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Published: 2003-09-09 10:12:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 20
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So just shut the hell up already.Who do you think you are anyway? I'll tell you who you are.
You're a hypocrite. Stop living your life in duplicity. Plastic. Take off that mask already; it's useless, I can see right through it. Just watch as your exterior corrodes. Transparent, the enigma has vanished.
That's right. I can see right through you.
I watch as you give into him, give into them. Is it the money that has claimed you? Is it the power? I can see your fallacious piety, hearing you "lead me not into temptation" every single Sunday. But you have been tempted, you no longer have a soul to sell.
You don't scare me anymore. You no longer have the power. You've lost control of everything, it no longer revolves around you. Your reign has come to an end, the fairytale is over. An apocryphal life. You are not the euthanasia that will save us all. You are now only a distant effigy of who you used to be. You will now what it's like to burn.
Don't even attempt to destroy the reflection, the reminder of the depravity of your being. If you try to kill it, it will just multiply.
I wake up feeling dead inside. As do they. They, whom you have raped of their happiness. The hourglass is slipping away and the memories of you are taken from my mind. And the blood just tastes cold to me because I do not need your sympathy and your sarcastic smile. The hushed tears turn into a rhythmic lullaby.
But suddenly the voices only heard off camera cry out to me.
Flashback to a time when you could hear laughter. Flashback to a time when butterfly dreams flew freely. Flashback to a time when I wanted your protection.
To a time when you used to love me.
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Comments: 7
repus [2003-11-18 09:02:28 +0000 UTC]
this is a good little story you have going on here. it's short, but it makes sense. and the ending was nicely wrapped up. good job...
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nightmaresghost [2003-09-10 00:14:57 +0000 UTC]
ahh well written! some parts are a little confusing..but its good! needs a story based around it...wheee *splodes*
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unrealreality18 In reply to nightmaresghost [2003-09-10 08:23:09 +0000 UTC]
there is a story.. im working on it.. it's still kinda in my head though..
and yeah..thanx!
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escapeartist [2003-09-09 10:17:07 +0000 UTC]
"You're a hypocrite. Stop living your life in duplicity. Plastic. Take off that mask already; it's useless, I can see right through it. Just watch as your exterior corrodes. Transparent, the enigma has vanished."
HEAR YE! HEAR YE!
It's great Nicole. It really is.
If this was graded... "Dr. Brokvam" better have given you a more than decent grade (an A in other words) even if it's a "bitter interior monologue".
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unrealreality18 In reply to escapeartist [2003-09-09 11:21:52 +0000 UTC]
"HEAR YE! HEAR YE!" oh creepy dude.. remember that from last year?? if not.. ill refresh your memory later.. lol not on here cuz apparently people might still remember that... hmm.. i dunno if this one is gna be graded.. it's part of a journal thing, like, we do all the entries and turn it in at the end..
meh.. im still pissed though. yeah i know it's my fault that it's in late, but 50 PERCENT OFF for ONE DAY late??? that's seriously fucked up man.. i mean.. you turn it in one day late, and it's already a freakin F.. what the hell's her problem anyway.
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unrealreality18 [2003-09-09 10:13:37 +0000 UTC]
oh yeah.. and ill add one of those cool picture preview thingies when i have the time..
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