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Well, this one was really giving me a headacheNot sure if I should just replace the former version, but I would like to keep the process online to see the change.
Version 1
Version 2
Trying to implement ยดs advice, I reduced the grungy look a bit and made the child bigger. I feel the piece is more harmonious now.
What do you think?
EDIT: Changed the opacity of the roses a bit!
Credit:
Graphicsfairy
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Comments: 21
suruha [2012-03-01 18:00:05 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful! I love vintage roses and pearls, myself! Each version improves greatly!
If I may, the child is 'framed' on the top and left with the flowers. As there isn't such a strong 'frame' on the other two sides, bottom and left, perhaps you could lay the strand of pearls along the bottom and upward on the right; you have it that way, now. I just wonder what it would look like with the strand moved in closer towards the child more, like between the text and the child.
Ideally, you don't want something in an image drawing the eye right off the side of the piece, which is kind of what the pearls do now.
It's lovely as it is, though.
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ValerianaSolaris In reply to suruha [2012-06-01 10:13:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your thoughts on this
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Fixxen [2009-02-24 11:20:35 +0000 UTC]
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Well, I think the picture has improved a lot since the last wip - looks awesome! The necklace looks good where it is, and the roses are pretty. Bravo!
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ValerianaSolaris In reply to Fixxen [2009-02-25 07:50:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
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akela9 [2009-02-21 01:28:36 +0000 UTC]
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This looks great, hon. Huge improvement. Great job.
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ValerianaSolaris In reply to akela9 [2009-02-21 09:59:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you It was well worth the effort, and I learned a lot.
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SisstreDaethe [2009-02-20 19:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Changing the opacity made an even bigger difference than I thought it would!
Great job!!!
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ValerianaSolaris In reply to SisstreDaethe [2009-02-21 09:59:43 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, yeah, I had to try that, too, and in fact, it did! Thank you again!
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SisstreDaethe In reply to ValerianaSolaris [2009-02-21 17:40:34 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome. Even I was shocked by the huge difference it made. very great work.
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ShonenShoujoKid [2009-02-18 03:32:17 +0000 UTC]
Nice.
Really love how the flower cuts the photo in its arch and how the photo's background is color while the baby is black and...light brown? (love how it goes with the flowers) I dunno...@_@
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ValerianaSolaris In reply to ShonenShoujoKid [2009-02-18 12:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your feedback! Yeah, I added a light brown layer over the girl. Glad you like it!
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ShonenShoujoKid In reply to ShonenShoujoKid [2009-02-18 03:33:24 +0000 UTC]
Forgot to add: love the border. It emphasizes the oldiness (I HAS BAD VOCABULARY) and grace in the flowers. ^^
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ValerianaSolaris In reply to GoddessPsyche [2009-02-18 12:59:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
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GoddessPsyche In reply to ValerianaSolaris [2009-02-18 19:39:21 +0000 UTC]
You're Welcome!
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