The scene where she falls to the ground...god don't mention it I still feel my heart is being ripped out of my chest everytime I think about it. I guess once a badass, always a badass but now she's more vulnerable... not to mention that bending was the only thing she had left....
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unknownvizard In reply to Thirrinaki [2012-06-18 19:19:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I think she may be a bit vulnerable but she shouldnt be that much since she knows how to fight. It would be weird seeing her without her bending.
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unknownvizard In reply to sammy-valdez [2012-06-17 10:23:50 +0000 UTC]
Eeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk thank you!
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unknownvizard In reply to Loba-J [2012-06-17 01:21:09 +0000 UTC]
I already did and whenever I think about it I die even more inside
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Loba-J In reply to unknownvizard [2012-06-17 16:16:30 +0000 UTC]
Yup, I still get pissed at Amon... I hope he dies
... or gets turned into a bender. He'd hate that.
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unknownvizard In reply to Loba-J [2012-06-17 23:50:59 +0000 UTC]
I usually root for the bad guys but I've hated Amon from the start, and I hate him even more now after what he did to Lin! DX
I hope he dies a painful death and that Lin plays a part in it too!
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unknownvizard In reply to DevilzLittleAngel [2012-06-17 01:21:35 +0000 UTC]
I tearbended during the show! But let us tear bend together!
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TheAssasinSister [2012-06-16 19:15:31 +0000 UTC]
Two things. First is you spoiled it for me. >_> I am not pleased. Two, very heartwarming story.
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unknownvizard In reply to TheAssasinSister [2012-06-17 01:21:53 +0000 UTC]
Lol so sorry! and thanks XD
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TheAssasinSister In reply to unknownvizard [2012-06-17 01:32:03 +0000 UTC]
I'd run if i was you. D:<
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