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Unu-Nunium — UBF2010 Round8 Part 13

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part 13: here!

I really hope I didn't miss anything or got mixed up some parts. I don't have the energy to check everything anymore... *drop*

This is the first time I ever drew a Nurse Joy, yb the way. o3o
Oh, and this part isn't colored because:
1. I was running out of time (yet this wasn't the last part I finished)
2. I liked it in this style - it's really coherent this way IMO.
3. I would have needed to draw special backgrounds for this.


Will add real desrciption later.

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Comments: 69

Civ-Killer [2011-07-23 23:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Loved it. I can't say anything else because words don't describe what I've just read (in the good way of course ).

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Unu-Nunium In reply to Civ-Killer [2011-07-24 12:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much! >u<

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TooSixy4ThisWorld [2011-06-24 23:33:52 +0000 UTC]

great work!

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MistyDawnAmara [2011-06-07 22:57:19 +0000 UTC]

XD PWND! my appologies for not commenting earlier, too hooked. i just read straight through the whole thing. XD my computer's on overheat, but i just can't stop. good for you Rhea. you tell those stupid reporters a thing or two.

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Unu-Nunium In reply to MistyDawnAmara [2011-06-08 11:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Man, I don't know whether I should be happy or scared about the fact you tortured your computer so much just to read through this. So I just stay with: Thank you very, very much!

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MistyDawnAmara In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-06-08 11:28:30 +0000 UTC]

naw, i leave it upsside down,a dn the cool air cools it down. my little baby will be fine. but yea, take it as a compliment. you're very very welcom^^

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Bi-Polaroid [2011-04-12 11:13:58 +0000 UTC]

Finally got the time to finish reading this through and wowwww. I love the way you tell the story, and the characters have wonderful depths of personality. Congratulations on making it so far; you honestly deserved it.
(can't wait to see your entry for this year's tournament x3)

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Unu-Nunium In reply to Bi-Polaroid [2011-04-12 11:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, it's great to hear people enjoyed reading this so much! >u<
Well, you probably noticed which character I'm going to throw in for this year, so you already know what you need to be prepared for~ >D

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gingerbreadcat [2011-04-09 15:47:19 +0000 UTC]

First of all, congratulations on making it so far into the contest! I take off my hat to you - it's an fantastic achievement. :')

You have done such an amazing job! D: You tell such incredible stories through your comics, I'm not even joking! You carry character consistency, suspense and anticipation throughout all the pages. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! :')

You've really inspired me to enter the contests again this year, even though I am so unsure if I will have the time in the future. :iconsweethug:

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Unu-Nunium In reply to gingerbreadcat [2011-04-10 11:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you, thank you! ;w;
If you keep on receiving comments like these, it doesn't matter what place you made after all. I am able to entertain people trhough my art and that's a lot more awesome than any title one could achieve. >u<
It would be awesome to see you again in a tournament soon, by the way. I really liked your art a lot.

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gingerbreadcat In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-04-13 13:45:08 +0000 UTC]

I love your outlook on this! It's really admirable!

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Tyehlicska [2011-04-04 15:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Hell yes, epic ending!

...or is it?

Gekooo, I might have been keeping this in my inbox for a while, but now it was definately worth reading and stuff. I have no idea how you do it, but you get my attention and keep me entertained with your comics every time! >w<
Must be a subliminal mind-controlling signal sent my Rhea or something. >A>;
-chop'd-
ERIMEAN, well, to sum it up nicely and stuff, the comic had minor flaws and stuff, but nothing is perfect, right? owo As I've said, I enjoyed it heaps overall, you did a very, very good job with the balance of serious and comedy stuff, and the exciting parts were... well, exciting! I was excited and couldn't wait to read more and...
I just wanna thank you for entertaining once again. I mean, I'm not even into Pokemon, but your Pokemon comics are just so heaps fun to read! I think you've even gotten me into liking the Pokeymans more than before... xwx;
And heaps good luck in this contest thingy I don't understand. But I hope you'll win (or have won? Iunno, is it over yet? owo;; ), andand... yeah. You'd definately deserve it for all the creativity and effort you've put into this. .w.

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Unu-Nunium In reply to Tyehlicska [2011-04-04 19:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! This comic is so long that I'm always really worried whether people feel like wasting their time while reading it. It's good to know that's not the case and that this even made you liking Pokemon more now. owo
Yes, this comic does have flaws but flawless is boring, isn't it? Edges = personality. *shot*
No, I know I messed this comic up. Majorly. I am not really satisfied with it although the ending serves it very well - it's this BAM I was aiming for. But I there are a lot of things I don't like in it. Talking about close deadlines. Otherwise it probably would have been even a little better. |D

Oh, and I didn't win. I probably am second-placed at least... I can't definitely tell because all of the finalists are just called runner-ups here but I was mentioned right after ~Jeeaark , who won the tournament. So... yeah, inofficially, I'm vice-champion.

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Tyehlicska In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-04-04 19:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Congrats anyhoo. .w.
I think I can understand why do you feel unsatisfied with the comic; maybe it's because it turned out differently than what you've imagined it would? I guess you think the way you've imagined it was heaps better than how you drew it, but I can't tell because I can't see in your head. owo;

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Unu-Nunium In reply to Tyehlicska [2011-04-06 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I think so. I imagined it so much cooler... people are only able to judge what they see but not what I imagined so they like what I did more than I do. .w.

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Tyehlicska In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-04-07 15:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Eh, it happens. .w.;
Though it certainly took me a while to have personal experience with this feeling.

IT SUCKS ;A;

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Joshing3the7Kokiri [2011-04-03 08:40:15 +0000 UTC]

Epically awesome entry, dudette. 8D! INTENSELY EPIC, INDEED!!!
Hope you won. 8D
(In the two weeks it took me to finally get around to looking at deviations at 4 in the morning. Haha... ha...)

Fantastic work on the drama. Had me on the edge of my seat.

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Unu-Nunium In reply to Joshing3the7Kokiri [2011-04-04 11:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear so many people enjoyed reading my entry! ^o^

Unfortunately, I didn't win (but I'm sure I've been second placed, lol).

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BluePanorama [2011-04-02 11:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Soo, nun komme ich endlich dazu das ganze zu Kommentieren. Es ist wirklich Schade das du verloren hast aber wie gesagt hast du's wirklich verdient das du soweit gekommen bist. Der Comic hat mir wirklich sehr gut gefallen und es gab einige Interessante Plot twists. (z.B als plötzlich das Stadion Licht auf das Guardevoir gefallen wär.) Man sieht wirklich in jedem einzelnen Pannel welch eine Mühe du in diesen Comic gesteckt hast, und ich finde dies wirklich sehr bemerkenswert Rena. Vorallem hast du dich allgemein auch extrem verbessert, wie gesagt ich habe mich immer gefreut als ein neuer BF Comic kam. Rhea ist wirklich ein wundervoller Charakter und besonders das Ende mit Piepi ging mir wirklich auch aufs Herz. ;A; Hoffentlich kann ich nächstesmal auch so durchstarten wie du es getan hast. Aufjedenfall Ganbatte für dich und Rhea für die Zukünftigen Challenges! *Eine große Rena und Rhea Flagge schwenk*

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Unu-Nunium In reply to BluePanorama [2011-04-04 15:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, danke, echt lieb von dir. Ja, ich denke, ich hätte es verdient, aber Vize zu sein kann ja auch nicht jeder von sich behaupten. x3
Ja, es hat wirklich sehr viel Mühe gemacht aber letzten Endes bin ich einfach nur froh, dass ich es durchgezogen habe und kann allgemein stolz drauf sein, so etwas geschafft zu haben.
Aber mal was anderes: Mich hat es ehrlich gesagt ein wenig gewundert, dass du nichts für R3 in BFOI gepostet hast. Hätte ehrlich gesagt erwartet, dass du zumindest irgendwas hinklatschst... na ja, was solls. Es gibt ja imme rnoch ein nächstes Mal und du hattest bestimmt deine Gründe. Wäre aber toll, bald mal wieder was von dir zu sehen. ^o^

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BluePanorama In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-04-04 15:49:05 +0000 UTC]

Ja leider hab ichs selbst mit extension nicht geschafft. Schule hat leider die Übermacht gewonnen. OTL Ich krieg leider nicht alles immer unter einen Deckel. TAT Und was hinklatschen wär irgendwie doof gewesen. Aber nächstesmal geb ich 1000% ohne rücksicht auf verluste. (Oder 5en. " *is shot*)

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Unu-Nunium In reply to BluePanorama [2011-04-04 19:30:40 +0000 UTC]

Mja, kann ich verstehen. Nicht jeder ist so verrückt und schiebt Nachtschichten. Ich hätte trotzdem was hingeklatscht. Denn: Am Anfang ist es in der Regel so, dass alles weiterkommt, was Entries einreicht, die auch nur im Entferntesten künstlerische Veranlagungen aufweisen. Ob hingeklatscht oder nicht, du wärst immer noch besser als andere gewesen und damit weiter. Und in der nächsten Runde hat sich der Stress wahrscheinlich wieder gelegt und man kann wieder durchpowern... joah. x3

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BluePanorama In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-04-04 19:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Hmm gut zu wissen, danke für den Tipp Rena. xD Fürs nächste mal werde ichs beachten und bei Zeitdruck einfach etwas schnell machen und hoffen das ich durchkomme. >D Muss Cyruz das nächste mal halt wieder leider. Lol. *hust hust*

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Unu-Nunium In reply to BluePanorama [2011-04-06 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Also am Anfang ist das immer einen Vesuch wert. Wie gesagt, es kommen bessere Zeiten und du kannst in den nächsten Runden, wenn du noch mehr zeichnen musst, nicht voraussetzen, dass deine Bilder immer besser werden, nein im Gegenteil. Meist werden sie sogar schlechter, weil man unter Zeitdruck steht und einfach nur noch alles schnell fertig machen will. Aber andererseits ist das auch wieder gut weil man vor Allem im Posing dadurch besser wird. Ich für meinen Teil komme mir jedenfalls vor, als könnte ich ich besser Posen zeichnen als vorher - und das shcneller! (Aber nur am PC. orz)
Lol, kannst ja bei UBF2011 teilnehmen, hast ja noch so 3 Wochen um ne App und nen kleinen Comic fertigzubekommen - der ja nichtmal gecolort sein muss. xDD

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gamma102 [2011-03-29 23:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Heh heh... MWAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Foolish alien!

You dare declare war on "us"!?
You can barely beat one human, yet we"ll come by the thousands!

Go back to your mother ship little alien. Or you stay here to get disected. Your choice.

But don't for get... i won't go easy on you...

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ToTo088 [2011-03-26 02:31:14 +0000 UTC]

Let me at her i will RELEASE TEH BOGUS and kick her arse >:C

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LittleDarkDragon [2011-03-23 07:09:11 +0000 UTC]

WOW some cool pink ball XD

Noo Rhea don't declare war with human >,<

Charon do not want more work!

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Unu-Nunium In reply to LittleDarkDragon [2011-03-23 11:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Elara is the most badass pink ball you've ever seen, hurr hur~ >3
Well, then Charon has to learn to row a little faster. >D

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LittleDarkDragon In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-03-24 00:43:56 +0000 UTC]

may be he should bring some motor boat back home and hire some soul. - -a

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Unu-Nunium In reply to LittleDarkDragon [2011-03-28 17:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Great plan, go ahead, Charon. >3

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Cometwing [2011-03-23 01:14:24 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful ending! I really enjoyed your comic! ^^

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Unu-Nunium In reply to Cometwing [2011-03-23 11:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. :3

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SeaStarSan [2011-03-23 00:52:02 +0000 UTC]

ogihdfjd This is amazing bro <3333 omg, all the enteries are amazinggg :'DDD So so hard to pick a side!! Good luck to all of you <3333

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Unu-Nunium In reply to SeaStarSan [2011-03-23 11:49:08 +0000 UTC]

I still don't believe in my victory but who knows... hope is what dies last. C:

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SeaStarSan In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-03-23 18:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Still, good luck~~

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Wasserbienchen [2011-03-22 20:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Wwwoooow <3
I like how you put some strong story into the comics… it really leaves an impression!

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Unu-Nunium In reply to Wasserbienchen [2011-03-23 11:50:52 +0000 UTC]

*looks at you account's name*
Danke für das Lob! ;D

Leaving in impression is one of the things that is most important for a comic IMO. So that's great to hear! <3

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DrakeMinami [2011-03-22 20:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Drake: A war on humanity huh? Bring it Rhea! I'll show you not to underestimate Earth! Who the Hell do think I am!?!

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and Drake just finished watching gurren lagann

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Great comic to the end! Now I really wanna join the UBF!

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Unu-Nunium In reply to DrakeMinami [2011-03-28 17:49:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

Gah, I still have to finish watching Gurren Lagann, haha. xD

Hey, go ahead! You stil can join the UBF and could even make it into the main tournament. ;D

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XieRH [2011-03-22 09:39:50 +0000 UTC]

It took me nearly 20 minutes to read the whole thing. Totally worth it though

It is quite a sharp contrast from Taz's comic (which was released in bits). Getting suddenly 13 pages at one go is a lot.

Best of luck for the final judging.

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Unu-Nunium In reply to XieRH [2011-03-22 15:38:03 +0000 UTC]

You were counting? Lol, but good to know. Thanks, I'm glad it was worth the time.

Yes... usually, I start submitting my entry's parts earlier, too, but this time I was running so short of time that I wanted to finish the whole thing first, then submit it like this so everything will be up before the deadline and I wouldn't weaster my time on the artist's comments - which I can now upload instead.

Thanks, I guess I'll need more than luck, though. ;w;

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XieRH In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-03-22 15:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Well tbh both you and Taz were churning out last minute submissions so a bit of that 20 minutes might've been me getting distracted by Taz's stuff as it filled my message inbox

I guess this is what they mean by best saved for last. Deadline ending SUDDENLY MANY SUBMISSIONS EVERYWHERE... think BFOI R3 was like that too.

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Unu-Nunium In reply to XieRH [2011-03-22 16:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's always like that. You almost can say that almost half of the entries are submitted during the last 24 hours before the deadline. xD

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Fluna [2011-03-22 08:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Woah really cool round!! You pushed yourself a lot with it and it paid out greatly!!

Best of luck with the judging ;3;!!!

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Unu-Nunium In reply to Fluna [2011-03-22 15:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Good to know you didn't waster your time reading this. *still lacks self-confidence* orz
Thank you. I am afraid this is going to be a really hard one for the judges this time. xD

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SoftKeychains [2011-03-22 08:24:23 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful story and comic
I didn't see the others entries besides Taz since I'm watching her but I'm telling that yours is my favorite! I wish all luck that victory will crow you!
I still dunno if I will enter in the next tournament, but anyway, great work!

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Unu-Nunium In reply to SoftKeychains [2011-03-22 15:42:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Reading your comment really gives me confidence to actually win this - I think when this really happened, I'd instantly die of a heart attack! But I'd die happy.

I'd really love to see you joining as well. More and more of my friends are joining these tournaments... it's going to be like a huge party!

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SoftKeychains In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-03-22 15:57:23 +0000 UTC]

You got good chances, the art is good as well the story. Sincerely, if you don't will not win this one, will be for very close.
I plan to enter to the first round, the entry card part. But if I pass and the next rounds will too much time consuming, I'm giving up (I don't like to spend too much time in fanart, lol)

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Unu-Nunium In reply to SoftKeychains [2011-03-22 17:01:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I really hope so. I'd be glad already to not get fourth placed. xD
Ah, yes. That would be great already.
But to be honest, I wouldn't even call it just "fanart". As soon as you have your own character with an own personality, it feels wrong to mark it just as fanart. You got your own ideas and in a tournament like this, you are just moving within limitations that were provided by a different source - which is, in my opinion, quite challenging. It might be true that you draw official characters by using official Pokemon but fanart still is something different for me. It's something in between, and a tournament can never be a waste of time since you are learning a lot through the challenges you have to overcome.

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SoftKeychains In reply to Unu-Nunium [2011-03-22 17:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Ya know, I say that because, no matter how much fun if our ideas and stuff, is still pokemon. And pokemon never is original stuff, is fanart. For that I'm intolerant to give effort in fanart, since....most people don't give it a damn, just draw teh pokés and you got favs like rain.

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