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Description Past Sins : Are her sins really hers?

Once upon a time, a long time ago, there were two sister who were princessess.
The older one was praised and loved by all the subjects; 
The younger one never had nearly as much love and praise as her older sister. 
The Glory and Admiration towards the elder created envy in the younger one, 
Disgust, Sadness and Malice slowly creeping into her heart. 
This created the "Monster" of hatred and despair.
"The Monster" was trying to do everything to help her host, to make her beloved and praised.
But it did so without knowledge or experience, with the foolishness of a Newborn. 

This foolishness resulted in the "Monster's" and the princess' banishment from the kingdom. 

In time, the two return to the kingdom, but it was only the young princess who was forgiven her sins. 
Every shred of malice was attributed to the "Monster", said to be the source of all the evil.

Not even the fact that the "Monster" was born of the two siblings could change anything. 
Born from their mistake. Their fault. Their fight. Their sins. 
And what has "The Monster" ever done? It was only what the younger princess wanted.

So then ... are "The Monster's" sins really its?

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Comments: 229

michclskeys [2024-05-01 16:49:14 +0000 UTC]

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JUSTHEREFORTHEPONYS2 [2022-10-09 05:51:50 +0000 UTC]

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Mattthelizzerd [2022-08-04 18:25:31 +0000 UTC]

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MeowTigeress [2021-09-07 02:32:08 +0000 UTC]

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treegowth [2021-06-10 22:32:19 +0000 UTC]

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Yeetnoodlewrites [2021-03-06 04:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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CaptainRiceQuakeFox [2019-05-28 05:09:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm really dumb because I only got the "Past Sins" pun on re-read wow

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Nightmarionette123 In reply to CaptainRiceQuakeFox [2021-08-16 19:02:47 +0000 UTC]

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KaptainJay In reply to Nightmarionette123 [2021-11-19 23:36:15 +0000 UTC]

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unitedas1 In reply to KaptainJay [2021-12-28 02:48:48 +0000 UTC]

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AvoidingFever17 In reply to unitedas1 [2024-05-19 02:55:56 +0000 UTC]

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guest6ui78 [2019-05-23 00:12:22 +0000 UTC]

omg the last part KJDFAHLJFHDLKJ XDDD

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Doctorwholovesthe80s [2019-05-07 00:15:09 +0000 UTC]

o_0?!

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RECoyote [2019-02-21 20:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Well Life happens.

and with magic anything can happen.

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CosmicDrawingCat [2018-01-18 04:13:22 +0000 UTC]

All I have to say is that Princess Luna is right. It isn't just all black and white,  you have to look through different perspectives to truly understand something that you yourself did not go through. So, Princess Celestia, You are treating Princess(Whatever) Nightmare Moon the someway you have been treated for the longest time, and didn't that time just feel awful? Now look through her perspective again, let us see if you are still so confident in your statement, Hm?

Wait Why did I just write that?

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shadowfan190 [2017-06-01 14:01:09 +0000 UTC]

I love celestia's face like *BRUH*

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Wolfclaw15 In reply to shadowfan190 [2017-07-15 06:05:51 +0000 UTC]

im in tears omg

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MeowTigeress [2017-03-08 08:22:00 +0000 UTC]

   

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Antonio1sthat1Drawer [2016-12-23 07:55:42 +0000 UTC]

Hm...

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Shenronn [2016-12-07 13:37:14 +0000 UTC]

You go from serious to hilarious

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tails208 [2016-09-29 19:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Past sins??? That reminds me of a fanfic i read from penstroke

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midnightrose3000 In reply to tails208 [2016-10-13 22:00:36 +0000 UTC]

you mean about nyx??

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tails208 In reply to midnightrose3000 [2016-10-25 16:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes about nyx, i love that little filly alicorn

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midnightrose3000 In reply to tails208 [2016-10-25 17:04:20 +0000 UTC]

XD meh too!!

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foldabotZ In reply to midnightrose3000 [2016-10-16 09:07:02 +0000 UTC]

A shout-out, perhaps?

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midnightrose3000 In reply to foldabotZ [2016-10-16 19:28:14 +0000 UTC]

oh

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omnimon11 [2016-08-08 12:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Ummmm...I don't mean to make this sound weird or anything...but is the goop that Nightmare Moon's forming out of coming out of Past!Luna's plot?

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SuperCyclonePro [2016-08-07 00:59:22 +0000 UTC]

That last panel killed me! XD

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goldorakx69 [2016-08-05 07:41:57 +0000 UTC]

celestia 100000.v is broken

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matt-flameboymallon [2016-07-13 22:38:25 +0000 UTC]

The things that comes out of haste.

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bananalord666 [2016-06-02 07:25:36 +0000 UTC]

incest is wincest. *double thumbs up*

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drums0003 [2016-05-20 21:21:21 +0000 UTC]

ookey?? i didnt expect it

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Blackholelord [2016-04-20 17:27:52 +0000 UTC]

I will state that this chapter is a personal favorite when stating Moon is their daughter. Beyond funny!!!

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Flameblood6o6 [2016-03-30 03:58:58 +0000 UTC]

INCEST MUCH

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liger09 [2016-03-06 21:02:09 +0000 UTC]

cool and the summery was deep. 

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MiragePotato [2016-01-11 08:39:38 +0000 UTC]

past sins?
penstroke... is that you?

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C3ByDana [2016-01-07 17:39:02 +0000 UTC]

OMG that was AWESOME. xD Oh the adorable blunders of those two!!! Ahahahahaaaa!!! XD

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Wait0wat [2015-12-04 04:31:52 +0000 UTC]

My emotions right now are between laughter and the last panel! XD

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ToonHolt [2015-11-16 02:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow, first lesbian, now incest….what else is new?

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leebk201 In reply to ToonHolt [2016-02-22 10:01:53 +0000 UTC]

All of this are really old things.

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ToonHolt In reply to leebk201 [2016-02-22 10:28:35 +0000 UTC]

no kidding

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leebk201 In reply to ToonHolt [2016-02-22 11:11:21 +0000 UTC]

May be i am or may be i am not.

ps: i do not known.   

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cbpitts [2015-11-12 01:44:05 +0000 UTC]

*falls out chair laughing my guts out* OMG that is so funny that last panel XD LOL

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watcher25 [2015-11-10 07:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Well you both went in the weirdest direction which is why it's funny. XD

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Sturmlion1 [2015-10-27 17:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Great, congrats, now Nightmare Moon will have to fix Celestia's nightmares.

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Nickmane [2015-10-17 08:45:45 +0000 UTC]

That last panel XD

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UnicornTwilightShine [2015-10-01 02:56:10 +0000 UTC]

Lol PAST SINS!

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Uroboros18 [2015-09-25 19:50:26 +0000 UTC]

A little moona moment over there

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Martyn-Arts [2015-09-23 15:18:09 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha, brilliant characters!! I didn't need to be confused at all in the last page. Ahaha, that ending though, pfffahahha

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TheSpiritShift [2015-09-17 05:34:23 +0000 UTC]

lol I almost want to demand that you link the past sins story now that you've beaten us over the head with references.

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