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Published: 2011-01-07 22:57:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1924; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 18
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- round 7
Wow... I had never expected I would actually finish this before deadline. These last two parts have been started 6 days ago. And I did it.
Concerning the deadline, I had to scrap a big part out of my concept. Originally, Charon and Welp should catch up with Isaac and Rhea, ending up in an epic finish! I really regret I couldn't draw this anymore but I guess it's better to have a shorter finished entry than having an unfinished, longer one. It feels like the comic isn't even half as awesome as it could have been with this final spurt...
Oh, and sorry if any mistakes concerning grammar or typing may appear in this entry. As I said, time was short and I didn't check it for any mistakes (just corrected the ones I saw while adding the speechbubbles... shame on me!)
And hey, this is me, implying some drama into a comic! C'mon, you didn't expect Rhea crying like this, did you? >D
However, I better don't tell you what I think about my own comics. I'm afraid judges could read it and agree. I want to keep the quarks of chance I have to move on in this after all.
Oh, and by the way... This round's moral: Never piss of a Kyogre, even if it wasn't on purpose. *bricked*
In the end, I really have to say that I'm very proud of myself. I had never expected I could do an almost 50-paged comic... again! Round 6 has been long already but Round 7 is even a little longer! This really took the last energy recources I had.
But it was a lot of fun. And I hope you guys had at least a little fun reading this comic and enjoyed it.
Thanks for reading!
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Rhea UBF 10-182 [link]
Isaac UBF 10-460 [link]
Unn-yen [link]
Avenir [link]
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Comments: 63
Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. ^o^
But I really feel like people are expecting too much of me in this final round... I mean, my plot really sucks balls! I'm going to do my very best, though! ;A;
And thank you so much for the support as well. Having so many people encouraging me is more than I had ever hoped for. *starts to get cheesy here again*
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You haven't let us down until now! And I'm sure we'll love whatever you come up with. <3333
We love you, girl~~~
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Very powerful entry. Rhea was truly pushed to her limits. It was a good read.
And a twist ending XD Love it!
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Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed it! >u<
I could call myself a real sadist - at least when it comes to my characters. Poor Rhea really had to go through a lot. xD
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But it all made her stronger and wiser in the end
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Bwhaha Poor Hobo-human That was purely wonderful~~ I'm rooting for Rhea!
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Yay, thank you so much. I'm gonna do my best for this final round, I promise! Γ² Γ³
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WOO Go Rhea~~! *twirls little greenalien flag
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Thank you, thank you, thank you...!
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Woooaaahhh that's some nice drama there. So emotional, I was all ".A." when Rhea was crying and stuff! Great job, I just love this comic, and it really is a shame you couldn't finish it how you wanted originally! But maybe you could do a longer version in the future or something. Iunno, just... trying to be helpful and... stuff. o3o;;
BUT LOL THE ENDING WTFT. OH, THOSE EXPRESSIONS AND HOW THE CIGARETTE FELL OUT OF HIS MOUTH, IT'S BRILLIANT.
I DON'T CARE HOW MANY TIMES HAS IT BEEN USED, IT'S BRILLIANT ANYHOW.
BECAUSE I'M EASILY AMUSED. HAH-chop'd-
Though I'll always think of 'alien missy' when I see Rhea now. I blame you because I can. o3o
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it overall. :3
I guess I won't edit anything about this anymore, though. I mean, the round is done, I have to start with my final round entry as soon as I can and until I have the time to add more in this, I'll most certainly die. xD
Pff, great. Rhea, the alien missy. What did I do..?
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BUT IF YOU DIE
WHO'S GONNA MAKE THESE COMICS?! D8>
erimean
Oh, what did you doooo~?
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Uhm... someone else does. There are more comic artists out there, after all. *is so nothing special*
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But their comic won't be awesome in the way your comic is awesome. D:
Because each comic is awesome for something.
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I don't know, the results aren't there yet...
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What a touching scene all the way, I shouldnt say I love her crying faces,but I do! Theyre so full of emotion, and yet she manages to keep that subtle sexyness all the way. I don't know what it is, but I\n my opinion sexy covers more then just looks. It's all about attitude.
So, how autobiographic is Rhea?
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I know what you mean! I don't know why but I really enjoyed her drawing in this scene. I never knew I was able to draw a character crying before. xD
Thanks! <3
Uhm... autobiographic...? What exactly do you mean by that?
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Exactly 
What I meant with autobiographic is basicly, how much is she like you?
Great writers find a great deal of their inspiration in their own lives. Does she characterize something from you?
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Thank you... it actually was a last minute idea since I never write out my script. It's great to know that I succeeded with this way. <3
Oh, I see~
The first thing I can say about this is: Every character has something from its creator, in my opinion. May it be dislikes or likes, personality trades or just the clothes (e.g. someone loving gothic dresses will most probably create a character being goth, too.). Some people might disagree with that but I actually think it's unavoidable to give a character some of your personality. xD
So... with Rhea, it's difficult... hmm... *slapped for being a slow thinker*
I really don't know how close her personality is to mine. But I definitely know the feeling if you trust a person with your life and he or she suddenly lets you down. I think everyone does. But of course, I'm more social, though I'm a bit afraid of people... I also have a problem with relationships but then again, I'm more of an extroverted person. You see, it's really hard to tell how much Rhea is like me. She certainly is a part of me but not ALL of me.
Oh, and of course, her abilities, lol. I'm really good at Math and Physic, too. Just that Rhea is better in free calculating (I'm actually really bad at it) but Physic really is my thing. But that's the good thing about characters who are like this. Rhea is only able to explain you quantum physics because I can. So why not using this for advantage? xD
The seasickness and the low stamina, just like her milk-obsession and getting ill in cold areas easily are made up. Though I wouldn't reject a cup of hot chocolate either. xD
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There I was typing an entire story, and I hit the "back" button by accident X_X'.
But yea, I know exactly where you're coming from. I find it intruiging to learn how people create their work, especially if theyre talented. In my work, the story evolves around the character(s), so I never really used a script either. I didn't even plan out the pages and just started drawing at random until my last two or three pages. But that makes it easier for me to feature other OC's decently so theyre actually part of the story. By now, I met four other Team Rocket members all with gardevoirs XD, so they all fit perfectly. Haven't finished any of my new comicpages for a while come to think of it.
And the other reason I asked about Rhea was because I had feeling her 'trust issues' with people might be something from your own experience, and that made me wonder about yoΓΊ. The genius behind the alterego XD. But yea, it's a common experience, but there are few people how can appreciate it so they learn about life a little more. Being able to translate to comichero alterego's takes a great deal of selfknowledge, which is always a plus
People usually describe me as outgoing and theatrical in company and I'm usually able to like just about anyone, to a certain level ofcourse.. It's just that, when we go out for example, after a while I see a mass of people drinking, dancing, laughing, there's loud music everywhere and I have a moment where I wonder what the hell we're all doing. Like, what would aliens think if they saw us like that? Then again, I just go with the flow and have fun the rest of the night, being you're typical shallow beer drinking student which passes out in his bed with his clothes still on.. although last time was maybe a year and a half ago or so >_>...
Used to pass out in class a lot too, mostly during physics class 
Although that might be more chemistry related, but I guess that's a grey area
Still, I also think it narrows your world vision, I think its best to keep an open mind and accept that some things can't be logically explained, yet. That's why I can really appreciate your interest in quantum physics, which have always interested me, but never came to a full understanding.
One typical aspect which I liked was the theory about the 'cat which was both alive and dead'?
Where did you learn about quantum physics anyway?
Anyhow, before my firefox crashes again, it was great to read how Rhea came to be and where she came from
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...So you were writing everything again? Omigosh! o___O
But I know that. That happened to me already some other times as well.
Yeah, I'm just writing down some ideas for the script. I write down the dialogue but every time, it feels very flat. So I usually change a lot of things while lettering or even adding a lot of new stuff just because it suited the plot better. So the script I write is more like a guide line for me to not screw up the main idea but all the details will be usually added later.
Oh, I see... well, it's not such a big deal, really. I guess I made experiences just as everyone else. It's not like I'm traumatized and have to accomplish this by creating Rhea and making her go through all of this. ;D
You know, I think that a person creating a psychotic character doesn't have to be a psycho himself. But I am sure the guy know what he's talking about. Knowing the feeling itself is the most important thing for creating a convincing character and sometimes you might add things that are bothering you in the inside, but probably not as much as your character does.
...Does this make sense? I'm not sure about it, actually. I hope you understand what I mean.
Ah yes, sometimes you just have these weird thoughts. That's what makes us unique. :3
At a side note, I've never been to a disco or something - Rhea and me probably think alike in this. I don't enjoy dancing, loud music or drinking. I mean heck, you can't even talk to your friends because the music's so loud. So I don't really know because I never experienced that, yet I can imagine. xDD
Yes, this kind of knowledge is actually important, in my opinion. I think everyone should know this but only a few people do.
Chemistry and Physics are sometimes really close connected, that's true.
Oh, Schroedinger's cat! Yes, I know it yet we didn't have that theory in class (because I'm a geek, but I guess I've already proven that, lol.)
Most of the things I learnt in class, though. Physics and Math was my advanced course, that means we already had quite complex things there. So I know quite some things about quantum phsyics and if I find my book with all the euqations inside (mom must have it since we renovated my brother's and my room) I could most probably even calculate some things just like this. At least the more simple ones, hehe.
Okay, I'll send this now. Sorry to reply with an just as long reply. Haha. xD
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ARGH again it happened to me.
I'm too tired.. too .. type. moar.
where's yo BFOI comics at!?
(Will decently reply tomorrow!)
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Okay, that's nasty. Dx
BFOI COMICS? Oh no, I will only do a short entry for this round and after UBF, we'll see whether I'll ever draw a comic again. xD *slapped*
Okay, looking forward to it >:I
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This was an intensely awesome and cool comic, that's for sure. My only regret is that I hadn't read it sooner. xD;;
Yeah, waaaay too many humans have faaar too many untrustworthy characteristics. >.>
But if I know one thing, I know this: Every creature be it human, Pokemon, or alien, is 100% undoubtedly insane. 8D
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Aww, thanks so much, Josh! >u<
And yush, you made a point! But without a little insanity, life would be very boring, wouldn't it? >D
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You're indeed very welcome, eh~!
Insanity and madness make the world interesting, for sure, for sure!
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I really like your comics. You do them well, does it take you a long time?
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Thank you.
Well, this one whole thing took 6 Weeks now.
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That was really interesting xD
Nice surprise ending
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WOW that lots of awesome work and kickass comic!
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Thanks a lot. I really did my best. > <
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Wow. Poor Issac.
WELLLLL
His fault; maybe he should stop being such a pedo! 8D;
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everyone gets what he deserves~ 
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Gotta say that the dudes of the final panels are pretty anti-climatic, XD
Kyogre, you ass, I know that you are nut-brained size, but that's way too mean!!!!
Gotta love the old man, true gentleman!
That's some unexpected side to see from the alien girl O___O
I think that you did pretty well!
And bless your skills to make that comics so fast! They are such a pain to color!
I guess that you figure still today what I mean
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I know! But I was running out of time! D:
As I said, I wanted to make a muuuuuuch longer ending but the deadline moved closer and closer. So I definitely wanted to make the scene of Rhea caught in the whirlpool better and therefore, I had to sacrifice an epic ending. The ending would have been stupid if the whirlpool scene wouldn't have been good so... demonic circle. And I had to come to an end, otherwise I would have been even more dissatisfied with this entry. OTL
I really like Kyogre, actually (and it's very easy to draw, on top of that) but I guess Rhea will hate it now. |D;
I want to show what my characters are feeling, what they are thinking. Every acting has a meaning, or at least many have, in my opinion. I want to show that I am thinking about my characters and that it's not just an idea for a character but more than that... a real personality. I am noth sure whether I succeeded in this neither if people understand what I mean but I tried and that's why I'm proud of me finishing this comic. :3
Haha, thank you! I really need to catch some sleep now. My back hurts and at work they said my eyes were looking very tired already. This round was really exhausting. xD
Yes, they are a real pain to color... but doing backgrounds is even harder. I hate that part even more than basecoloring or shading. xD
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Oh Gott, das Ende war einfach Episch! XDDD So ein GlΓΌckskind, die Rhea! Und Isaac, mensch das war natΓΌrlich mehr als Bad Luck fΓΌr ihn. Aber aber der mittelteil im Whirlpool war wirklich echt toll. ;v; Ich dachte nur:"ZOMG NOEZ RHEA!" Und dann als Isaac zurΓΌck kam, dachte ich nur:"Wtf und jetzt rettet er sie?" Naja egal aufjedenfall wars echt super! ;___; Ich hab dein Round 7 Entry wirklich von Anfang bis Ende toll gefunden, und ich finds natΓΌrlich immernoch toll. xD You have mad and super cool comic skills. Uhm ja, ich drΓΌcke die Daumen das du weiter kommst!
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Freut mich, dass dus so gut fandest. Ich hab mir aber auch echt MΓΌhe gegeben. ;A;
Na ja... Isaac hats wohl am Ende doch nicht fertig gebracht, ein MΓ€dchen irgendwo mitten auf dem meer alleine verrecken zu lassen... oder sowas. Am Ende ist er wohl doch nicht so hart, wie er immer tut. n_n
Ja, das will ich wirklich hoffen... denn fΓΌr diesen Comic habe ich mich echt auf den Kopf gestellt. Es wΓ€re ziemlich schade, wenn das alles umsonst gewesen wΓ€re. > <
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NICE! 
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Thanks. I hope you enjoyed reading it. That's the only reason I'm making these comics for, actually... even if it sounds cheesy. *headscratching while she's wondering about her own positive attitude* o ,o
Aaaaaaaah, it would be just plain awesomeness if I'd make it into the semi-final round and fighting against Taz!! *fangirl scream*
DO WANT! ;A;
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Well, I'm kinda' the same ~ I love making people happy, but I also love the attention.
But yes! Don't give up EVER! I really REALLY would love to fight the Rhea!
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Yeah, same here. Though I don't get that much of attention as every other contestant. Most probably because my stuff is so long and those strips doesn't look appealing in the message center or something. *shot*
Yes yes, and at this point: Good luck for this round, Taz! >u<
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Yay~ yah finished~ hope you keep moving forward yo~
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Me too. I really doubt it, but hope is what dies last. 
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Has no idea what that means but Okay =7= )b
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really? Not what I see anyways, looks pretty good and finished
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Woow, amazing comic :0! full of drama and personality, also in my opinion a great use of backgroundsand speech in the transition between panels (specially the kyogre ones), quite enjoyable to read ^^ and great way to finish it XD. Best of luck for you in this round!! Β°wΒ°
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Thanks a lot, I'm really, really glad you enoyed it!
I'll really need a lot of luck to move on, though. ;w;
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